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Don't believe everything you read on social media.4 total reviews
Comment from giraffmang
I found this to be a good read.
The plot was very amusing and the character development was good. Early on you get the impression that Reece isn't very bright, or is it just nerves (!). I enjoyed this.
Good Luck
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2014
I found this to be a good read.
The plot was very amusing and the character development was good. Early on you get the impression that Reece isn't very bright, or is it just nerves (!). I enjoyed this.
Good Luck
Comment Written 07-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2014
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Thank you very much for the fine review. I'm glad you liked it.
Comment from Wendyanne
Lol you had me wondering if seersucker was what they thought it was and I was going to google it. I enjoyed your piece of flash fiction. Good luck.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2014
Lol you had me wondering if seersucker was what they thought it was and I was going to google it. I enjoyed your piece of flash fiction. Good luck.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2014
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Thanks. I'm glad you liked it.
Comment from Imogen JH
Not sure what to make of it. You have come up with a very different angle for the subject. It's a bit weak on the plot I feel. I can't get my head around the way you have made your characters to be so dumb. I can't buy into that.
On the positive side though. It is nicely written, very readable, I didn't feel I had to retrace my reading to catch the plot. Some tidy dialogue in there also.
The very best of luck with this.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2014
Not sure what to make of it. You have come up with a very different angle for the subject. It's a bit weak on the plot I feel. I can't get my head around the way you have made your characters to be so dumb. I can't buy into that.
On the positive side though. It is nicely written, very readable, I didn't feel I had to retrace my reading to catch the plot. Some tidy dialogue in there also.
The very best of luck with this.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2014
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Thanks for the review and kind comments.
Comment from Nosha17
I suppose there are nutcases out there doing things like this and thinking that it is OK to do it. Well written story, with well drawn characters, good dialogue and it read well. Enjoyable read and good luck in the contest. Faye
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2014
I suppose there are nutcases out there doing things like this and thinking that it is OK to do it. Well written story, with well drawn characters, good dialogue and it read well. Enjoyable read and good luck in the contest. Faye
Comment Written 25-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2014
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Thanks for the fine review. I'm glad you liked it.