Comment from Green Lake Girl

Excellent

The shenanigans continue. Blaze forever trying to buffalo Luke, while pursuing her own agenda. Good chapter, Phyllis. On to the next one!

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2014

Thank you so much, Marietta. Next chapter coming up soon. :)

Comment from Sasha

Excellent

Sorry I took so long to get to this. I am so far behind in my reviews I doubt I will ever be able to catch up...blame my bloody broken toes, they take up all my time and energy.

Great work with this one. I do hope Blaze doesn't get in trouble with Lucifer...he is such a crude, obnoxious, ass...of course, he is the devil...LOL

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2014

Thanks, Sasha. I have been replying backwards today and see that you have been busy reading. I hope your toes will heal up soon. Must be really hard to deal with trouble on your FEET. You are the poster child this year for bad luck, I think. Remember what the Bible says, tho: This too shall pass. Hang in there. :)

Comment from Curly Girly

Excellent

Demons dating humans get punished. Things work out for Blaze and Lorna's help is not needed. Well written, and no spag spotted.

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2014

Thanks a bunch, Nicole. :)

Comment from Fridayauthor

Excellent

A fun read of a nicely written chapter. There is constant duplicity going on.

I particularly like your dialog.

A very well done chapter.

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2014

Thank you so much. Are you using the new version or the old one. I went back to the original, since the new one is so bug-infested. Too many things still not working right. :)

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I can't wait to see what bill A-522 is all about. It should be interesting. I have a feeling Blaze is in way over her head. She's attracted to Blake and Blake is attracted to her and then ther'es Luke. OH dear.

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2014

Thanks so much, Barbara. Yes, she's in pretty deep. If Luke finds out, she's toast. :)

Comment from ravenblack

Excellent

The garden room where we can talk- I Think there will be more going on then discussing Senate bill A552 - which hopefully has to do with preserving classic Fanstory.

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2014

LOL! I love your definition of the bill. I hope this one will stay around as long as I want to. I looked at the new site today and my complaints still have not been addressed. Why put banners way down at the very bottom of the page? No one will notice them there. THey should be in the floating purple (ugh) bar where you can always see them. And why are all the italics made in advanced mode gray, regardless of the color of the surrounding text? Even if we don't use that version, people will still see our work there, and there are some who are using the bug-infested thing even now with all it's problems. Takes all kinds, I guess. :)

Comment from Louise Michelle

Excellent

Okay, Blaze, don't overdo it, lol. We only smell if we don't wash.

I wonder why Luke chooses to believe her, maybe he's only pretending and will be on his toes. This is moving along nicely, Phyllis. Hugs, Lou

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2014

Thanks so much, Lou. For one thing, Luke is not too bright, so he's easily fooled. But again, he might be planning a surprise for her. Might be. :)

Comment from Margaret Snowdon

Excellent

Your work is so easy to read it's
so well presented.

"Okay, I'll follow you in my car.(")

for his bod? - is this deliberate, Phyllis?(body)


Margaret

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2014

Thank you so much, Margaret. I'm glad you find it easy to read... that's what I aim for. My books, hopefully, are "quick reads" as they call them. For who has time nowadays to spend days with a book?

Yes, "bod" is slang for body over here.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Must admit, Blaze is one cunning cookie, when Luke calls her she is sitting comfortably with Blake in tow, gazing, I guess romantically into his eyes, I've found this one so I already know about the other! Have you noticed strange things happening on the new site? fortunately they've made a provision for classic FS, well done, Phyllis, blessings, Roy.

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2014

Thanks so much, Roy. Glad you didn't miss it. Yes, the new site is all messed up. Tom released it without thoroughly testing EVERYTHING... in fact, seems like he hardly tested anything, it was so broken. I suppose he's trying to fix it now. I go there now and then just to peek in and see what's fixed and what's newly broken. LOL!

reply by royowen on 05-Dec-2014

I've been on the old one since then, I might go back!

reply by the author on 05-Dec-2014

I wouldn't recommend moving to the new one till all the many bugs get fixed. Maybe in a week I'll give it another shot. :)

reply by royowen on 06-Dec-2014

Me too,

Comment from elgone

Excellent

Apparently Tom fixed it. I send a message about the issue. As i said before I generally like the changes. I hope Evil Eddie has been tamed. Let me know what you think about it as I no longer see it from a writer's perspective.

E

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2014

Thanks a bunch, Elgon. I hated the new format (claustrophic) so I am using the "classic" one again. Phew! :)