The Wonder
Viewing comments for Chapter 50 "Fundamental Heritage"miscellaneous poems
6 total reviews
Comment from michaelcahill
Wow. This was mesmerizing and I'm already geared up to be mesmerized. Just amazing imagery and thought. So much truth and so much to ponder and just let flow through. I love your notes too. Music, presentation, everything. Unique. No one approaches this. I'm still in 2014. It was a good year for me, why leave. Hahaha. mikey
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2015
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Wow. This was mesmerizing and I'm already geared up to be mesmerized. Just amazing imagery and thought. So much truth and so much to ponder and just let flow through. I love your notes too. Music, presentation, everything. Unique. No one approaches this. I'm still in 2014. It was a good year for me, why leave. Hahaha. mikey
Comment Written 03-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2015
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Hi Mike...-smile- thank you Bro. I have been witness to and scarred by evil since ahh pretty much birth...but the worst was experienced through and by those who "claim" His Name, yet know not His nature or mission of mercy....only their twisted interpretations of holier than thou...separatist who've convinced themselves they alone hold heavens key...and the rest of us...? wholly unworthy of this life or the other to come. I say they resemble "Isis" more than Jesus. Happy New year Bro...big love Michael
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I know exactly what you mean. I love my little humble church. They love the little old hippie guy with long hair! The old ladies give me big hugs with lots of love. Big love back. mikey
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I'm glad for you Brother...I know there are other bodies of people who practice love instead of hate...-smile-
Comment from Pili Pubul
"There is not give for take". True , and is givers and takers... Regardless.
Powerful poem my friend , and dark ... WITH ASTOUNDING IMAGERY .it blows my mind. Hope your mind can relax sometimes... Happy new year ... love u. Pili
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2015
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"There is not give for take". True , and is givers and takers... Regardless.
Powerful poem my friend , and dark ... WITH ASTOUNDING IMAGERY .it blows my mind. Hope your mind can relax sometimes... Happy new year ... love u. Pili
Comment Written 31-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2015
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Hi tulip....smile. Yes they certainly have left impression,desecrating all they touch...may their finger prints be examined and judged accordingly .....wooooooooooo woooooooooo big love
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Smiling sadly, Art's mom died today ten minutes after we stay with her... Will not be around for a while... Love back... Pili
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okay Pili....be their for him...he needs you. I'm sorry....see you soon....love you Michael
Comment from l.raven
Hey You....you did it baby...and not to worry Michael...when you slap the Son of God...Jesus...they will answer for it...so love the way you worded this one...love your style of writing...and the picture works great...you talented you...I wish this site would give more respect Michael for the unique way you write, and brilliance of your poems...but you know that...love ya you...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2015
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Hey You....you did it baby...and not to worry Michael...when you slap the Son of God...Jesus...they will answer for it...so love the way you worded this one...love your style of writing...and the picture works great...you talented you...I wish this site would give more respect Michael for the unique way you write, and brilliance of your poems...but you know that...love ya you...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 31-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2015
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Yes they will.......believe. Ahh respect is taken never given....I'm learning. Woooooooooooo wooooooooooooo big love
Comment from livelylinda
Michael: how deep is your soul? How far does it go? Do you ever see the flowers bloom and the babies born in all their innocence? I worry about you yet feel strangely connected. Loving your words, Thunder.
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2014
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Michael: how deep is your soul? How far does it go? Do you ever see the flowers bloom and the babies born in all their innocence? I worry about you yet feel strangely connected. Loving your words, Thunder.
Comment Written 31-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2014
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Deep as eternal longs for home. as far as need be....-smile-....I see their aftereffect...on human yearn to touch beauty. Birth is as violent as death, ripped from us. I'm glad you think of me... but don't worry it wont do any good....pray He make me as cold as my enemy convinced of my righteousness...perhaps then I'll sleep. ahhh -smile- love you Michael
Comment from jlsavell
to you, another incredibly moving piece which is beautifully constructed. The reader understands what she understands, it reads as a Shakespearean tragedy and a Josephs journey bringing life and evoking all four dimensions of life.. intellectual, spiritual, emotional and visual. A beautiful work, bravo...
Love you dearly.... Jimi
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2015
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to you, another incredibly moving piece which is beautifully constructed. The reader understands what she understands, it reads as a Shakespearean tragedy and a Josephs journey bringing life and evoking all four dimensions of life.. intellectual, spiritual, emotional and visual. A beautiful work, bravo...
Love you dearly.... Jimi
Comment Written 30-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2015
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your fear of "church" ...troubled at me at first......however under study, warranted..."church" is a body of people...and where people gather in better than thou worship...war soon erupts. Whether physical or mind warp..... Worship..."church".....is a one to One experience practiced daily....in and out of buildings. You are wise to fear the influence of man made kingdoms where sand is foundation running out of time. WOOOooooOOoOoooooo WOOOoOooOoooooo BIG LOVE!!
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My fear of church? Yes, I gave a huge fear and it will never go away. Our perceptions, acquisitions, assimilations are shaped by experiences at a very early age. Now you just close your eyes and picture abandonment and abuse. And the most dastardly and disturbing thing which can happen to you at the age of 5. Entrusted to the care of those claiming to follow God. Savvy? But thank for seeing. Big love back.
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I know you've met the devil...even if you wont talk about it...and I know he scars a human soul, deep wound unforgettable....what makes it right Jimi......gives back what was taken....anything...?
Comment from lynglyng
This was a very original poem. The format and way that you designed it was very different to what I am used to seeing on FS. Thank you for sharing your excellent work.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2015
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This was a very original poem. The format and way that you designed it was very different to what I am used to seeing on FS. Thank you for sharing your excellent work.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2015
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Hi....-smile- well I tried to be them...but me....-headshake-... wont let me...-smile.....thank you sweet Lady...big love Michael-
