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Let's Talk Dirty!

Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Time to catch up"
The story about three women who need to make money

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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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I've never heard of that drink, sounded nice! I thought I had read this before, it all sounded so familiar. Yet I haven't reviewed it. Anyway, now to find out what the girls get up to. :) Sandra

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2015
    I don't like whiskey, but I have to admit it's a cocktail I'd have again. Many thanks for your great reviews. Alexis xxx
Comment from rwilliam
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By the end of the evening, the three of them were getting on like a house on fire,--LOVE this line!

Good chapter. I'm feeling the despair of these three poor women, and the pain of their livers, ha ha ha. :-)


 Comment Written 12-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 13-Jan-2015
    It mist be a British expression because we use it often. I'm so glad you're enjoying it so far, especially as it's all a bit gloomy at the start. Never mind, the fun begins soon! Thank you again. Alexis x
Comment from Edward J
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This was an enjoyable read. Your characters come alive with the use of dialogue. The dialogue is natural and easy to read. I thought when you got into Laura's head (such as the old fashion commentary) it got even stronger. We get to know her more.

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2014


reply by the author on 15-Dec-2014
    I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for your lovely review. Alexis x
Comment from nancy_e_davis
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Don't apologize I needed the refreshment course I guess.
I don't really remember this one although parts of it seemed familiar. Are we about caught up I hope? LOL I am ready for some action! These gals need a boost. They have many good years left! LOL Nancy

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2014


reply by the author on 12-Dec-2014
    Nearly! The first three chapters plus the prologue now cover ten postings instead of four, but I know from past experience that Fanstorians don't like anything over a thousand words, so it should be more acceptable. We should be caught up by Sunday! Alexis xxx