From our soul.
Viewing comments for Chapter 64 "Mysteries."Mostly romance.
14 total reviews
Comment from jkhudson
We had
been
the noise,
and
the silence.
Had tasted
with reckless
abandon
all the flavors
of passion,
united
in delightful
fantasies.
Very good Pili. Such a beautiful poem about soul mates!
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We had
been
the noise,
and
the silence.
Had tasted
with reckless
abandon
all the flavors
of passion,
united
in delightful
fantasies.
Very good Pili. Such a beautiful poem about soul mates!
Comment Written 21-Sep-2005
Comment from amaranthblue
I really loved that one... I think it is one of my very favorites of yours... Now I wish I would have saved the 6 for that one, oh the other one I loved to... You are simply amazing, the expressions you use the images and emotions you evoke with your words is absolutely breathtaking...
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I really loved that one... I think it is one of my very favorites of yours... Now I wish I would have saved the 6 for that one, oh the other one I loved to... You are simply amazing, the expressions you use the images and emotions you evoke with your words is absolutely breathtaking...
Comment Written 21-Sep-2005
Comment from desb
That was a good read once I'd worked it out thanks Pili.
The flow was really good and the images of this celestial journey were wonderful.
Another very good poem that's well worth reading.
Good work, well done
Des
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That was a good read once I'd worked it out thanks Pili.
The flow was really good and the images of this celestial journey were wonderful.
Another very good poem that's well worth reading.
Good work, well done
Des
Comment Written 19-Sep-2005
Comment from Lisloh
This went into my notebook of sixers.
One per author per month causes me to take notes...:)
This is simply Divine. And, I do mean Divine.
We must
accept
unsolved
mysteries,
beyond
our reach,
many are
the centuries
when we had been >> Think about taking out [when]
into each other.
.
Two old souls
floating
constantly
through time
and space,
two particles
dancing
under
the many suns.
Taste
of eternity
touched
our lips,
as we flowed
together,
in familiar
ways
of being,
over
and over
again.
We had
been
the noise,
and
the silence.
Had tasted
with reckless
abandon
all the flavors
of passion,
united
in delightful
fantasies.
We had
heard
the same
ancient music
forever,
had been
inside
each other's
chest,
touched by
equal
anguish,
equal pain.
I have
discovered
myself
in the depth
of your gaze
throughout
the times,
inspiring
my poetry.
I couldn't pick a favorite because it's all favorite...:)
Thank you for creating this and sharing.
Take care & be safe
Lisloh
No nits. Awesome write.
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This went into my notebook of sixers.
One per author per month causes me to take notes...:)
This is simply Divine. And, I do mean Divine.
We must
accept
unsolved
mysteries,
beyond
our reach,
many are
the centuries
when we had been >> Think about taking out [when]
into each other.
.
Two old souls
floating
constantly
through time
and space,
two particles
dancing
under
the many suns.
Taste
of eternity
touched
our lips,
as we flowed
together,
in familiar
ways
of being,
over
and over
again.
We had
been
the noise,
and
the silence.
Had tasted
with reckless
abandon
all the flavors
of passion,
united
in delightful
fantasies.
We had
heard
the same
ancient music
forever,
had been
inside
each other's
chest,
touched by
equal
anguish,
equal pain.
I have
discovered
myself
in the depth
of your gaze
throughout
the times,
inspiring
my poetry.
I couldn't pick a favorite because it's all favorite...:)
Thank you for creating this and sharing.
Take care & be safe
Lisloh
No nits. Awesome write.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2005
Comment from tyjema
The last stanza in this poem is perfect. If that was all I read I would be ok with that. Good poem.
I have
discovered
myself
in the depth
of your gaze
throughout
the times,
inspiring
my poetry.
Thanks for sharing.
The grace of the Lord Jesus Christ and the love of God and the fellowship of the Holy Spirit be with you, Amen.
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The last stanza in this poem is perfect. If that was all I read I would be ok with that. Good poem.
I have
discovered
myself
in the depth
of your gaze
throughout
the times,
inspiring
my poetry.
Thanks for sharing.
The grace of the Lord Jesus Christ and the love of God and the fellowship of the Holy Spirit be with you, Amen.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2005
Comment from sengwriter
Some good qualifing words to start with - Amazing acknowledgement, Befitting bindings, Cherished camaraderie and Darling Dream and so on. These all are just perfect match for your poem.
You've achieved almost ABCD of a soulful art of realizing love and passion, be it some sort of fantastic fantasy or rewarding reality of your life . What you've written here is a pleasant reading and deeply perceptable.
I may call it a love song, more than a poem. Hope you must be getting a very huge response here with such a rippling flow of sweet memories.
May God help you with more and more inspirations that you need to perform to keep your form as impressive as yours is now.
Good joy you give to us through your cute lines, I wonder, simply wonder.
Ch
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Some good qualifing words to start with - Amazing acknowledgement, Befitting bindings, Cherished camaraderie and Darling Dream and so on. These all are just perfect match for your poem.
You've achieved almost ABCD of a soulful art of realizing love and passion, be it some sort of fantastic fantasy or rewarding reality of your life . What you've written here is a pleasant reading and deeply perceptable.
I may call it a love song, more than a poem. Hope you must be getting a very huge response here with such a rippling flow of sweet memories.
May God help you with more and more inspirations that you need to perform to keep your form as impressive as yours is now.
Good joy you give to us through your cute lines, I wonder, simply wonder.
Ch
Comment Written 19-Sep-2005
Comment from Lainee
This is a most unusual piece of poetry Pili. Very original thoughts throughout with only a couple of hiccups to enhance the read.
many are
the centuries
we had been...when we had been...perhaps...
into each other.
floating
constantly
trough time ...through...
Goodluck always,
Lainee :O)
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This is a most unusual piece of poetry Pili. Very original thoughts throughout with only a couple of hiccups to enhance the read.
many are
the centuries
we had been...when we had been...perhaps...
into each other.
floating
constantly
trough time ...through...
Goodluck always,
Lainee :O)
Comment Written 19-Sep-2005
Comment from clhutchinson
trough time=through time
abandon= is a verb, how about "abandonment"
and had been
inside
each other's
chest,
. = eliminate 'and'
troughout =throughout
Beautiful flow of thoughts which follow through in expressing the theme. The bits and pieces come together with depth and illustrate the title with eloquence.
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trough time=through time
abandon= is a verb, how about "abandonment"
and had been
inside
each other's
chest,
. = eliminate 'and'
troughout =throughout
Beautiful flow of thoughts which follow through in expressing the theme. The bits and pieces come together with depth and illustrate the title with eloquence.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2005
Comment from Bryana
A very sensual and captivating poem mi amiga.
If I had experiences like these I would also be
inspired!
I have
discovered
myself
in the depth
of your gaze
throughout
the times,
inspiring
my poetry.
Buenas noches.
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A very sensual and captivating poem mi amiga.
If I had experiences like these I would also be
inspired!
I have
discovered
myself
in the depth
of your gaze
throughout
the times,
inspiring
my poetry.
Buenas noches.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2005
Comment from fly4hi
A beautiful poem, Pili. Again you use great wording and
imagery to drive home the feelings of strong love for the other.
Wonderful union for sure, but, you could both use a bath. :} fly
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A beautiful poem, Pili. Again you use great wording and
imagery to drive home the feelings of strong love for the other.
Wonderful union for sure, but, you could both use a bath. :} fly
Comment Written 19-Sep-2005
