The Luncheon
courtesy goes a long way23 total reviews
Comment from country ranch writer
SOUNDS ABOUT RIGHT WHY NOT THEY HAVE TO HAVE SOMETHING TO BITCH ABOUT EVEN IF IT IS AMONG EACH OTHER THEY HAVE TO BE TACTFUL TO THE PUBLIC
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2014
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SOUNDS ABOUT RIGHT WHY NOT THEY HAVE TO HAVE SOMETHING TO BITCH ABOUT EVEN IF IT IS AMONG EACH OTHER THEY HAVE TO BE TACTFUL TO THE PUBLIC
Comment Written 28-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2014
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Thanks for the read.
Comment from Dr. Nad
This is an ostentatious little story I have read. The diversity of your subjects and their arenas spurred my interest. You have developed your characters nicely and can see their tension and their playful pursuit of mystery and intrigue. You are using contrasting classes and professions to great advantage. I didn't see the final twist coming: "They work for The Post--writers of the longest running etiquette column in the country." Thanks for SHARING!
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reply by the author on 28-Dec-2014
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This is an ostentatious little story I have read. The diversity of your subjects and their arenas spurred my interest. You have developed your characters nicely and can see their tension and their playful pursuit of mystery and intrigue. You are using contrasting classes and professions to great advantage. I didn't see the final twist coming: "They work for The Post--writers of the longest running etiquette column in the country." Thanks for SHARING!
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Comment Written 28-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2014
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Appreciate the read and the review.
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You are very welcome,
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Comment from Patti R.
Ah, this made me laugh!
I'm sure I've served these women before - can't believe they're still alive. Such poor etiquette. They can barely stand to be in one another's company. And yet they obviously know each other incredibly well. Nicely written flash story. And the ending did surprise me.
When I laugh out loud the write deserves a six, no question!
Good luck in the contest.
Patti
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2014
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Ah, this made me laugh!
I'm sure I've served these women before - can't believe they're still alive. Such poor etiquette. They can barely stand to be in one another's company. And yet they obviously know each other incredibly well. Nicely written flash story. And the ending did surprise me.
When I laugh out loud the write deserves a six, no question!
Good luck in the contest.
Patti
Comment Written 28-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2014
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When I can create laughter, it is my humblest pleasure and greatest gift. Thanks for that and the stars.
