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The Mother-To-Be

The many changes in a woman's body during pregnancy

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Comment from TAB_that's me
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I am 5'1" and when I was pregnant, the baby stuck straight out. When I was only 5 months along, people would make comments about the baby being due any minute. Great poem - I enjoyed it - it brought back those memories:)
teresa

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2014


reply by the author on 22-Dec-2014
    Thank you for your comments and rating. I'm glad you enjoyed it. May you have a wonderful Christmas.
Comment from tfawcus
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This interesting poem tells not only of the coming birth, but of the mother's re-birth as she truly blossoms into womanhood. Such an appropriate poem for the time of year. Wishing you a happy Christmas and a joyful delivery.

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2014


reply by the author on 22-Dec-2014
    Thank you for your comments and generous rating. My delivery was long, painful, drug less, natural and 39 years ago. My son weighed 11lb. 12 oz. and I'd like to say it was all him... but that would be a lie. Even after 39 years, I still retain 'baby weight'. I hope you and your family have a wonderful Christmas too.
Comment from MelB
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I think every mother-to-be can relate to this feeling. I remember it well, along with sickness and toxemia. She is definitely ready to get her own body back. Seems like it never goes completely back to the way it was, but pretty close. Hope the rest goes well or did if baby was already born.

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2014


reply by the author on 22-Dec-2014
    Thank you for your comments and generous rating. Our son was 11lbs. 12oz. The delivery was long, drug less, painful, natural and 39 years ago. All went well. Thanks for asking. I hope you have a wonderful Christmas.
reply by MelB on 22-Dec-2014
    Wow! That is a big baby! Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!
reply by Anonymous Member on 22-Dec-2014
    Wow! That is a big baby! Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
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Hi, Quoiky,

This brings back memories when I couldn't see my feet, let alone get of out a chair without help the last month. Nothing like being preggers to put things into perspective! LOL

Fun read and walk down memory lane.

*Season's Greetings*

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*;*)


 Comment Written 21-Dec-2014


reply by the author on 22-Dec-2014
    Thank you for your comments and your generous rating. I hope ya'll have a Merry Christmas and happy New Year.
Comment from BLACKDYKE
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A lovely, funny finish after a rollicking shorty. Pregnancy is a complete mystery to me as I am a man. Even so I appreciate all the intricacies of preparing for motherhood. I am a great-g Dad after all. I have wondered often though, how women do not have a resulting bent back after the extreme exertions of pregnancy. A joy to read and appreciate. Eric

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2014


reply by the author on 21-Dec-2014
    Thank you so very much for your comments and such a generous rating. Wow! You just made my Christmas. Thanks again and I hope you and your family have a wonderful Christmas.
Comment from Joan E.
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Welcome to FanStory--I hope the site has been fulfilling your goals for membership.

That's quite an attention grabbing artwork--so is your profile picture! I enjoyed your rhymed, six-line stanzas and your punchline. Cheers- Joan

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2014


reply by the author on 21-Dec-2014
    Thank you for your comments, your generous rating, and your warm welcome. Yes, FanStory has been wonderful! I love it more than FaceBook.....and that's saying something. I hope you and your family have a wonderful Christmas.
reply by Joan E. on 23-Dec-2014
    I'm glad to here you are as addicted as I was when I joined seven years ago. Merry, merry- Joan
Comment from kiwisteveh
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Your body may thin
to the size it's bin,
but the truth is cruel and stark,
that you've been changed
yes, re-arranged,
Please meet the ol' stretch mark!

Nice piece of fun.

Welcome to fanStory!

Steve

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2014


reply by the author on 21-Dec-2014
    Ha ha ha! I appreciate your ending. Maybe I'll incorporate it. Thanks for your comments. I hope you and your family have a wonderful Christmas.
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
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Ha Ha Yep... I've been there too although not so much of the wide problem since I'm 5 foot eight, well used to be! The way I'm shrinking and by the way my bones are crumbling could easily end up your height! Don't envy me, I used to get all the high windows to clean!

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2014


reply by the author on 21-Dec-2014
    Thank you for your comments and generous rating. Please accept my apology for your 'tallness'. I always wanted to be at least 5'10", but now that I've read your comments, maybe not. I hate washing windows. I hope you and your family have a wonderful Christmas.
Comment from Glasstruth
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LOL. It's great when someone can make fun of themselves and laugh along with the reader. The last line really finishes this off in a great fashion. Wonderfully written. Les

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2014


reply by the author on 21-Dec-2014
    Thank you for your comments and very generous rating. I hope you and your family have a wonderful Christmas.
Comment from pipersfancy
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Oh - how I can relate. I think that forcing a mother to swell up as large as a blimp is nature's way of preparing us for birth... at some point, I didn't really care HOW it happened, but I wanted that baby OUT!

Well rhymed, clever phrasing and rhyme scheme! Thank you for bringing back all those delightful memories! (NOT!)

Warm regards,
Christina

 Comment Written 20-Dec-2014


reply by the author on 21-Dec-2014
    Thank you for your comments and generous rating. Sorry for the memories. I hope you and your family have a wonderful Christmas.