Two Hundred Word Stories-2 for 1
The prompts are afraid of me!!!!!27 total reviews
Comment from kiwijenny
Two for one...oh no you have raised the bar...you mean we all must post two from now on and kiss. Omelette strangers.....I meant kiss complete strangers...omelette came from word correct. :o) I liked both your posts
God bless...but you have raised the bar...even if it is called Roseanne:o)
  |
Two for one...oh no you have raised the bar...you mean we all must post two from now on and kiss. Omelette strangers.....I meant kiss complete strangers...omelette came from word correct. :o) I liked both your posts
God bless...but you have raised the bar...even if it is called Roseanne:o)
Comment Written 23-Dec-2014
Comment from ravenblack
I really like your first story, a fully-realized piece of flash fiction. If you haven't, pick up a flash fiction collection by Amy Hemple.
|
I really like your first story, a fully-realized piece of flash fiction. If you haven't, pick up a flash fiction collection by Amy Hemple.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2014
Comment from CR Delport
Mikey, as always, your stories are very touching and gives the reader something to smile about. Sorry you couldn't enter it, but it is still good.
Have a great day.
Christelle.
|
Mikey, as always, your stories are very touching and gives the reader something to smile about. Sorry you couldn't enter it, but it is still good.
Have a great day.
Christelle.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2014
Comment from Zinnia48
Mikey--I liked the first one the best. What a sad, sweet precious story. You gave us the full arc of that relationship from the beginning to that last encounter. It's a shame that it didn't meet contest criteria, because it's a real winner! Caroline
|
Mikey--I liked the first one the best. What a sad, sweet precious story. You gave us the full arc of that relationship from the beginning to that last encounter. It's a shame that it didn't meet contest criteria, because it's a real winner! Caroline
Comment Written 21-Dec-2014
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Mike,
your first story was a sad and clever write... to pump in such emotion between the lines was impressive.
Doin' time for Rosie would have had to have been something special to out do 'Her first kiss' but your wacky sense of humor shone through... two stories, two hundred words and twice the entertainment... well done.
All the best to you and your family through these Christmas and New Year holiday celebrations... be safe and well.
With our thoughts we create,
drifting memories,
James.
|
Hi Mike,
your first story was a sad and clever write... to pump in such emotion between the lines was impressive.
Doin' time for Rosie would have had to have been something special to out do 'Her first kiss' but your wacky sense of humor shone through... two stories, two hundred words and twice the entertainment... well done.
All the best to you and your family through these Christmas and New Year holiday celebrations... be safe and well.
With our thoughts we create,
drifting memories,
James.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2014
Comment from patcelaw
I really like the first story. It was a some what sad story though. Blessings for a Merry Christmas and a Very Happy New Year. Patricia
|
I really like the first story. It was a some what sad story though. Blessings for a Merry Christmas and a Very Happy New Year. Patricia
Comment Written 20-Dec-2014
Comment from Genya
I call this really good value for money. Two great 100 word stories. Loved them both but if I had to choose, and I dont I would have to say the first story was brilliant. Fifty years later...you leaned forward and kissed her. Who is this man...the nurse said, this is your husband. Wow, so very touching and heartfelt. Thank you so much for sharing these two well written short stories. Genya
|
I call this really good value for money. Two great 100 word stories. Loved them both but if I had to choose, and I dont I would have to say the first story was brilliant. Fifty years later...you leaned forward and kissed her. Who is this man...the nurse said, this is your husband. Wow, so very touching and heartfelt. Thank you so much for sharing these two well written short stories. Genya
Comment Written 20-Dec-2014
Comment from robina1978
Nice photo's that complement your stories very well. I liked the first one best, it so like reality when someone gets demented. The second story I had problems with the dialect.
|
Nice photo's that complement your stories very well. I liked the first one best, it so like reality when someone gets demented. The second story I had problems with the dialect.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2014
Comment from Kingsland
You have two separate stories here that don't seem to be related, but both of them are well written and very entertaining. I found both of these story line to be excellent story lines. I enjoyed reading both of them... John
|
You have two separate stories here that don't seem to be related, but both of them are well written and very entertaining. I found both of these story line to be excellent story lines. I enjoyed reading both of them... John
Comment Written 20-Dec-2014
Comment from nordicgirl
Wow. A nice bonus. The two sides of Mikey. A beautiful serious take on Alzheimer's. And then a hilarious zany take on a deluded stalker written to perfection. I have the feeling their is more than a little truth in the second one.....
 |
Wow. A nice bonus. The two sides of Mikey. A beautiful serious take on Alzheimer's. And then a hilarious zany take on a deluded stalker written to perfection. I have the feeling their is more than a little truth in the second one.....
Comment Written 20-Dec-2014
