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House Just Bought

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Comment from misscookie
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God bless you with your dream.
You know the old saying any thing worth while having, is worth the time and sweat
God is watching you, He wants to see what you can do with something small, before he bless you with something big.
Cookie

 Comment Written 24-Nov-2014

reply by the author on 25-Nov-2014
    Hi.Thank for your review and kind words. padumachitta
reply by misscookie on 25-Nov-2014
    You're very welcome.
    Have a blessed Thanksgiving.
    Cookie
Comment from Writingfundimension
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Your creativity makes this poem shine, Padu. I love this perspective:

'A house a house
Perhaps our kingdom
Is a home.'

I will send positive thoughts that you will keep your spirits and hopes up for the home you so deserve.

Warm regards, Bev

 Comment Written 24-Nov-2014

reply by the author on 25-Nov-2014
    Hi Bev thanks for picking up the 'nod' to old Billy:-9
    padumachitta
reply by Writingfundimension on 25-Nov-2014
    You're very welcome, padumachitta.
Comment from Goodauthor
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Alas I have just awarded my last six, but please receive this virtual one as down payment on a special poem. I have felt this urge to do the same as you, unfortunately, a fixed budget does not lend itself freely to such ventures. I enjoyed the read.

 Comment Written 24-Nov-2014

reply by the author on 25-Nov-2014
    Thank for your review and kind words. padumachitta
reply by Goodauthor on 25-Nov-2014
    You're welcome
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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I can feel the emotion of your passion for this house. I love old houses. I enjoyed reading your poem. It is a bit light-hearted, yet serious at the same time. Good luck with all of your future endeavors with this house. I commend you for taking on this project. Thanks for sharing this piece.

 Comment Written 24-Nov-2014

reply by the author on 25-Nov-2014
    Thank for your review and kind words and well wishes. padumachitta
Comment from Wendyanne
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Hi PM your project sounds amazing and I truly hope that things get sorted out for you soon. I can sense your frustration through your well written poem. Well done.

 Comment Written 24-Nov-2014

reply by the author on 25-Nov-2014
    Hello Thank for your review and kind words. padumachitta
Comment from butterfly4265
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Congratulation on the purchase of your house. Never an easy process and always very stressful. You have conveyed those emotions very well in this well written poem. Kudos to you for taking the time to share this while you have so much going on! Excellent poem which was very much enjoyed. Good luck with the house and your mother-in-law's health!

 Comment Written 24-Nov-2014

reply by the author on 25-Nov-2014
    Hi Thanks for the review and well wishes. I figure Mom's health needs to come first and then the house will trot along with us---padumachitta
Comment from thee-name
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Excellent writing. Its nice to own a house.
A HOUSE A HOUSE OUR SANITY FOR A HOUSE
A HORSE I KNOW,
( I HAVE RIDDEN MANY.)
BUT A HOUSE
A NEW HOUSE

 Comment Written 24-Nov-2014

reply by the author on 25-Nov-2014
    Thank for your review. padumachitta
reply by thee-name on 25-Nov-2014
    THANK YOU!
Comment from Andrewajgblue
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Well done padumachita, you are following your heart and fate is waiting, it will be amazing when you are finally through, and it will be perfect for the two of you, the best path is never smooth but so much more rewarding.
Andrew

 Comment Written 24-Nov-2014

reply by the author on 25-Nov-2014
    Hi Andrew Thanks for this. My heart can get me into some pretty odd places. I never thought, me the sterotypical Canuc, would ever buy a house in another land:-)
    padumachitta
Comment from kiwijenny
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Ah a home a nest ...we do our best...the poet in you loves the old ness
The practical side with workmen rubbing hands together ...that's the rub as Shakespeare says...thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 24-Nov-2014

reply by the author on 25-Nov-2014
    Hey, thanks for the review and picking up on old Billy...padumachitta
Comment from flamingstar
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Oh Lord, I understand this situation! I've been renovating my little rat-trap for three years; only fifteen more to go. And about 30K. It is a nice feeling, though: my own
(re)-creation! Good luck to you both!

 Comment Written 24-Nov-2014

reply by the author on 25-Nov-2014
    Hi. Thanks for the words, yup, I figure better to own and spend time and money, than give my money as rent to someone esle.padumachitta