Comment from Gargantuan2

Excellent

I can well imagine Sawyer defeating dragons in his sleep, but the inverse of picturing a knight in armor sleeping in that distinct position would be a 'knight-mare'. Thanks for the positive poetry, I needed something like that today :)

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014

Thanks so much, Gargantuan :-) Brooke

Comment from GWinterwin

Excellent

Good poem my friend about the fantasy world. Good word flow and rhyming are always prevalent in your work. Good story from fantasyland.

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014

GWinterwin, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from Maureen's Pen

Excellent

Dear Brooke, First I must say that picture brings back memories of Ainsley. Yup she fell asleep in the strangest positions possible. A great skilled story poem which has brought some some smiles to me. My kids always loved their story time:) I enjoyed this one so much as always your children's poems bring memories and joy.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014

Maureen, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from Aussie

Excellent

Bums away! I loved your dragon poem; have a collection of Harry Potter's dragons - between them and my fairy boxes - just a kid, that's me. Well written and most enjoyable addition to Sawyer's book of poems. ;-)

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014

Kay, thank you, my friend :-) I'm sure Miranda would love to see your collection of fairy boxes :-) Brooke

Comment from nancyjam

Excellent

Well, slaying dragons and drowning monsters
can really poop you out! this is a wonderful tale and delightful,
adventure for any young boy. Lots of exciting visuals and action.
Beautifully told with excellent rhyme and meter.
Sawyer looks so comfortable!

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014

Nancyjam, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from Jackarrie

Excellent

I love it Brooke, the image of the little warrior in bed tucked away in his own little world.

the poem flows beautifully and a very enjoyable to read it.

well written
well done
Mary

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014

Thank you so much, Mary :-) Brooke

Comment from Kingsland

Excellent

Dragons and Unicorns, pixies with fairy dust. I really enjoyed reading this light hearted verse. It was well written and flowed smoothly within its thoughts and measures. An excellent piece of poetic art that I enjoyed reading... John

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014

Thanks so much, John :-) Brooke

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Cute picture and so fitting for your words. I enjoyed reading your poem. I liked the flow--it had a kind of sing-song sound to me as I was reading it. No changes can I suggest. Good job and thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014

Thanks so much, jannypan :-) Brooke

Comment from harmony13

Excellent

Excellent poem! The poem flows and connects well. The author's words were filled with great fantasy, excitement
and imagination. The artwork is absolutely perfect and
compliments well the theme of this poem.

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014

harmony, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from kanimozhi T

Excellent

A nice hero, indeed. I just love the poem like a child. I too dread the dragon. Thanks to the hero. he saves us. Thanks for sharing. Take care.

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014

kanimozhi, thank you so much :-) Brooke

reply by kanimozhi T on 22-Nov-2014

Most welcome:)