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A thriller set in Washington

4 total reviews 
Comment from royowen
Excellent
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A good episode Bob, the plot is becoming thicker and thicker, Arthur is convinced that Tyler Spellman is a victim, just of what is not clear, now he himself is also a target, my bet he'll find Spellman and become a mutual survivor, what a team, things are really becoming interesting, do you need help with sponsorship Bob? Well done, good write, blessings, Roy.

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2014


reply by the author on 30-Dec-2014
    Don't know about sponsorship but I sure could use a hand in finding an agent!!!

    With regard to you prediction, read on.

    Thank you again for reading and offering such valued support.

    Would you like a copy of my published novel, The Ultimate Betrayal? I'd be delighted to provide a copy as my way of thanking you for your support,

    Bob
reply by royowen on 30-Dec-2014
    Well thanks Bob, I would love one, where can I purchase one? My wife runs a book club, I don't want you to go to the expense, blessings, Roy.
Comment from TOMORAL
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

You left us hanging after the gun shot at the six star hotel. Good suspense, but I crave to know who was shot. I hope the next chapter reveals some of that. Great writing, however, it warrants a six.

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2014


reply by the author on 30-Dec-2014
    All will be revealed soon. And then, hopefully all will make sense. Thanks again for another six
Comment from Jay Squires
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Excellent chapter, Bob. Almost nitless!

Nor was there anyway of establishing the existence [Nor was there ANY WAY of establishing...]

I'm just curious, Bob, about the choice of the name "Arthur Ashe", the actual famous American tennis player.

Your novel is growing in depth and complexity. It's become one of my favorite novels here on FanStory.

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2014


reply by the author on 30-Dec-2014
    Have corrected the error. The choice of name was deliberate, and I felt appropriate with the background of his parents.

    Thank you for the compliment in the last sentence
Comment from JanetRussek
Excellent
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Bob, you're killing me. The suspense is brutal. Tell me just one thing. Can Arthur really trust ANYONE?

Warm Regards,
Janet

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2014


reply by the author on 30-Dec-2014
    When dealing with bureaucrats or politicians I'm not sure if anyone can be trusted. And the same applies to those in the intelligence services.

    In fact the only one you can trust is the writer!!!!