Vision and Sound: Their Stories
Viewing comments for Chapter 48 "Oracles and Quests"Two souls that meet as strangers on earth.
15 total reviews
Comment from Cat of Letters
Julia stepped up (to -missing) the oracle slowly. ..
I am really enjoying this novel of yours. I shall read it all in order when I have more leisure in which to do so.
Best wishes, Alison
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Julia stepped up (to -missing) the oracle slowly. ..
I am really enjoying this novel of yours. I shall read it all in order when I have more leisure in which to do so.
Best wishes, Alison
Comment Written 03-May-2015
Comment from CR Delport
I am sure the oracle would come in useful at one point or another. Abramus is growing weary of all the lies. Another well written chapter.
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I am sure the oracle would come in useful at one point or another. Abramus is growing weary of all the lies. Another well written chapter.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2014
Comment from Sasha
Absolutely superb chapter. I like the addition of a new character. Once again you have done a marvelous job with your descriptions of scenery and emotions. I found one possible spag:
I am sorry. I meant to harm...I think you meant to say 'meant no harm...
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Absolutely superb chapter. I like the addition of a new character. Once again you have done a marvelous job with your descriptions of scenery and emotions. I found one possible spag:
I am sorry. I meant to harm...I think you meant to say 'meant no harm...
Comment Written 26-Nov-2014
Comment from nordicgirl
Another great chapter. This story has become uts own book. I don't know how you can possibly follow this. But then I thought that with the last story too.
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Another great chapter. This story has become uts own book. I don't know how you can possibly follow this. But then I thought that with the last story too.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2014
Comment from Gargantuan2
I see noting to note in this portion of your story. The progression is continuing as I suspect you wished it to. I look forward to your next entry. :)
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I see noting to note in this portion of your story. The progression is continuing as I suspect you wished it to. I look forward to your next entry. :)
Comment Written 26-Nov-2014
Comment from Nosha17
So, the Devil incarnates have all landed on the doorstop to inflict their evil on the innocent victims. Great suspenseful chapter and I liked the introduction of the oracle, hopefully that will work out. Most enjoyable as always. Faye
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So, the Devil incarnates have all landed on the doorstop to inflict their evil on the innocent victims. Great suspenseful chapter and I liked the introduction of the oracle, hopefully that will work out. Most enjoyable as always. Faye
Comment Written 24-Nov-2014
Comment from nelliesellie
The children escaped just in time. There is one more on the side of good and one more possibly on the side of evil. Leopld is seeking those who would believe like he does. It seems like they are picking on children and old men . Great work.
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The children escaped just in time. There is one more on the side of good and one more possibly on the side of evil. Leopld is seeking those who would believe like he does. It seems like they are picking on children and old men . Great work.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2014
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Uh, oh. The big cheese, the Godfather himself! Leopold must have told him about the THREE innocents they can enjoy slaughtering. You write sickos well. :)
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2014
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Uh, oh. The big cheese, the Godfather himself! Leopold must have told him about the THREE innocents they can enjoy slaughtering. You write sickos well. :)
Comment Written 24-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2014
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I can't believe how this segment expanded. It's two pages in the original story. It's one of the few things that I actually like writing. I must have been there in a previous life...
Comment from seaglass
And the group grows larger. The idea of the oracle is cool. found a teeny-tiny error, me thinks.
"I am sorry. I meant (to) harm" I think you wanted to say (no)
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And the group grows larger. The idea of the oracle is cool. found a teeny-tiny error, me thinks.
"I am sorry. I meant (to) harm" I think you wanted to say (no)
Comment Written 23-Nov-2014
Comment from flylikeaneagle
Michael: Good character development in this new oracle. Hope that he can help the youth against the priests. You seen to have a battle plan lined up with the good and evil. Maybe, the wolves will attack the priests. I like the funny picture of the guy with the crazy eyes.
Happy Blessed Thanksgiving!
flylikeaneagle
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Michael: Good character development in this new oracle. Hope that he can help the youth against the priests. You seen to have a battle plan lined up with the good and evil. Maybe, the wolves will attack the priests. I like the funny picture of the guy with the crazy eyes.
Happy Blessed Thanksgiving!
flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 23-Nov-2014
