A New Outlook
Rhyming couplets17 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for the New Year wishes written in this wonderful poem. I do hope you have a wonderful year. I know this year has been hard, but I am sure you will have a better year.
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Thank you for the New Year wishes written in this wonderful poem. I do hope you have a wonderful year. I know this year has been hard, but I am sure you will have a better year.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2015
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Thank you, my friend~Debbie
Comment from patcelaw
May this year be a very great year, free of depression. I suffer from depression and I know the feeling well. May God bless you with peace in your soul and in your mind. Patricia
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May this year be a very great year, free of depression. I suffer from depression and I know the feeling well. May God bless you with peace in your soul and in your mind. Patricia
Comment Written 04-Jan-2015
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After this year, I know I can make it through about anything. I hope we both have a great year, my friend~Debbie
Comment from emrpoems
You have explored all in 2014. Remember each setback is a stepping stone that you can use to reach your goal.
Well penned in rhyming couplets. Forgetting all unpleasantness of the past press forward.
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You have explored all in 2014. Remember each setback is a stepping stone that you can use to reach your goal.
Well penned in rhyming couplets. Forgetting all unpleasantness of the past press forward.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2015
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After this year, I know I can make it through about anything. I hope we both have a great year, my friend~Debbie
Comment from Alan K Pease
I hope that 2015 will be for you many episodes of joy to write about and your troubles will be small one that pass briefly without much notice. Regards Alan.
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I hope that 2015 will be for you many episodes of joy to write about and your troubles will be small one that pass briefly without much notice. Regards Alan.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2015
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Thank you so very much, my friend~Debbie
Comment from mumsyone
Debbie, I also hope that 2015 will be a better year for you. I know you faced some real problems in 2014, but I also know that you have a strong faith and that God is always with you.
Hugs,
Lois
I pray God will sends (send)
So all the best that I wish you and me
We'll live 3015 (2015) quite happily
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Debbie, I also hope that 2015 will be a better year for you. I know you faced some real problems in 2014, but I also know that you have a strong faith and that God is always with you.
Hugs,
Lois
I pray God will sends (send)
So all the best that I wish you and me
We'll live 3015 (2015) quite happily
Comment Written 04-Jan-2015
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I think my goal should be to write something spag-free. This has to be a better year. Thanks, my friend. Hugs~Debbie
Comment from royowen
Well done, Debbie, this is a beautifully composed and well written. In nice rhyming couplets, A very upbeat and optimistic work, that beams with hope and good cheer at the arrival of this new year! I sincerely join in claiming these benefits, there's a scripture in Proverbs 18:21 says "The power of life and death is in the tongue" so words have, don't let bad feelings lie to you! Well done, my friend, blessings, Roy. Suggestion,2:- 2L 2S will God send instead of sends, last stanza, 3015?
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Well done, Debbie, this is a beautifully composed and well written. In nice rhyming couplets, A very upbeat and optimistic work, that beams with hope and good cheer at the arrival of this new year! I sincerely join in claiming these benefits, there's a scripture in Proverbs 18:21 says "The power of life and death is in the tongue" so words have, don't let bad feelings lie to you! Well done, my friend, blessings, Roy. Suggestion,2:- 2L 2S will God send instead of sends, last stanza, 3015?
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Comment Written 04-Jan-2015
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Yes, I fixed the spags. I shouldn't try to post at 4:30 am. Thank you so very much my friend~Debbie
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Heh, heh, I start to flag at 1:00am,
Comment from giraffmang
I applaud your new outlook for this coming year and wish you well in it. Time to move on and close the door. Generally the poem is good with nice flow and good word choices.
Just a couple of things - should the 4th line be singular and the last line states 3015, should it not be 2015.
All the best for a better year.
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I applaud your new outlook for this coming year and wish you well in it. Time to move on and close the door. Generally the poem is good with nice flow and good word choices.
Just a couple of things - should the 4th line be singular and the last line states 3015, should it not be 2015.
All the best for a better year.
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Comment Written 04-Jan-2015
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Yes, I fixed the spags. I shouldn't try to post at 4:30 am. Thank you so very much my friend~Debbie
