Wish-Fors, and Will-Gets
A Larry-the-Youngest story.30 total reviews
Comment from JBCaine
Hump-
Friggin' ADHD! I read this awhile back and got distracted by some part of the house on fire or something silly like that.
Great from title to the very last line. My personal favorites:
"but he loved snoring more. And he had the knack."
"Maybe Olympics good someday." (in reference to holding one's breath and toe-wiggling championships... chortle.)
Loved the repeated callbacks to the plutonium. These are some of your best characters, IMHO. I know you have had a billion references to how they call to the readers' mind some parts of their childhood, so I'll leave it at this: Seven kids, parents who generally said, "I love you" through some serious teasing... I shant go further.
Lawrence and Donald always give the reader way better than they get. Always. And, of course, they couldn't pull it off without their 'straight-man' Betty. Completely enjoyable.
So good, you've inspired a poesy...
Mocs, not Crocs
Nor Birkenstocks.
Not to mention slipper-socks.
Stealthy Injun footwear rocks!
Thanks for sharing this one with us, Sir.
JBCaine-
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2014
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Hump-
Friggin' ADHD! I read this awhile back and got distracted by some part of the house on fire or something silly like that.
Great from title to the very last line. My personal favorites:
"but he loved snoring more. And he had the knack."
"Maybe Olympics good someday." (in reference to holding one's breath and toe-wiggling championships... chortle.)
Loved the repeated callbacks to the plutonium. These are some of your best characters, IMHO. I know you have had a billion references to how they call to the readers' mind some parts of their childhood, so I'll leave it at this: Seven kids, parents who generally said, "I love you" through some serious teasing... I shant go further.
Lawrence and Donald always give the reader way better than they get. Always. And, of course, they couldn't pull it off without their 'straight-man' Betty. Completely enjoyable.
So good, you've inspired a poesy...
Mocs, not Crocs
Nor Birkenstocks.
Not to mention slipper-socks.
Stealthy Injun footwear rocks!
Thanks for sharing this one with us, Sir.
JBCaine-
Comment Written 02-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2014
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Thanks, JB. I like writing these characters, too.
It's fun to write dialogue between a teasing Dad, and
a trusting kid.
I love your poem! I feel like an inspiration!
Thanks again, my friend. Peace, Lee
Comment from Sasha
I apologize for taking so long to get to this. I have been preoccupied with personal stuff (more polite than saying crap) and have finally worked it out and come up for air. This is hysterical. I love your stories about Louie and Larry-the-youngest. I really got a kick out of this one and think it will be a top contender for this contest. I wish you all the best.
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I apologize for taking so long to get to this. I have been preoccupied with personal stuff (more polite than saying crap) and have finally worked it out and come up for air. This is hysterical. I love your stories about Louie and Larry-the-youngest. I really got a kick out of this one and think it will be a top contender for this contest. I wish you all the best.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2014
Comment from irishauthorme
Yes indeedy! And sorry about the 5'er. Great combination of humor versus the harsh realities of Christmas in a large family, where there was not enough money to buy all the kids what they really wanted.
This piece is so well-written that I'll bet you triggered a lot of memories for your readers.
Good luck in the contest!
irish
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Yes indeedy! And sorry about the 5'er. Great combination of humor versus the harsh realities of Christmas in a large family, where there was not enough money to buy all the kids what they really wanted.
This piece is so well-written that I'll bet you triggered a lot of memories for your readers.
Good luck in the contest!
irish
Comment Written 26-Nov-2014
Comment from butterfly4265
I absolutely loved the dialogue between both parents and Larry/Louie! So simple yet a lot of fun. You switched between everyone with a lot of ease and with a good, natural flow. Very witty and entertaining. I really enjoyed this Christmas story, and thank you so much for sharing.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2014
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I absolutely loved the dialogue between both parents and Larry/Louie! So simple yet a lot of fun. You switched between everyone with a lot of ease and with a good, natural flow. Very witty and entertaining. I really enjoyed this Christmas story, and thank you so much for sharing.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2014
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Thank you, butterfly. I'm delighted you enjoyed. Peace, Lee
Comment from IndianaIrish
It's always so much fun reading about the goings-on at the Larry-the-Youngest home. I like the on-going Louie/Larry joke between Dad and Larry--it makes the precious moments they have together when Dad is either working or sleeping extra special. The interaction between Mom and Dad is fun, too. Wonderful Christmas story, hw, and hope it does well in the contest. Moccasins are cool.
Smiles,
Indy :-)
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2014
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It's always so much fun reading about the goings-on at the Larry-the-Youngest home. I like the on-going Louie/Larry joke between Dad and Larry--it makes the precious moments they have together when Dad is either working or sleeping extra special. The interaction between Mom and Dad is fun, too. Wonderful Christmas story, hw, and hope it does well in the contest. Moccasins are cool.
Smiles,
Indy :-)
Comment Written 25-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2014
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Thank you, Indy. I hoped you'd like this. Your childhood stories have a similar feel. It wasn't always this homey in our family, but the dynamics were similar. My father liked to tease. My mother didn't have much of a sense of humor.
I'm still wearing moccasins.
Thank you again. Peace, Lee
Comment from Spitfire
I want to be a part of this family. They have so much fun. I remember past posts about them. Your unique brand of humor will have the judges in stitches. Hey! Maybe they'll use them to make Indian moccasins too. So typical of Aunts and Grannies to knit something that stinks and itches. LOL
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2014
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I want to be a part of this family. They have so much fun. I remember past posts about them. Your unique brand of humor will have the judges in stitches. Hey! Maybe they'll use them to make Indian moccasins too. So typical of Aunts and Grannies to knit something that stinks and itches. LOL
Comment Written 24-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2014
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Thank you, Shari. I like this family, too. On good days, my family was something like this. I think I tend to remember the good days. I'm glad you enjoyed. Peace, Lee
Comment from JennaJaye
Loved the simplistic innocence of this one, Lee. Quite the wise little lad; enjoyed his tolerance in settling for what he gets instead of what he'd like. If only. Grand entry for the contest and best of luck with it. Cheers for the entertaining read. JJ
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2014
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Loved the simplistic innocence of this one, Lee. Quite the wise little lad; enjoyed his tolerance in settling for what he gets instead of what he'd like. If only. Grand entry for the contest and best of luck with it. Cheers for the entertaining read. JJ
Comment Written 24-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2014
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Thank you, JJ. So glad you enjoyed. And that you were entertained. Peace, Lee
Comment from springrain
I think this is a wonderful story with a warm, witty and very humane spirit flowing through it. It manages to catch so much of the very essence of what christmas is all about. There is a bit of my own family in every character.
Thank for sharing and all the best to you, Olof
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2014
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I think this is a wonderful story with a warm, witty and very humane spirit flowing through it. It manages to catch so much of the very essence of what christmas is all about. There is a bit of my own family in every character.
Thank for sharing and all the best to you, Olof
Comment Written 24-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2014
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Thank you, Olof. I'm always grateful to hear I've struck a familiar chord with my readers. Thanks for telling me. Peace, Lee
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You are most welcome Lee, and I wish you a Happy thanksgiving! Olof
Comment from Ric Myworld
Only true moccasin men would ever understand the importance of wearing moccasins. I really do wear them most of the time, that is, unless I'm going to a funeral or something important. Of course, if it was truly up to me, I'm wear them then too. Thanks for another fun story. :-)
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2014
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Only true moccasin men would ever understand the importance of wearing moccasins. I really do wear them most of the time, that is, unless I'm going to a funeral or something important. Of course, if it was truly up to me, I'm wear them then too. Thanks for another fun story. :-)
Comment Written 24-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2014
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Thank you, Ric. Yes, moccasin men of the world unite! Glad you enjoyed. Peace, Lee
Comment from vickib
Wish-fors and Will-gets! Ain't that the truth? There was five of us (I think, I had a hard time keeping track too.) mostly just my mom raising us all. She stashed squash under the house to keep them from rotting so we could eat them through the winter. Yum! Food was our enriched plutonium.
I adore this story and this family, I tune in for it every time it comes on. Fun to imagine how it could have been. You make me happy reading it. Its heart warming and charming. The perfect entry.
Because I had three brothers I too asked for a red rider BB gun like them. All the presents opened, they each got one and I got a doll but I'd stopped asking for dolls because my brothers would kill them, so I thought I'd join the crowd and ask for a BB gun instead.
Later, Mom pretended to be straightening up and called us back to the front room because she discovered an unopened present tucked in the window sill. We inspected it, it had my name on it! Guess what it was. I still have it.
Thanks for the memories.
Merry Christmas!
XO
Vicki
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2014
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Wish-fors and Will-gets! Ain't that the truth? There was five of us (I think, I had a hard time keeping track too.) mostly just my mom raising us all. She stashed squash under the house to keep them from rotting so we could eat them through the winter. Yum! Food was our enriched plutonium.
I adore this story and this family, I tune in for it every time it comes on. Fun to imagine how it could have been. You make me happy reading it. Its heart warming and charming. The perfect entry.
Because I had three brothers I too asked for a red rider BB gun like them. All the presents opened, they each got one and I got a doll but I'd stopped asking for dolls because my brothers would kill them, so I thought I'd join the crowd and ask for a BB gun instead.
Later, Mom pretended to be straightening up and called us back to the front room because she discovered an unopened present tucked in the window sill. We inspected it, it had my name on it! Guess what it was. I still have it.
Thanks for the memories.
Merry Christmas!
XO
Vicki
Comment Written 24-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2014
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Thanks so much, Vicki. Squash under the house? You wouldn't be pullin' my pud, would you? So your mother pulled a Darren McGavin on you? Good for her. You really were a tomboy, weren't you? You still have a BB gun. That could get you arrested in Connecticut.
I'm glad you like this family. I like visiting them, too.
Thanks, Vicki. Peace, Lee
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No I'm not pullin your whatchamacallit. Who can make that stuff up? Who does that? A mom with too many mouths to feed.
Happy Thanksgiving Chief! Squash anyone?
