Comment from Maureen's Pen

Excellent

Dear Tom - my he is so cute!! Excellent poem, impressive rhyme and overall a beauty. I just love the picture of him, so adorable it outshines your poem my friend- only a little. LOL
Thanks for sharing,
Maureen

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 16-Dec-2014

Thank you, Maureen. Kids do have a way of stealing the show. lol.

Comment from Shirley E Kennedy

Exceptional

Impressive haircut indeed. What a little cutie.
An interesting style which has been achieved with
flair and a degree of difficulty in style choice.
:-) Shirley

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Dec-2014

Thank you Shirley. He is a cute little devil.

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

Thank you for passing on the favor and introducing me to the Ends' Edge poem and your grandson's trendy hairstyle! It can't be easy to accomplish these rhymes, but you did it with flair! I also enjoyed the echoing sounds in the title. Taking neat photos runs in your family too! Happy remains of Sunday- Joan

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Dec-2014

Thank you so much Joan. Always glad to hear from you and get your excellent reviews.

Comment from rod007

Excellent

What a cute baby boy and he looks so pensive and 'debonair.' I liked these lines which was a great play of words and tangled with the picture of his hair:
"Took of your hair,
Where the ends mistook
Hook for flair. "
Well done, Tom.

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Dec-2014

Thank you rod. Yeah, i lines those thoughts too.

Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT

Excellent

Cute lil diddy about a very cute lil kid... Different format but that causes you no worry as always your words come through with piszas or is that pizza ? lol
TK

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Dec-2014

Thank you Sir T, both are delightful , but pizza is tasty.

Comment from mmichelle97219

Excellent

I wouldn't call it children's poetry as that would be a poem specifically targeting children, but I do have to say I liked it. Its fun has a wonderful meter and roll beautifully off the tongue. Nice job.

Happy writing.
Michelle

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Dec-2014

Thank you Michelke. I agree. Ill change it to "Family".

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

I can remember Gungalo using it. I do miss her. I love the photo of your lovely grandson, Tom, love his hair style. Your poem worked so well in this style, it was upbeat and funny. A pleasure as always to read, my friend. xsx Sandra

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Dec-2014

Thank you Sabdra. I miss her a lot too.