Just Have a Little Faith
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Comment from Eric1
Hi Sandra, this could have been written for me! A beautiful poem and a great entry for this faith competition my friend, great rhyming and rhythm a wonderful smooth flow and a philosophy on life, good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2014
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Hi Sandra, this could have been written for me! A beautiful poem and a great entry for this faith competition my friend, great rhyming and rhythm a wonderful smooth flow and a philosophy on life, good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2014
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Thank you so much, Eric, for your really lovely review. I am so glad you could relate to my poem, I miss my mother loads. xsx Sandra
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I Know just how you feel my friend xox
Comment from IndianaIrish
What a lovely spiritual poem for the Faith poetry contest, Sandra. Sometimes it sure is difficult to keep the faith when every thing is wrong, but not giving up will get us through. Good luck with your wonderful poem.
Smiles,
Indy :-)
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2014
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What a lovely spiritual poem for the Faith poetry contest, Sandra. Sometimes it sure is difficult to keep the faith when every thing is wrong, but not giving up will get us through. Good luck with your wonderful poem.
Smiles,
Indy :-)
Comment Written 25-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2014
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Thank you so much, Karyn, I am so pleased you enjoyed my poem. :) xsx Sandra
Comment from JPilcher
This is such a pretty read - overall presentation is beautiful. From the image, to the black background to the choice of font color. Very well done - not a thing I would change. :) Jill P.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2014
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This is such a pretty read - overall presentation is beautiful. From the image, to the black background to the choice of font color. Very well done - not a thing I would change. :) Jill P.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2014
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Thank you so much for your lovely review, Jill! :) Sandra
Comment from donaldww
Life is unpredictable, and bad times often come about. The author's mother provided a soothing ear and physical presence. In absence of her Mom's guidance, the author lives by faith and praying to God.
Good luck in the contest!
Cheers,
DW
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2014
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Life is unpredictable, and bad times often come about. The author's mother provided a soothing ear and physical presence. In absence of her Mom's guidance, the author lives by faith and praying to God.
Good luck in the contest!
Cheers,
DW
Comment Written 24-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2014
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Thank you so much, Donald, for your lovely review! :) Sandra
Comment from JudyS
Sandra, This is a very powerful poem. Excellent writing. I know what you mean about talking to your Mom. Mine is gone too. Prayer is so helpful to ease our minds of stress. Best of luck in the contest. Have a good one, Judy
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2014
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Sandra, This is a very powerful poem. Excellent writing. I know what you mean about talking to your Mom. Mine is gone too. Prayer is so helpful to ease our minds of stress. Best of luck in the contest. Have a good one, Judy
Comment Written 24-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2014
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Judy,thank you so much, my friend, I am so pleased you enjoyed my poem, thank you also for the good luck wishes! :) sandra
Comment from tfawcus
There's nothing quite like a mother's words of comfort and wisdom. As you suggest, they remain with us long after she has passed away. You create a lovely sense of intimacy in this poem of yours.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2014
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There's nothing quite like a mother's words of comfort and wisdom. As you suggest, they remain with us long after she has passed away. You create a lovely sense of intimacy in this poem of yours.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2014
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Thank you so much, Tony, for your really nice review! :) Sandra
Comment from Starlight's Edge
Hi,
Your poem certainly conveyed the faith in God.
I liked how you bring to the poem how your mother inspired you to open your heart to God.
The end is a very good conclusion for the poem.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2014
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Hi,
Your poem certainly conveyed the faith in God.
I liked how you bring to the poem how your mother inspired you to open your heart to God.
The end is a very good conclusion for the poem.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2014
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Thank you so much for this really lovely review, my friend, I am so pleased you enjoyed it. :) Sandra
Comment from Pullmanspb
This is one of those times hat e-mail can be misinterpreted. "And only mums can really understand." As a father who loves his children, and his adult children still love him, what about us involved and capable dads?
Your poem was filled with love and appreciation; both those shined throughout it.
Steven
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2014
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This is one of those times hat e-mail can be misinterpreted. "And only mums can really understand." As a father who loves his children, and his adult children still love him, what about us involved and capable dads?
Your poem was filled with love and appreciation; both those shined throughout it.
Steven
Comment Written 24-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2014
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Hi Steven, my dad was the best dad I could have wished for. His love and guidance, he was always there when I needed his help. I couldn't have wished for a more loving dad. But the things in my poem were the things I could only talk about to my mum, and dad knew this. I have written a poem about him, a while ago now. I was totally broken when he died suddenly, my mum too, I do believe she died because she missed him too much to continue without him. I can understand that, but I wish they were still with me. I am sorry if you thought I was putting down the love of a father, that was a million miles from my mind. I am pleased you liked my words, Steven, thank you so very much. xsx Sandra
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That's why I hesitated in mentioning men. I was in no way offended
Happy Thanksgiving
Steven
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Happy Thanksgiving to you too, my friend! xsx
Comment from LIJ Red
Agreed. This world is such a place that one must at times look above and beyond it, or be slowly crushed by the inert weight of it. This looks close to a sonnet, somehow.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2014
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Agreed. This world is such a place that one must at times look above and beyond it, or be slowly crushed by the inert weight of it. This looks close to a sonnet, somehow.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2014
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Thank you so much for your lovely review, my friend, I am so pleased you liked it. :) Sandra
Comment from Smoothiecool
good luck in the contest
your words allow the reader to see and feel that Mum would always build you up in times of need and to call upon the Lord now the loneliness now she is gone
yes the call on the Lord does quell one's troubles
good visual
good rhyme through out
flows well easy read
cheers Smoothiecool
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2014
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good luck in the contest
your words allow the reader to see and feel that Mum would always build you up in times of need and to call upon the Lord now the loneliness now she is gone
yes the call on the Lord does quell one's troubles
good visual
good rhyme through out
flows well easy read
cheers Smoothiecool
Comment Written 24-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2014
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Thank you so much, my friend! I am so pleased you enjoyed this one. :) Sandra xsx
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most welcome ..SC <:> Faye
