Salute to Camp Cocoon
Camp Cocoon is a Bereavement Camp for kids 8-18 in Georgia63 total reviews
Comment from Razz
Very nicely written.
Rhyme is perfectly on time.
Very well thought out.
Sounds like the boy scouts.
In one stanza you said it takes a lot of money...for what and where is it?
Are you saying that children are sent there by parents or loved ones? Do they spend the summer like summer camp? Or is it more like day camp?
Is it free?
Sounds very nice.
Good caring hearts and loving people as leaders.
God bless and keep you.
Razz
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2014
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Very nicely written.
Rhyme is perfectly on time.
Very well thought out.
Sounds like the boy scouts.
In one stanza you said it takes a lot of money...for what and where is it?
Are you saying that children are sent there by parents or loved ones? Do they spend the summer like summer camp? Or is it more like day camp?
Is it free?
Sounds very nice.
Good caring hearts and loving people as leaders.
God bless and keep you.
Razz
Comment Written 07-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2014
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Thank you for the thoughtful compassionate comments and the wonderful stars that you sent to decorate the Poem. Camp Cocoon is a 4 day 3 night youth camp provided each summer by my company free to all kids who have experienced loss. As the poem says there are multiple creative functions designed to procure 100% of this funding. It is not restricted to the families of our patients but open, free for kids who have suffered any loss. The expense is great but the benefit is priceless!
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That is so very nice.
God does sends angels.
How many kids at once?
Have a wonderful evening.
Razz
Comment from SDS20121
I like the imagery and the setting. It is calm, but clear. The walk through emotions is well defined, but not overpowering. The connection to faith with nature is serene. It is articles like this that make reading very enjoyable and worth while.
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reply by the author on 04-Dec-2014
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I like the imagery and the setting. It is calm, but clear. The walk through emotions is well defined, but not overpowering. The connection to faith with nature is serene. It is articles like this that make reading very enjoyable and worth while.
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Comment Written 03-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2014
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Thank you for the thoughtful compassionate comments and the wonderful stars that decorate the Poem. Camp Cocoon is a youth camp provided each summer by my company free to all kids who have experienced loss. It is not restricted to the families of our patients but open, free for kids who have suffered any loss. The expense is great but the benefit is priceless!
Comment from djsaxon
Terrific concept - terrific poem. Solid abcb rhyme throughout. It has the natural flow of a lyric poem and draws the reader into the thrust of Camp Cocoon. I would love to see something similar in Australia. Blessings, my friend - DJ
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reply by the author on 04-Dec-2014
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Terrific concept - terrific poem. Solid abcb rhyme throughout. It has the natural flow of a lyric poem and draws the reader into the thrust of Camp Cocoon. I would love to see something similar in Australia. Blessings, my friend - DJ
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Comment Written 03-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2014
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Thank you for the thoughtful compassionate comments and the wonderful stars that decorate the Poem. Camp Cocoon is a youth camp provided each summer by my company free to all kids who have experienced loss. It is not restricted to the families of our patients but open, free for kids who have suffered any loss. The expense is great but the benefit is priceless!
