Comment from Cindy Warren

Excellent

I'm catching up today, on FanStory Classic. Hope it still works. I haven't been able to read a single reply to any of my reviews since those disasterous 'improvements.' Lorna isn't about to let Blaze leave, I bet. One good thing about having to catch up is I don't have to wait long for the next chapter.

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2014

Thank you, Cindy. I have been using Classic FS since Tom made it possible. I do check the new site once in a while to see if things I hate have been fixed. It's slow, so I stay here where things MOSTLY work, at least. :)

reply by Cindy Warren on 13-Dec-2014

Ah, a reply I can read! The first one in weeks. Awesome! Think I'll stay here till Tom comes to his senses. He needs his head read if he thinks those changes are anything but disasterous. I'd just renewed my membership for two years and I thought I'd wasted my money. Needless to say, I was furious!

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

This is very well written with strong dialogue moving the story along. There is a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2014

Thank you, Charlie. :)

reply by c_lucas on 13-Dec-2014

You're welcome, Phyllis. Charlie

Comment from Selina Stambi

Excellent

This story is so readable ... a pleasant respite from a lot sub-standard stuff I've reviewed lately

Very well done, Phyllis. As Amanda says, you are a smart lady!

Love,

Sonali

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 12-Dec-2014

Thank you so much, Sonali. I'll have to thank Amanda, too, for saying such nice things about me. She's just too sweet to be real. I'm so lucky. :)

reply by Selina Stambi on 12-Dec-2014

The luck applies to both parties, dear. :)

reply by the author on 12-Dec-2014

Amanda does seem happy here. I will send you a pm. :)

Comment from Fridayauthor

Excellent

Lots of intrigue, for sure. Blaze's emotions were nicely written as was the dialog that followed. As usual, the lead-in to the next posting held the reader's continuing attention.

Well written chapter.

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 12-Dec-2014

Thanks so much for your comments. :)

Comment from ravenblack

Excellent

Bear with me- I'm reviewing on my phone, little narrow boxes at all that do not preserve line breaks in poetry at all. Another good chapter. The donor you mentioned- considering a rider was added to the budget changing the limit on individual contributions to political parties from 100,000 to 800, thousand ( what a bunch of crooks) it must be a really big check.

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2014

Thanks a bunch, Ed. This is ridiculous. Just makes it easier for rich corporations and even one person, like George Soros and the like, to buy an election!

Comment from Muffins

Excellent

This is a strong character driven chapter. It provides the reader an opportunity to see blaze Process everything that has happened. She's thinking about the pros and cons of thing, especially a night of fun with Senator. It's not necessary to have wham- bam action in a character for it to move the story along and get deeper into character. This is what you have done perfectly here.

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2014

Thank you so much for saying that. I appreciate your input, Muffins. Glad to have you as a reader. :)

Comment from elgone

Excellent

It's been a few days since I've been on the site. I was busy with my stuff. Sorry. Don't seen any mistakes in this one. I'll try to knock out the other things you've posted too.

E

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2014

Elgon, thank you very much for taking the time. :)

Comment from Cajungirl

Excellent

Blaze got a bit worried. She must have thought that Lorna was trying to come to her. LOL

Can't wait to see how she explains her relationship with old Luke.

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2014

Thank you so much, Vergie. :)

Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

Thanks for another fine chapter of mixed emotions and conflict buttons that can be pushed with Blaze's every move. I am reading instructions on what I'm supposed write in my reviews, my likes an dislikes. Well, I don't have any dislikes, so all I can say is, keep up the great work. :-)

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2014

Thanks so much, Ric. But be honest... no one likes the names Blaze and Blake in the same story. Much too confusing! LOL! I will have to change his name in the edit. :)

Comment from Louise Michelle

Excellent

Listen to me, Blaze, ya gotta stay off those spiked heels -- they'll ruin your feet. I'm glad you chose the cloth, it's good to be practical.

Tell Phyllis this is another good chapter. Great description about the sticking hair on the face. She's good about nuance.

Hey Phyllis, I hope you don't mind if I talk to your characters in my reviews. It's fun. Hugs, Lou P.S. When are the penguins gonna sing us a Christmas song?

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2014

LOL! I love that you talk to Blaze. I just wonder if she'll tell me what you really said... or make something up to get us in a cat fight! :)