Silent nights
Hear no evil, speak no evil, see no evil10 total reviews
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
The picture you selected to go with this
1 - 10 - 1 poem contest entry is absolutely
perfect. Sometimes the fear is seen in the
child's eyes even if the sound is muffled.
good luck in the contest
jan
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2015
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The picture you selected to go with this
1 - 10 - 1 poem contest entry is absolutely
perfect. Sometimes the fear is seen in the
child's eyes even if the sound is muffled.
good luck in the contest
jan
Comment Written 21-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2015
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thank you for reviewing.
Comment from kellyolsen
Wow! Great job! In a contest like this, where you are so limited on the choice of words you can use to paint a picture, you did a wonderful job! In so few words, you were able to hit an emotional cord...I felt concern for your subject. And using the photo of a child helped you even more. Good luck!
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2015
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Wow! Great job! In a contest like this, where you are so limited on the choice of words you can use to paint a picture, you did a wonderful job! In so few words, you were able to hit an emotional cord...I felt concern for your subject. And using the photo of a child helped you even more. Good luck!
Comment Written 20-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2015
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from misscookie
I like the artwork you chose for your poem
it is a perfect match
You got my attention from the start.
Thank you for sharing and good luck
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2015
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I like the artwork you chose for your poem
it is a perfect match
You got my attention from the start.
Thank you for sharing and good luck
Comment Written 05-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2015
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Thanks for reviewing. I liked the art work too.
Comment from Glasstruth
Very dramatic, especially if you read it slow. Fear is sometimes unconquerable, that's how powerful it can be. Like the rhyming, works real well in a short piece. The word muffled is very strong, in that it's forced on the person. Well crafted. Les
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2015
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Very dramatic, especially if you read it slow. Fear is sometimes unconquerable, that's how powerful it can be. Like the rhyming, works real well in a short piece. The word muffled is very strong, in that it's forced on the person. Well crafted. Les
Comment Written 02-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2015
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Thanks for the insightful review.
Comment from kiwijenny
Ooooo yucky yucky silent muffled screams...horrific and so horrible...
Sums up fear so completely
Well penned ,..artwork so good....
God bless
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2015
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Ooooo yucky yucky silent muffled screams...horrific and so horrible...
Sums up fear so completely
Well penned ,..artwork so good....
God bless
Comment Written 02-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2015
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Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from linsbm
The word, "fear" on the first line is sustained in the second line, and ended in justifiable close. Syllable count is perfect as per the contest requirement. A well written one. Thanks for sharing.} Lin
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2015
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The word, "fear" on the first line is sustained in the second line, and ended in justifiable close. Syllable count is perfect as per the contest requirement. A well written one. Thanks for sharing.} Lin
Comment Written 02-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2015
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Thank you for reviewing.
Comment from giraffmang
That was disturbing.
This is incredibly effective and sent a chill down my back. No mean feat in only eleven words.
Very well done and good luck with it.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2015
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That was disturbing.
This is incredibly effective and sent a chill down my back. No mean feat in only eleven words.
Very well done and good luck with it.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2015
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Thanks for the kind review.
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Happy New Year--2015
Wow, this speaks volumes. The artwork paired with your entry is really an awesome presentation. I should think it will do very well in the contest---win, win!
The best of luck in the contest.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2015
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Happy New Year--2015
Wow, this speaks volumes. The artwork paired with your entry is really an awesome presentation. I should think it will do very well in the contest---win, win!
The best of luck in the contest.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)
Comment Written 02-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2015
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Thanks for the encouraging review.
Comment from Walu Feral
G'day Anon. Great big story in a tiny little poem. You have showed a great imagination here (at least I pray it is only imagination) in this piece. Poems are getting shorter. Cheers Fez
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2015
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G'day Anon. Great big story in a tiny little poem. You have showed a great imagination here (at least I pray it is only imagination) in this piece. Poems are getting shorter. Cheers Fez
Comment Written 02-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2015
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Not a personal experience. Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
This is a creative and clever entry for the 1-10-1 contest. I think this is a difficult form to make interesting, but you have done it. Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2015
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This is a creative and clever entry for the 1-10-1 contest. I think this is a difficult form to make interesting, but you have done it. Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer
Comment Written 02-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2015
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Thank you for the encouraging review.
