Finding Daisy
Viewing comments for Chapter 38 "Confrontation"Another Ess and Oz comic fantasy
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Comment from Adri7enne
"Oz ARRIVED at the library asmost as soon as she ARRIVED." I might work to elliminate one of those.
"my incandescent amazon." LOL! I bet you just drop some of these all the time. Careful you don't get yourself shot one of these days. LOL! Good thing Britain isn't a gun-carrying nation. LOL!
"I said, I'm not in the mood." LOL! I think Oz is an angel to put up with her crap. He thrives on it, doesn't he? LOL! I gotta find me one a those! LOL!
"studiously avoiding her eye." You do make me chuckle.
Fun exchange over the meaning of "fairy". I figured that was bound to come up sooner or later. LOL!
Good stuff, snod. You always manage to entertain me and give me a few chuckles.
Have a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year, snod.
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2014
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"Oz ARRIVED at the library asmost as soon as she ARRIVED." I might work to elliminate one of those.
"my incandescent amazon." LOL! I bet you just drop some of these all the time. Careful you don't get yourself shot one of these days. LOL! Good thing Britain isn't a gun-carrying nation. LOL!
"I said, I'm not in the mood." LOL! I think Oz is an angel to put up with her crap. He thrives on it, doesn't he? LOL! I gotta find me one a those! LOL!
"studiously avoiding her eye." You do make me chuckle.
Fun exchange over the meaning of "fairy". I figured that was bound to come up sooner or later. LOL!
Good stuff, snod. You always manage to entertain me and give me a few chuckles.
Have a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year, snod.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2014
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Thanks. I'll look at the clunsy line. Yes, Oz puts up with a lot, but so does Ess. I think they're like pimples to each other; you miss them when they're gone
Comment from CR Delport
Don't mess with Ess. She was so sure Davenport was a fairy, but had to concede that he was human, but she still suspects him of being involved. This is well written and makes for interesting reading.
Have a great day.
Christelle.
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2014
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Don't mess with Ess. She was so sure Davenport was a fairy, but had to concede that he was human, but she still suspects him of being involved. This is well written and makes for interesting reading.
Have a great day.
Christelle.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2014
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You're very kind, thanks
Comment from c_lucas
Sometimes it doesn't pay to run with the first ball you get. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read.
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2014
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Sometimes it doesn't pay to run with the first ball you get. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2014
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Thanks. Interesting is all an author can hope for
