He left His throne
God's odyssey80 total reviews
Comment from ravim
Time perfection
Words symbolise deepest emotion
Rhythm that never wavers
Faith too lofty for thoughts' disfavour
A gem of a poem, even without getting into the spiritual part of it. I loved every word you spoke. It resonates. Yes, it does.
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2014
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Time perfection
Words symbolise deepest emotion
Rhythm that never wavers
Faith too lofty for thoughts' disfavour
A gem of a poem, even without getting into the spiritual part of it. I loved every word you spoke. It resonates. Yes, it does.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2014
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Thank you so much for this wonderful review and beaut comments, blessings of the season to you and yours, Roy.
Comment from Oatmeal
ROYOWEN,
Very reflective, all thoughts are very well described, understandable and comprehensible. The flow was good. The theme was excellent! Your descriptive words were very good for explaining your ideas and your feelings.
There was no SPAG. No room for improvement.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2014
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ROYOWEN,
Very reflective, all thoughts are very well described, understandable and comprehensible. The flow was good. The theme was excellent! Your descriptive words were very good for explaining your ideas and your feelings.
There was no SPAG. No room for improvement.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
Comment Written 22-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2014
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Thank you so much for the wonderful review and great comments, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Zinnia48
Your telling of the Christmas story is simple and direct. They rhythm and rhyme carry us through the story with joy. You told it without embellishment which added to its appeal. Thank you! Caroline
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2014
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Your telling of the Christmas story is simple and direct. They rhythm and rhyme carry us through the story with joy. You told it without embellishment which added to its appeal. Thank you! Caroline
Comment Written 22-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2014
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Thank you Caroline, for your most generous words and great review, blessings, Roy.
Comment from emrpoems
These last lines sum up the feeling of a christian perfectly
How could I ever run from Him
or find another way,
He's captured every part of me
my soul, my heart, my day.
strong message of faith and gratitude
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2014
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These last lines sum up the feeling of a christian perfectly
How could I ever run from Him
or find another way,
He's captured every part of me
my soul, my heart, my day.
strong message of faith and gratitude
Comment Written 22-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2014
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Thank you so much for the most wonderful review and empathetic review my friend, blessings, Roy.
Comment from nancyjam
Roy this is a beautiful expression of faith
and a lovely way to tell Christ's story.
Rhyme and meter are well crafted.
I wish you and your family a blessed and joyful Christmas. Nancy
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2014
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Roy this is a beautiful expression of faith
and a lovely way to tell Christ's story.
Rhyme and meter are well crafted.
I wish you and your family a blessed and joyful Christmas. Nancy
Comment Written 22-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2014
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And to you and yours, Nancy lovely review and comments, best wishes and merry Christmas to you and yours, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Writingfundimension
This quatrain especially resonated with me, Roy:
'For some said He's the Son of God
or just another man
but I say He's my Savior Lord
who died my sin to ban...'
Beautifully expressed, Roy, and most inspiring.
Merry Christmas,
Bev
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2014
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This quatrain especially resonated with me, Roy:
'For some said He's the Son of God
or just another man
but I say He's my Savior Lord
who died my sin to ban...'
Beautifully expressed, Roy, and most inspiring.
Merry Christmas,
Bev
Comment Written 22-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2014
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Thanks Bev, for these lovely comments and a great review, blessings, Roy.
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You're most welcome, Roy. It's always a pleasure to read your poetry. :) Bev
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Thank you Bev.
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You're most welcome, Roy. :) Bev
Comment from acerisestory
This is a wonderful poem, Roy, a strong and impactful expression of your strong and abiding faith. Your abcb rhyming is perfect, and you've made great use of alliteration to promote the flow of your well chosen words.
I am particularly moved by your last stanza:
"How could I ever run from him
or find another way,
He's captured every part of me
my soul, my heart, my day."
Lovely! Have a wonderful Christmas, my friend. Alana
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2014
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This is a wonderful poem, Roy, a strong and impactful expression of your strong and abiding faith. Your abcb rhyming is perfect, and you've made great use of alliteration to promote the flow of your well chosen words.
I am particularly moved by your last stanza:
"How could I ever run from him
or find another way,
He's captured every part of me
my soul, my heart, my day."
Lovely! Have a wonderful Christmas, my friend. Alana
Comment Written 22-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2014
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Thank you for these wonderful words, the most uplifting review and encouragement, blessings and merry Christmas to you and yours, dear Alana, Roy.
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You are welcome, Roy! Alana
Comment from Alan K Pease
Walking with God, surrendering to Jesus for the reasons He was here, consoled by His message brought forth by Isaiah 9:6. Excellent poetry well rhymed.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2014
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Walking with God, surrendering to Jesus for the reasons He was here, consoled by His message brought forth by Isaiah 9:6. Excellent poetry well rhymed.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2014
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Thank you Alan for the outstanding review, comments and stars, blessings and merry Christmas to you and yours, Roy.
Comment from Dave Russell
This is a beautifully written expression of your faith Roy. It is a wondrous thing that Jesus did for all of us. None of us was deserving of his enormous sacrifice, yet he freely made it. As we remember his birth in this season, let me just say Merry Christmas, and may God's love fill your home with its warmth.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2014
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This is a beautifully written expression of your faith Roy. It is a wondrous thing that Jesus did for all of us. None of us was deserving of his enormous sacrifice, yet he freely made it. As we remember his birth in this season, let me just say Merry Christmas, and may God's love fill your home with its warmth.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2014
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Thank you Dave, for this wonderful Review, outstanding comments and lovely well wishes and the same to you my friend, blessings Roy.
Comment from JaySee
Another beautiful poem Roy! I don't think that there was a single line that I did not enjoy or find any fault with. You just keep turning out good ones! I think that the last stanza was my favorite; especially the last two lines. "He's captured every part of me" seems to perfectly sum up the Christian faith and what Jesus does for us. I don't see any issues whatsoever. The poem just shows how Jesus was, and is, a man of humility and simple living who made the ultimate sacrifice. Great job.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2014
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Another beautiful poem Roy! I don't think that there was a single line that I did not enjoy or find any fault with. You just keep turning out good ones! I think that the last stanza was my favorite; especially the last two lines. "He's captured every part of me" seems to perfectly sum up the Christian faith and what Jesus does for us. I don't see any issues whatsoever. The poem just shows how Jesus was, and is, a man of humility and simple living who made the ultimate sacrifice. Great job.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2014
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I guess He's the one God wants us to emulate, what an honour! Thanks also for the stunning comments and review, merry Christmas to you and yours, blessings, Roy.
