Texas Dream Catcher
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Comment from Sankey
Glad to see you back. Love your writing as always. This is plenty exciting and I am reall looking forward to where this all goes. Only one suggested change....When Jim (-walked) returned to the living room,
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Glad to see you back. Love your writing as always. This is plenty exciting and I am reall looking forward to where this all goes. Only one suggested change....When Jim (-walked) returned to the living room,
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reply by the author on 14-Dec-2014
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I have fixed that area. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Ooo la la! I love the photo of Jim you found. I'd ride with him any time. ;)
Good episode. I'm glad Tat is mad at Alex for not going to help Soni. Made me angry too! But it's more romantic with just she and Jim alone, sleeping under the stars. Good move. :)
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Ooo la la! I love the photo of Jim you found. I'd ride with him any time. ;)
Good episode. I'm glad Tat is mad at Alex for not going to help Soni. Made me angry too! But it's more romantic with just she and Jim alone, sleeping under the stars. Good move. :)
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Comment Written 14-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and you have it figured out. I wanted Jim and Soni to have a new respect for each other. Maybe Soni will begin to trust him.
Comment from c_lucas
To keep their clothes dry, the cowboy often undress and held their clothes over their head when crossing deep water. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. Wishing you and yours a very Merry Christmas.
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To keep their clothes dry, the cowboy often undress and held their clothes over their head when crossing deep water. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. Wishing you and yours a very Merry Christmas.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2014
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Or they just wanted sexy pictures taken. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
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You're welcome, Barbara. Charlie
