The Heart of Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 103 "Together"'Tis not the Bard, but pretty good poetry anyway
17 total reviews
Comment from lakeport
Together, indeed that's a very beautiful and romantic expressed poem, very nice flow, I enjoyed reading it, God bless you, Hugs! lakeport.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2014
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Together, indeed that's a very beautiful and romantic expressed poem, very nice flow, I enjoyed reading it, God bless you, Hugs! lakeport.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2014
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Thanks E for this wonderful review and awesome stars. This one was such a pleasure to write. :-) Carolyn
Comment from patcelaw
This is a lovely poem of faith that takes us through our lives as a couple. Together is a word I like in connection with marriage. My hubby and I cherished our time together and even more so as he became ill and was nearing his departure to Heaven. Blessings, patricia
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This is a lovely poem of faith that takes us through our lives as a couple. Together is a word I like in connection with marriage. My hubby and I cherished our time together and even more so as he became ill and was nearing his departure to Heaven. Blessings, patricia
Comment Written 05-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2014
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Thank you Patricia for this kind and affirming review of Together. I appreciate all you have said. :-) Carolyn
Comment from l.raven
HI Carolyn, we truly have to have faith in Him for Him to see us...I believe that...and with two our faith can withstand anything...I love your wording in this poem Carolyn... an beautiful picture...and very nicely written...Love Linda xxoo luff
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2014
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HI Carolyn, we truly have to have faith in Him for Him to see us...I believe that...and with two our faith can withstand anything...I love your wording in this poem Carolyn... an beautiful picture...and very nicely written...Love Linda xxoo luff
Comment Written 04-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2014
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Thanks Linda for this sweet review and all those stars. I'm glad you liked Together. Love you too, Carolyn
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you are always so welcome Carolyn...luff xxoo hugs you
Comment from Curly Girly
It is good to be able to walk through life and to be able to share the joys and burdens with somebody close who cares. There is hope for unity again in Heaven.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2014
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It is good to be able to walk through life and to be able to share the joys and burdens with somebody close who cares. There is hope for unity again in Heaven.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2014
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Hi there, so glad you enjoyed this one Nicole. :-) Carolyn
Comment from Spitfire
A perfect format for this with the repetition of "together" at the end of each stanza.
We are prepared to cross that threshold
into eternity
together
I wish I would pass with my husband, rather than live another ten years without him. But I do have faith that he'll be there to greet me on the other side. Forever together. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2014
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A perfect format for this with the repetition of "together" at the end of each stanza.
We are prepared to cross that threshold
into eternity
together
I wish I would pass with my husband, rather than live another ten years without him. But I do have faith that he'll be there to greet me on the other side. Forever together. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2014
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Thanks Shari, I am so glad you enjoyed the message in this one and appreciate your words. I understand your sentiments about your husband. Is he doing any better? :-) Carolyn
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Status quo, Carolyn. Status quo.
Comment from misscookie
I love the words to your poem
You will never know how much they touched me yes morning.
For the past few days I thoughts were of my son. Which I'm shame to say it doesn't happen often
I told him our relationship will be much better when we meet in heaven.
Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2014
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I love the words to your poem
You will never know how much they touched me yes morning.
For the past few days I thoughts were of my son. Which I'm shame to say it doesn't happen often
I told him our relationship will be much better when we meet in heaven.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2014
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Thank you misscookie for 'loving' this one. I am so blessed you enjoyed it and were touched by the words. I appreciate your fine comments.
:-) Carolyn
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You're very welcome. have a blessed and safe weekend,
Cookie
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You're very welcome. have a blessed week-end.
Until next time.
Cookie
Comment from angelface2
Very nice, Carolyn. Faith is really needed in a marriage and if you have it together, it makes everything else work. Nice job. :>D Miss Sally
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2014
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Very nice, Carolyn. Faith is really needed in a marriage and if you have it together, it makes everything else work. Nice job. :>D Miss Sally
Comment Written 03-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2014
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Thanks Miss Sally for the fine comments and understanding of this one. :-) Carolyn
Comment from krys123
Carolyn; a very effective and wondrous way of effectively presenting togetherness with the sole understanding of peace and tranquility and a fortuitous of faith in one's heart. "Whenever storm clouds rise/We will weather the rain and wind/The challenges of daily life/Together". Such beautiful imagery that is so expressive in a very warm hearted feeling.
Thank you so much for sharing this with all of us and may all your endeavors be good ones.
Alex
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2014
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Carolyn; a very effective and wondrous way of effectively presenting togetherness with the sole understanding of peace and tranquility and a fortuitous of faith in one's heart. "Whenever storm clouds rise/We will weather the rain and wind/The challenges of daily life/Together". Such beautiful imagery that is so expressive in a very warm hearted feeling.
Thank you so much for sharing this with all of us and may all your endeavors be good ones.
Alex
Comment Written 03-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2014
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Thanks Alex, I so appreciate your fine comments and am happy you liked 'Together'.
:-) Carolyn
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
A beautiful free verse faith poem. The repetition of together was quite powerful. An excellent contest entry, my friend. Best wishes. How do you like the new FS? It has me confused~Debbie
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2014
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A beautiful free verse faith poem. The repetition of together was quite powerful. An excellent contest entry, my friend. Best wishes. How do you like the new FS? It has me confused~Debbie
Comment Written 03-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2014
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Hi there Debbie, and thanks so much for this wonderful review and awesome stars. I just found this page if that tells you anything. LOL I have to get use to it. Love, Carolyn
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is an excellent write, Carolyn, great imagery presented about the faith that is easier to maintain when you have someone else making the journey with you. I enjoyed reading it. good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2014
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this is an excellent write, Carolyn, great imagery presented about the faith that is easier to maintain when you have someone else making the journey with you. I enjoyed reading it. good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2014
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What nice comments you have given for this one. I appreciate that you got the message so clearly. :-) Carolyn
