A New Outlook
Rhyming couplets17 total reviews
Comment from krys123
Debbie; from your writing I believe you on the right path to discovering a whole new world for you this year. With your involvement with crafts and writing will help you develop and find your new path to follow in a positive manner throughout the new year. your rhyming was done very well and neither forced nor strained and very helpful in the rhythmic flow of your poem. The picture you have chosen was very positive and complement your poem very well. thank you for sharing and posting and good luck in the new year and may the Lord be with you always Debbie.
Alex
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2015
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Debbie; from your writing I believe you on the right path to discovering a whole new world for you this year. With your involvement with crafts and writing will help you develop and find your new path to follow in a positive manner throughout the new year. your rhyming was done very well and neither forced nor strained and very helpful in the rhythmic flow of your poem. The picture you have chosen was very positive and complement your poem very well. thank you for sharing and posting and good luck in the new year and may the Lord be with you always Debbie.
Alex
Comment Written 06-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2015
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Thank you so very much, my friend. I am looking forward to a muc better year. You have a blessed one too~ebbie
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You are so welcome Debbie
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Your poem is exactly the words that I would have written, I was so pleased to get 2014 out the way. Now we must look forward to a year that will, hopefully, be so much better. You have written this so well. I wish you the best year ever. :) sandra xsx
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2015
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Your poem is exactly the words that I would have written, I was so pleased to get 2014 out the way. Now we must look forward to a year that will, hopefully, be so much better. You have written this so well. I wish you the best year ever. :) sandra xsx
Comment Written 05-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2015
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And I wish you the same. Thank you. Take care, my friend~Debbie
Comment from kiwijenny
Debbie I want to give you a big hug for this...I will give a six instead to start your year out right......I love you and I'm sorry you have struggled,,
Have a wonderful poetic beginning
God bless
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2015
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Debbie I want to give you a big hug for this...I will give a six instead to start your year out right......I love you and I'm sorry you have struggled,,
Have a wonderful poetic beginning
God bless
Comment Written 04-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2015
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Thank you so very much for the six, but mostly for being a friend and source of support. Fanstory family is the only thing that got me through this last year. Hopefully this year I can do the same for others. Have a blessed evening. Love~Debbie
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Hugs hugs hugs
Comment from gypsycaravan
I certainly wish that 2015 will bring you the peace, calm and comfort you seek and deserve. Keep writing and know there are many of us out here enjoying your wonderfully written work. Very well done.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2015
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I certainly wish that 2015 will bring you the peace, calm and comfort you seek and deserve. Keep writing and know there are many of us out here enjoying your wonderfully written work. Very well done.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2015
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Fanstory family is the only thing that got me through this last year. Hopefully this year I can do the same for others. Have a blessed evening~Debbie
Comment from zanya
Apoem of rhyming couplets filled with anticipation and hope for what a new year and a whole new beginning can bring and with a brusque farewell to the old year as it slips away
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2015
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Apoem of rhyming couplets filled with anticipation and hope for what a new year and a whole new beginning can bring and with a brusque farewell to the old year as it slips away
Comment Written 04-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2015
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Thank you, my friend~Debbie
Comment from nancy_e_davis
I certainly hope the New Year will be kind to you Debbie. They say God will not put more on us than we can handle but sometimes it's hard to see. You have had a lot of sadness and tragedy in you life. I pray it will be better. Love. Nancy
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2015
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I certainly hope the New Year will be kind to you Debbie. They say God will not put more on us than we can handle but sometimes it's hard to see. You have had a lot of sadness and tragedy in you life. I pray it will be better. Love. Nancy
Comment Written 04-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2015
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Thank you so very much for your kind words and friendship. Fanstory is what gets me through the hard times. Hugs, my friend~Debnbie
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I know. Me too when my husband died.
Comment from rmj09
The focus of the poem, what will 2015 bring?
The rhyming carries us from line to line, as a bubbling brook flowing slowly forward.
The rhythm is as a bouncing ball pausing on each word to strengthen the meaning of the word.
The subject is relevant to the author and it;s subject depression.
The line breaks give a natural pause and a time for thought.
The writing style is serious.
The poem causes visual thinking.
Debbie, have a beautiful week. Walk within God's shadow of protection. *o* Rita
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2015
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The focus of the poem, what will 2015 bring?
The rhyming carries us from line to line, as a bubbling brook flowing slowly forward.
The rhythm is as a bouncing ball pausing on each word to strengthen the meaning of the word.
The subject is relevant to the author and it;s subject depression.
The line breaks give a natural pause and a time for thought.
The writing style is serious.
The poem causes visual thinking.
Debbie, have a beautiful week. Walk within God's shadow of protection. *o* Rita
Comment Written 04-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2015
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Thank you so very much, my friend. I appreciate your indepth review and wish you the best in the new year~~Debbie
Comment from granny goes viral
It seems 2014 was a rather trying year for many. We, who go by a calendar, fool ourselves into believing that turning the page on a big calendar will change the future. Funny huh? However, I do wish 2015 treats you well.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2015
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It seems 2014 was a rather trying year for many. We, who go by a calendar, fool ourselves into believing that turning the page on a big calendar will change the future. Funny huh? However, I do wish 2015 treats you well.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2015
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At least it gives us a few days of hope. A good year to you, my friend~Debbie
Comment from JW
This is a very upbeat, uplifting poem and I sincerely hope that 2015 will be all that you would like it to be.
As for me, life past 1/31/15 totally depends of faith and God's blessings. If He helps, like I am planning on him doing - 2015 might be a great year. If He doesn't, then ....
Thanks for sharing this, Debbie. JW
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2015
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This is a very upbeat, uplifting poem and I sincerely hope that 2015 will be all that you would like it to be.
As for me, life past 1/31/15 totally depends of faith and God's blessings. If He helps, like I am planning on him doing - 2015 might be a great year. If He doesn't, then ....
Thanks for sharing this, Debbie. JW
Comment Written 04-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2015
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Keep up the positive attitude. God helps those who help themselves. You are in my prayers, my friend~Debbie
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Debbie,
And a most blessed and calm new year to you as well, my friend. A fresh year--a fresh outlook.
FYI:: You have a stray, it looks like a -single quotation mark- between the last two paragraphs.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2015
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Hi, Debbie,
And a most blessed and calm new year to you as well, my friend. A fresh year--a fresh outlook.
FYI:: You have a stray, it looks like a -single quotation mark- between the last two paragraphs.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)
Comment Written 04-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2015
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I don't know how you saw that. I ran over my glasses with my wheelchair and am wearing old ones, so can't see very well. Thank you,my friend and I hope 2015 will be a wonderful one~Debbie
