Freaks & Geeks
It's One Hell of a Carnival32 total reviews
Comment from Neonewman
Oh the thrills the freak shows cast upon its willing participants. I remember those tents as a child and how scary they seemed to be at the time. Now, of course in this time and age it all seems a bit disgruntled. I loved this masterfully crafted piece you delivered into this write a ghost story writing prompt and wish you nothing but the Gold (teeth or fangs) lol!
Good luck my friend.
God bless!
Steve
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reply by the author on 28-Dec-2014
Oh the thrills the freak shows cast upon its willing participants. I remember those tents as a child and how scary they seemed to be at the time. Now, of course in this time and age it all seems a bit disgruntled. I loved this masterfully crafted piece you delivered into this write a ghost story writing prompt and wish you nothing but the Gold (teeth or fangs) lol!
Good luck my friend.
God bless!
Steve
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Comment Written 28-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2014
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Thanks, Steve. Much obliged, my friend. :}
Comment from Dr. Nad
"Ghosts & Geeks" is a fine read. I have read this scary tale twice so I am at an advantage. The diversity of your subjects and their arenas spurred my interest. You have developed your characters nicely and can see their tension and their playful pursuit of mystery and intrigue. You used contrasting dialects and professions to great advantage. I don't know where this journey is going to take your character "Lenny Thanks for SHARING!
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reply by the author on 28-Dec-2014
"Ghosts & Geeks" is a fine read. I have read this scary tale twice so I am at an advantage. The diversity of your subjects and their arenas spurred my interest. You have developed your characters nicely and can see their tension and their playful pursuit of mystery and intrigue. You used contrasting dialects and professions to great advantage. I don't know where this journey is going to take your character "Lenny Thanks for SHARING!
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Comment Written 28-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2014
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Thank you for reading it, Doc. I doubt very much if it will take him any further than what you've read. I hadn't really considered expanding upon it.
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You are very welcome,
Embrace the Love from above!