When The Toll Is Took
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Comment from CR Delport
My father died of lung cancer. He quit a few years before his death, but it was too late. My mother can hardly breathe, but she still smokes. I am so glad I quit ten years ago. Another fine and well written poem.
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My father died of lung cancer. He quit a few years before his death, but it was too late. My mother can hardly breathe, but she still smokes. I am so glad I quit ten years ago. Another fine and well written poem.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2014
