BLAZE: Angel from Hell
Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "More Bad News for Jack"Blaze is one of Lucifer's demons, a fallen angel.
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Comment from michaelcahill
I read this. I guess reviewing it two days later is trendy for someone not all there. These people are soooo bereft of any morals. They are the greatest evil FUN!!! It just kills me that the demon from HELL seems to be the one I'd trust the most. Hahaha. Great stuff. I love the shiver up her spine!! mikey
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2014
I read this. I guess reviewing it two days later is trendy for someone not all there. These people are soooo bereft of any morals. They are the greatest evil FUN!!! It just kills me that the demon from HELL seems to be the one I'd trust the most. Hahaha. Great stuff. I love the shiver up her spine!! mikey
Comment Written 28-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2014
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Thanks so much... glad you didn't forget to review what you read. LOL! Yes, Blaze is not all that bad, but she doesn't know it yet. Blake will be the catalyst that turns her around, and against the sort of evil that he and so many others do becasue of Luke. She'll work against Luke in the book once we get there. But for a while, let's let her enjoy some wild sex with the senator she can't forget. :)
Comment from Sasha
Lorna is clearly at the top of her game. She is prepared for just about everything. The Senator will do just fine at the press conference, I am sure he has had a lot of practice lying to the public. Great work with this one. The short one works just fine. I look forward to the press conference.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2014
Lorna is clearly at the top of her game. She is prepared for just about everything. The Senator will do just fine at the press conference, I am sure he has had a lot of practice lying to the public. Great work with this one. The short one works just fine. I look forward to the press conference.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2014
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Thanks again for reading. I'm glad you liked these scenes. New one coming up tomorrow, most likely.
Take care of yourself. :)
Comment from marijmd
Ah Blaze always surrounded by people that she hates - so much good in her and yet she does so much bad with it. I wonder if the Lawyers trick will work?
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2014
Ah Blaze always surrounded by people that she hates - so much good in her and yet she does so much bad with it. I wonder if the Lawyers trick will work?
Comment Written 27-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2014
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Thanks so much, Maria. Yes, it will work. And Blaze will hook up with the senator. But that won't last, but Blake will have a strong effect on Blaze and change her life. :)
Comment from Cindy Warren
Ah, that's dirty. And it could backfire big time. How dirty is Clay? He's bound to want revenge. I sure would. I can't wait to see what he's going to do about these accusations.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2014
Ah, that's dirty. And it could backfire big time. How dirty is Clay? He's bound to want revenge. I sure would. I can't wait to see what he's going to do about these accusations.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2014
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Thanks so much, CIndy. Yep, Lorna and Blake are rotten to the core. Blaze goes along with it cuz she needs to save the senator to complete her first assignment for Luke. Blake will make her see the light eventually, tho, and will be the catalyst for her to turn against Luke and all he stands for. Why? Stay tuned. :)
Comment from Curly Girly
Mmm... the plot thickens. Blaze is apologising for lying. Lip service. Blake was drugged. Blaze is smiling back at him, but what is she really thinking?
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2014
Mmm... the plot thickens. Blaze is apologising for lying. Lip service. Blake was drugged. Blaze is smiling back at him, but what is she really thinking?
Comment Written 26-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2014
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Thanks again. Blake was never drugged... that's a lie Lorna and Blake agreed to use to blame his opponent. Blaze, at this point, is only thinking how much she wants Blake... LOL! She had sex with him. Well, not HIM, but Luke in his body, and now she wants more of the senator. She is NOT into sex with Luke. It was only that one day because Luke showed up in Blake's body. But he could not keep cuz he got Blake tossed into the mental hospital with his crazy behavior. Now Luke is mad at Blaze for wanting Blake but not him. Poor Blaze. She WILL turn around though, and the senator will be the catalyst for it. She'll dump him and change her life. :)
Comment from Drew Delaney
Hard to keep up at this time of year, isn't it, Phyllis?
The story is going smoothly and I didn't notice any nits or anything odd. So keep up the great writing and hope you have the time. I know how it is. Drew xx
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2014
Hard to keep up at this time of year, isn't it, Phyllis?
The story is going smoothly and I didn't notice any nits or anything odd. So keep up the great writing and hope you have the time. I know how it is. Drew xx
Comment Written 26-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2014
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Thank you so much, Drew. With the holidays in full swing now, I guess FS will be quieter. :)
Comment from simplyteresa
This chapter has a great twist full of emotion. The ending of the chapter leaves for a great lead on the next. The beginning sets up the scene so well.
I look forward to reading more.
Smiles,
Teresa
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2014
This chapter has a great twist full of emotion. The ending of the chapter leaves for a great lead on the next. The beginning sets up the scene so well.
I look forward to reading more.
Smiles,
Teresa
Comment Written 26-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2014
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Thank you so much, Teresa. :)
Comment from Alan K Pease
Blaze shows the occasional pangs of conscience. Is this the quiver up her spine or is a measure of success with the Senator - maybe with more interest.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2014
Blaze shows the occasional pangs of conscience. Is this the quiver up her spine or is a measure of success with the Senator - maybe with more interest.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2014
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Thanks again. She's quivering because she's hot for the senator and wants more of him, even tho he is totally unaware that "he" and she made love. Of course, "he" was unconscious while Luke had possession of his body. :)
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Is Blaze and the senator going to get together? That would be a very good match. I think. LOL This is anther good post. Good job.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2014
Is Blaze and the senator going to get together? That would be a very good match. I think. LOL This is anther good post. Good job.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2014
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Thanks, again, and yes... for a while, anyway. Till she gets to know him well enough. :)
Comment from adewpearl
excellent dialogue as they scheme and seem quite pleased with the idea of framing someone
good detail in explaining how one creates "an aura of suspicion"
Brooke
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2014
excellent dialogue as they scheme and seem quite pleased with the idea of framing someone
good detail in explaining how one creates "an aura of suspicion"
Brooke
Comment Written 26-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2014
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Thanks so much, Brooke. Blake will be an important char as the catalyst for Blaze to turn against Luke and those, like Blake and Lorna, who do his evil work.