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Praise Him

Paraphrased Psalm 147

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Comment from kiwijenny
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Sing unto the Lord
With thanksgiving
Praise Him with the harp.

He put the clouds in the sky
To bring rain to the earth
And grass to grow on the mountains.
My name is Jenny Harp...and I love this psalm and the glory you give God

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2014


reply by the author on 28-Nov-2014
    Hello Jenny Harp. Thank you for the review. I am glad you like this Psalm. Pat
Comment from judiverse
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Very lovely wording in this. It is dignified as befitting the subject. You offer praise to the Lord for His healing power and understanding. He can lift up the meek, as you write, and see that the wicked are punished. Your last stanzas are especially beautiful, with the imagery of singing praise, accompanied by the harp. judi

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2014


reply by the author on 28-Nov-2014
    Thank you judi for a nice review.
reply by judiverse on 28-Nov-2014
    You're so welcome. judi
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
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Hi, Pat,

Hope you had a great Thanksgiving. Ours was, but exhausting. The twins are a lot of entertainment.

Nice poem of Thanksgiving. Love the peaceful pix.

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*.*)

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2014


reply by the author on 28-Nov-2014
    Thanks ffor the review. I had a lovely Thanksgiving with friends.
Comment from Jackarrie
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Hi Patricia

Nice chosen words for your spiritual poem, It flows very well

He has counted the stars
He has even given them
Their own names.

Well done
Mary


 Comment Written 28-Nov-2014


reply by the author on 28-Nov-2014
    Thanks you for the nice review.
Comment from Winslow
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Dear Pat,

We spent six weeks in Las Cruces last winter and really enjoyed our time there.

This is a great praise poem. It reminds me of the doxology which I really like to sing.

Happy Thanksgiving,

Winslow

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2014


reply by the author on 27-Nov-2014
    Thanks you for the nice review. I am glad you enjoyed your time in Las Cruces. Do you winter in yh southwest?
reply by Winslow on 27-Nov-2014
    We usually go to Mexico since we have made many friends at the hotel we go to in Rincon de Guayabitos. (Mostly Canadians) We are going there for two weeks in January and then plan to spend Feb and March in Las Cruces.

    Winslow
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2014
    The summer I was 11 year old, I spent the summer in Farmington MN. Babysat my brother's children for the summer. It is a story I tell in my book She Did Right-Now-She Does Write
    it is one of the early chapters.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2014
    Minnesota Summer is chapter 3 in my book
Comment from Genya
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What beautiful words you have chosen here to Praise the Lord. Excellent picture to go with it. He has counted the stars he has even given them their own names. How beautiful these words sound. Just shows how powerful our creator is. Loved this. Genya

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2014


reply by the author on 27-Nov-2014
    Thank you Genya for the nice review. This was a paraphrase of a Psalm so the words are those of the Lord, I just put them in poetic form as God was instructing me to write them.
Comment from emrpoems
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Warm words of praise to the Lord. He says He lives in our praises so what better way to have Him near than to sing praises to him continually

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2014


reply by the author on 27-Nov-2014
    Thanks you for the nice review, Happy Thanksgiving.
Comment from misscookie
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The artwork they you chosen is awesome.
It is perfect for your poem,
I love how your words flow.
Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2014


reply by the author on 27-Nov-2014
    Thanks Cookie for viewing and reviewing my poem.. Blessings, Pat
reply by misscookie on 27-Nov-2014

    Until next time.
    Cookie
Comment from GracieAnn
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Pat, this reads like a Psalm of adoration in its free verse style. Full of rich language that King David would be proud of. Nice work. Happy Thanksgiving. :0 GracieAnn

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2014


reply by the author on 27-Nov-2014
    Thank you so much for the kind review. Blessings, pat
Comment from nomi338
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There is no poetry ever written more beautiful that the Psalms. If you, if anyone would be a poet, let him look to the Psalms for inspiration, for instructionon how it is best done. If you would follow the example of the Psalms your efforts will be blessed.

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 Comment Written 27-Nov-2014


reply by the author on 27-Nov-2014
    Thanks for the kind reviw.
    There is great comfort in the Psalm and they are great poetry.