Holiday greetings from PruittHealth
Sentiments shared with Hospice families34 total reviews
Comment from emrpoems
Solid abcb rhymes
Good alliteration--has/ higher
Created a vivid picture of the setting
Good use of enjambment allowing thoughts to flow smoothly fr om one line to another
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2014
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Solid abcb rhymes
Good alliteration--has/ higher
Created a vivid picture of the setting
Good use of enjambment allowing thoughts to flow smoothly fr om one line to another
Comment Written 23-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2014
Thank You so very much for your kind review and the wonderful stars you placed on display for all to see for "Holiday greetings from PruittHealth". I am a Hospice Chaplain and as such I am losing friends all the time and this is my holiday reminder to each of them that they are not forgotten by their loved one, their Hospice friends or God. May God Bless you, have a Happy Thanksgiving.
Comment from Chrisfiore
Greetings Dr. Nad,
It is a time of great cheer as the holiday season draws near, it is a sentiment that echoes across the land. It is a time to gather friends and families together and give thanks for the blessings we have received. This is an excellent greeting for your residents and their families. ;) Chrisfiore
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2014
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Greetings Dr. Nad,
It is a time of great cheer as the holiday season draws near, it is a sentiment that echoes across the land. It is a time to gather friends and families together and give thanks for the blessings we have received. This is an excellent greeting for your residents and their families. ;) Chrisfiore
Comment Written 23-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2014
Thank You so very much for your kind review and the wonderful stars you placed on display for all to see for "Holiday greetings from PruittHealth". I am a Hospice Chaplain and as such I am losing friends all the time and this is my holiday reminder to each of them that they are not forgotten by their loved one, their Hospice friends or God. May God Bless you, have a Happy Thanksgiving.
Comment from rjpurdy
Very nice. My wife is a hospice chaplin and this will make her smile for sure. Your poem has a nice rhythm and cadence. The rhyme scheme is natural and unforced giving the poem autheticity. Great work. rj
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2014
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Very nice. My wife is a hospice chaplin and this will make her smile for sure. Your poem has a nice rhythm and cadence. The rhyme scheme is natural and unforced giving the poem autheticity. Great work. rj
Comment Written 23-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2014
Thank You so very much for your kind review and the wonderful stars you placed on display for all to see for "Holiday greetings from PruittHealth". I am a Hospice Chaplain and as such I am losing friends all the time and this is my holiday reminder to each of them that they are not forgotten by their loved one, their Hospice friends or God. May God Bless you, have a Happy Thanksgiving.
Comment from Bill Schott
I guess I sense a poetic connection between the winter season and the idea of hospice, which fills my mind with finality. We will be seeing loss in this season and know the value of a hospice program. Nice poem.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2014
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I guess I sense a poetic connection between the winter season and the idea of hospice, which fills my mind with finality. We will be seeing loss in this season and know the value of a hospice program. Nice poem.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2014
Thank You so very much for your kind review, keen insight (I did not have before you shared it, but now I will adopt it as my own, Thank YOU very much) and the wonderful stars you placed on display for all to see for "Holiday greetings from PruittHealth". I am a Hospice Chaplain and as such I am losing friends all the time and this is my holiday reminder to each of them that they are not forgotten by their loved one, their Hospice friends or God. May God Bless you, have a Happy Thanksgiving.
Comment from mikemagine
HA! Classic! "Your friends at PruittHealth Hospice..." Sheesh! You could've also entered this when into the humor-prompt contest! Or just create one for THAT contest!
Thanks for sharing!
Mike
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2014
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HA! Classic! "Your friends at PruittHealth Hospice..." Sheesh! You could've also entered this when into the humor-prompt contest! Or just create one for THAT contest!
Thanks for sharing!
Mike
Comment Written 23-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2014
Thank You so very much for your kind review and the "SIX" wonderful stars you placed on display for all to see for "Holiday greetings from PruittHealth". I am a Hospice Chaplain and as such I am losing friends all the time and this is my holiday reminder to each of them that they are not forgotten by their loved one, their Hospice friends or God. May God Bless you, have a Happy Thanksgiving.
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Whoops! Yikes...I didn't know that the card was NOT meant to be witty...Sorry about that.
But, it really was a very fine poem. I saw no errors and it was very well written.
Sorry to hear you're losing friends...
Peace,
Mike
Comment from LIJ Red
A Pruitt corporation operated a nursing home in a small southern town a few years ago, a nice one as nursing homes go. The he who is absent, one hopes, is working the holiday caring for folks...
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2014
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A Pruitt corporation operated a nursing home in a small southern town a few years ago, a nice one as nursing homes go. The he who is absent, one hopes, is working the holiday caring for folks...
Comment Written 23-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2014
Thank You so very much for your kind comments and the wonderful stars you placed on display for all to see for "Holiday greetings from PruittHealth". I am a Hospice Chaplain and as such I am losing friends all the time and this is my holiday reminder to each of them that they are not forgotten by their loved one, their Hospice friends or God. If that SNF was in NC, SC, or GA it was probably one of the 97 Pruitt owns. May God Bless you, have a Happy Thanksgiving.
Comment from flamingstar
What a gentle, thoughtful poem with a beautiful message. You make such a good point about God having the higher perspective. It's His master plan!
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2014
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What a gentle, thoughtful poem with a beautiful message. You make such a good point about God having the higher perspective. It's His master plan!
Comment Written 23-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2014
Thank You so very much for your kind review and the wonderful stars you placed on display for all to see for "Holiday greetings from PruittHealth". I am a Hospice Chaplain and as such I am losing friends all the time and this is my holiday reminder to each of them that they are not forgotten by their loved one, their Hospice friends or God. May God Bless you, have a Happy Thanksgiving.
Comment from Kenneth Schaal
Echoes of a sweet sentiment, and enjoyable. Your quatrains are very readable but could use some tightening up, some word conservation. Best of luck. Kenny
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2014
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Echoes of a sweet sentiment, and enjoyable. Your quatrains are very readable but could use some tightening up, some word conservation. Best of luck. Kenny
Comment Written 23-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2014
Thank You so very much for your kind review and the wonderful stars you placed on display for all to see for "Holiday greetings from PruittHealth". I am a Hospice Chaplain and as such I am losing friends all the time and this is my holiday reminder to each of them that they are not forgotten by their loved one, their Hospice friends or God. May God Bless you, have a Happy Thanksgiving.
Comment from nancyjam
This is a kind and considerate greeting for
those who you take care of.
It's nice that you remind them of God's care
and your thoughts and prayers during this
Christmas season. Nancy
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
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This is a kind and considerate greeting for
those who you take care of.
It's nice that you remind them of God's care
and your thoughts and prayers during this
Christmas season. Nancy
Comment Written 22-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
Thank You so very much for your kind review and the wonderful stars you placed on display for all to see for "Holiday greetings from PruittHealth". I am a Hospice Chaplain and as such I am losing friends all the time and this is my holiday reminder to each of them that they are not forgotten by their loved one, their Hospice friends or God. May God Bless you, have a Happy Thanksgiving.
Comment from adewpearl
solid use of abcb rhyming
good use of enjambment to keep thought flowing from line to line
vivid detail of setting with strong sensory appeal
good consonance of L and P sounds in special place
good alliteration in has a higher
what a lovely holiday greeting from the staff of this health center to the families it serves :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
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solid use of abcb rhyming
good use of enjambment to keep thought flowing from line to line
vivid detail of setting with strong sensory appeal
good consonance of L and P sounds in special place
good alliteration in has a higher
what a lovely holiday greeting from the staff of this health center to the families it serves :-) Brooke
Comment Written 22-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
Thank You so very much for your kind review and the wonderful stars you placed on display for all to see for "Holiday greetings from PruittHealth". I am a Hospice Chaplain and as such I am losing friends all the time and this is my holiday reminder to each of them that they are not forgotten by their loved one, their Hospice friends or God. May God Bless you, have a Happy Thanksgiving.
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I wish you a Happy Thanksgiving, my friend - what a wonderful calling that you've answered.
