Finding Daisy
Viewing comments for Chapter 36 "Detox"Another Ess and Oz comic fantasy
4 total reviews
Comment from Adri7enne
The damn reviewing notes window doesn't follow the posted text down the page at the moment. God, I hate these changes!
"She hoped she looked alluring and angelic ...and frizzed her hair into A clown wig." Add "A"??
You're giving "being a Fairy" a whole new connotation,aren't you? LOL! I like it. Finally, Ess might be able to get out from under that spell. You seem to know a lot about witches and such, snod. Were you a witch in a former life? A wizard, more likely. A big bad wizard! I sure enjoyed this chapter. Good stuff, snod!
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2014
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The damn reviewing notes window doesn't follow the posted text down the page at the moment. God, I hate these changes!
"She hoped she looked alluring and angelic ...and frizzed her hair into A clown wig." Add "A"??
You're giving "being a Fairy" a whole new connotation,aren't you? LOL! I like it. Finally, Ess might be able to get out from under that spell. You seem to know a lot about witches and such, snod. Were you a witch in a former life? A wizard, more likely. A big bad wizard! I sure enjoyed this chapter. Good stuff, snod!
Comment Written 30-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2014
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Odd. My reviewing box scrolls with me. Actually, I think I'm giving fairies their old connotations. They weren't nice creatures in old folklore. A former life? How do you know I'm not one in this life? Thanks for the review and the sapg
Comment from Luvs2rite4u
As the "reader" I found myself plunged into the life of Ess. You have created a unique voice for each character. I breathe this into my heart. Spectacular view of the fate one has in this non world. I wouldn't change anything. Your P.O.V. Is outstanding. No errors' means awesome book. Get this out there. Thank you for posting on Fan story. Luvs
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2014
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As the "reader" I found myself plunged into the life of Ess. You have created a unique voice for each character. I breathe this into my heart. Spectacular view of the fate one has in this non world. I wouldn't change anything. Your P.O.V. Is outstanding. No errors' means awesome book. Get this out there. Thank you for posting on Fan story. Luvs
Comment Written 30-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2014
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Thank you. You seem to have reviewed this twice, so I can only assume this is worth a 12
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You are very receptive. I want to read more!! Luvs
Comment from Jay Squires
Interesting chapter, Snodlander. I don't yet know where all this detoxifying and re-spelling is going to take them--but that comes with a late entry into the story.
Only one small misspell:
It's not ging to be pleasant. [I assume "going"?]
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2014
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Interesting chapter, Snodlander. I don't yet know where all this detoxifying and re-spelling is going to take them--but that comes with a late entry into the story.
Only one small misspell:
It's not ging to be pleasant. [I assume "going"?]
Comment Written 30-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2014
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oops, thanks for the spag and the review. Interesting is all an author can hope for
Comment from c_lucas
Drugs cannot be controlled. This is very well written with an interesting flow of words, making for a good read. There is good imagery.
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2014
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Drugs cannot be controlled. This is very well written with an interesting flow of words, making for a good read. There is good imagery.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2014
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Thank you. Glad you liked it
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You're welcome, S. Charlie
