Assuming vs Knowing
Hidden truths in life...17 total reviews
Comment from Dean Kuch
Wow. It is no wonder that this wonderfully penned monostich poem won the contest, PUPA. It's magnificent, both in presentation as well as your eloquent, carefully chosen choice of words. The entire composition is Grade A+, and wonderfully done.
Congratulations on you contest conquest, and I sincerely hope you have a happy, healthy and very prosperous New Year!
~Dean
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2015
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Wow. It is no wonder that this wonderfully penned monostich poem won the contest, PUPA. It's magnificent, both in presentation as well as your eloquent, carefully chosen choice of words. The entire composition is Grade A+, and wonderfully done.
Congratulations on you contest conquest, and I sincerely hope you have a happy, healthy and very prosperous New Year!
~Dean
Comment Written 31-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2015
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Thanks Dean, I appreciate your very encouraging review. Glad you liked it.
Happy New Year.
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Pupa
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Sure thing, anytime. Happy New Year to you as well, PUPA. :)
Comment from fastdigits
It has indeed been a long time. Welcome back, and as always, even in one short line, you impart such wisdom in our everyday lives, yes, there is that difference in our assumptions vs our knowing. The art work you chose is magnificent, but
pale in the beauty of your simple words.
Well done and I see that indeed you were the winner of this contest.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2015
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It has indeed been a long time. Welcome back, and as always, even in one short line, you impart such wisdom in our everyday lives, yes, there is that difference in our assumptions vs our knowing. The art work you chose is magnificent, but
pale in the beauty of your simple words.
Well done and I see that indeed you were the winner of this contest.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2015
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Thanks fastdigits, sorry for the delay. Happy New Year.
Love
Pupa
Comment from giraffmang
I thought this was very clever and the title fitted perfectly. It was actually this poem that inspired me to enter the contest as well. A great concept / idea expressed with so little words.
GMG
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2014
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I thought this was very clever and the title fitted perfectly. It was actually this poem that inspired me to enter the contest as well. A great concept / idea expressed with so little words.
GMG
Comment Written 14-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2014
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Thank you for your very encouraging review and rating.
Love
Pupa
Comment from Ekim777
A marvelously poetic line only obliquely relating to the title because it is the mind alone that might confuse the concepts of assuming and knowing whereas the creation of poetry entails so much more. Does not a poem need that much more understanding? -Ekim777
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2014
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A marvelously poetic line only obliquely relating to the title because it is the mind alone that might confuse the concepts of assuming and knowing whereas the creation of poetry entails so much more. Does not a poem need that much more understanding? -Ekim777
Comment Written 13-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2014
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Thanks for your review. I just did not get what such a short one line poem needs more understanding?
Love
Pupa
Comment from kiwijenny
Well, this one line is beautiful. And I think for me the bird is singing although right now I am hearing what sounds like sea gulls squabbling.
I guess it depends on the bird.. :o)
God bless
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2014
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Well, this one line is beautiful. And I think for me the bird is singing although right now I am hearing what sounds like sea gulls squabbling.
I guess it depends on the bird.. :o)
God bless
Comment Written 13-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2014
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Thank you for your very encouraging review and rating.
Love
Pupa
Comment from Brabazon
The message is important when one remembers that assumptions are sins or unjust since they could serve as a foundation for a regretable action.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2014
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The message is important when one remembers that assumptions are sins or unjust since they could serve as a foundation for a regretable action.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2014
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Thank you for your very encouraging review and rating.
Love
Pupa
Comment from Dr. Nad
"Assuming vs Knowing" is a rare piece that is so pithy, witty and yet delivers a poignant cautionary message to all who might be self assured. Dare I say you NAILED it? May God Bless You. Merry Christmas.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2014
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"Assuming vs Knowing" is a rare piece that is so pithy, witty and yet delivers a poignant cautionary message to all who might be self assured. Dare I say you NAILED it? May God Bless You. Merry Christmas.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2014
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Thank you for your very encouraging review and rating.
Love
Pupa
You are very welcome,
Embrace the Love from above!
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
I once heard a bird that sounded like a cat meowing, so no doubt it is possible for one to sound like crying, especially the crying of a baby. I find bird calls very interesting. Best wishes for the competition.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2014
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I once heard a bird that sounded like a cat meowing, so no doubt it is possible for one to sound like crying, especially the crying of a baby. I find bird calls very interesting. Best wishes for the competition.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2014
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Thank you for your very encouraging review and rating.
Love
Pupa
Comment from Ben Colder
Jay calling against the wind sometimes can seem to be a baby cry off in the diatance. Your poem is right on. Thank for sharing. Glad you are back. Blessings to you.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2014
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Jay calling against the wind sometimes can seem to be a baby cry off in the diatance. Your poem is right on. Thank for sharing. Glad you are back. Blessings to you.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2014
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Thank you for your very encouraging review and rating.
Love
Pupa
Comment from lancellot
Yes, from a distance things may appear one way, and actually be another. This poem is very timely in today's world where so many of us jump to conclusions in a heartbeat. Well said
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2014
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Yes, from a distance things may appear one way, and actually be another. This poem is very timely in today's world where so many of us jump to conclusions in a heartbeat. Well said
Comment Written 12-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2014
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Thanks again for a great review and generous rating.
