G'ma got revenge over by a Reindeer
Granny survived and became a killin' machine!33 total reviews
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very clever twist on the song. it was a fun read. You do have a keen imagination or maybe you were the granny who go run over by the reindeer and want pay back. Good luck in the contest. Patricia
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reply by the author on 21-Dec-2014
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This is a very clever twist on the song. it was a fun read. You do have a keen imagination or maybe you were the granny who go run over by the reindeer and want pay back. Good luck in the contest. Patricia
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Comment Written 21-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2014
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Thanks, Pat. Much obliged!
~Merry Christmas! :}
Comment from Domino 2
OK, 'mystery writer ('D') - your sucky-up notes have won me over. LOL.
Do you mean, 'Jack Daniels' in 5th line, or is this a special Granny moonshine recipe? ;-)
Grandma's twisted and extreme killing spree revenge should cause all parents to celebrate, as what's the point of kids writing to a deceased Santa, asking for expensive pressies? Hohoho.
Much fun read, my friend, and a very Merry Christmas to you, too.
Cheers, Ray
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reply by the author on 21-Dec-2014
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OK, 'mystery writer ('D') - your sucky-up notes have won me over. LOL.
Do you mean, 'Jack Daniels' in 5th line, or is this a special Granny moonshine recipe? ;-)
Grandma's twisted and extreme killing spree revenge should cause all parents to celebrate, as what's the point of kids writing to a deceased Santa, asking for expensive pressies? Hohoho.
Much fun read, my friend, and a very Merry Christmas to you, too.
Cheers, Ray
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Comment Written 21-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2014
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Thanks, Rayman. I appreciate the review, buddy! Thanks too for the "Jack fix". How the hell'd I screw that one up, I wonder? maybe I should lay off the Jack Daniels' myself when writing poetry, LOL.
Thanks again! :)
Comment from Herkjv1611
The poem really made me laugh.Though is a fiction prose, this is a good kind. A grandma got revenge on reindeer. She underwent an injured leg. This is a country home in the woods during wintertime. Can Grandma really come out on Christmas eve and bring her gun to shoot reindeers? So funny.. Thank you so much for an even enjoyment of such prose. I like it.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2014
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The poem really made me laugh.Though is a fiction prose, this is a good kind. A grandma got revenge on reindeer. She underwent an injured leg. This is a country home in the woods during wintertime. Can Grandma really come out on Christmas eve and bring her gun to shoot reindeers? So funny.. Thank you so much for an even enjoyment of such prose. I like it.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2014
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Thank you very much, cutomampa. I'm really very happy that you enjoyed it. :)
