When Dragons Sailed the Skyways
a story poem in 7/6/8/6 meter142 total reviews
Comment from chasennov
a story poem in 7/6/8/6 meter 'When Dragons Sailed the Skyways.' The Knight sure found a safe haven in a nice, warm bed. What a lovely metered poem you have created here about champion Dragon slayer, Master Sawyer, Brooke. Well done.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
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a story poem in 7/6/8/6 meter 'When Dragons Sailed the Skyways.' The Knight sure found a safe haven in a nice, warm bed. What a lovely metered poem you have created here about champion Dragon slayer, Master Sawyer, Brooke. Well done.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
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Thanks so much, chasennov :-) Brooke
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You are always welcome, Brooke.
Comment from gramalot8
Brooke, what a sweet wonderful poem. Every child loves to read of dragons, and knights and saving the day. And, yes, a well earned sleepy time in the end. Thanks for sharing with us as always, your beautiful poetry. Jerri
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
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Brooke, what a sweet wonderful poem. Every child loves to read of dragons, and knights and saving the day. And, yes, a well earned sleepy time in the end. Thanks for sharing with us as always, your beautiful poetry. Jerri
Comment Written 21-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
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Jerri, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
That's quite an eventful day and after reading all about that world I'm glad I live in this world...or do I? I love the picture. Great job
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
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That's quite an eventful day and after reading all about that world I'm glad I live in this world...or do I? I love the picture. Great job
Comment Written 21-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
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ExperiencingLiphe, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from l.raven
OMG Brooke...Sawyer at his best...I always thought my kids were at their best when they were sleeping...I love your poem...made me think of Puff The Magic dragon...very well written...I love it...Luff Linda xxoo love
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
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OMG Brooke...Sawyer at his best...I always thought my kids were at their best when they were sleeping...I love your poem...made me think of Puff The Magic dragon...very well written...I love it...Luff Linda xxoo love
Comment Written 21-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
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Linda, thank you, my friend :-) Brooke
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you are soooooooooo welcome Brooke...Luff Linda
Comment from jackpeg
What a laugh this gave me at the end of it. I was wondering if your grandson was going to be mentioned. You didn't, but he was strongly intimated even though the photo was some other child. Wonderful story-line (Puff the Magic Dragon) sort of.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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What a laugh this gave me at the end of it. I was wondering if your grandson was going to be mentioned. You didn't, but he was strongly intimated even though the photo was some other child. Wonderful story-line (Puff the Magic Dragon) sort of.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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Thanks so much for the sixth star, Jack, and for letting me know how much you enjoyed this one. The child in the photo is, indeed, my grandson Sawyer :_) Brooke
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He'll love this one. You'll have to read (or recite it) to him over and over. Better get to memorizing it.
Comment from GWHARGIS
Great adventure in this one. I can remember my oldest saving me from the sharks that surrounded my bed. LOL. Great tale of the worn out adventurer. Nice rhythm and the excitement didn't end. Gretchen
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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Great adventure in this one. I can remember my oldest saving me from the sharks that surrounded my bed. LOL. Great tale of the worn out adventurer. Nice rhythm and the excitement didn't end. Gretchen
Comment Written 21-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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Thanks, Gretchen, for your thoughtful response to my poem :-) Brooke
Comment from Willowsong
This is truly adorable, especially the last stanza. Beautiful rhythm, meter and rhyme with a lovely classic fairytale feel to it. The precious photo adds that final touch to the piece well.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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This is truly adorable, especially the last stanza. Beautiful rhythm, meter and rhyme with a lovely classic fairytale feel to it. The precious photo adds that final touch to the piece well.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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Willowsong, thank you so much for your generous response to this poem :-) Brooke
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You're most welcome :)
Comment from Zue65
Oh my, oh my! I just love Sawyer's photo with his butt up, comfortably tucked and covered by the blanket. The picture gives us a feeling of quiet time, when everything is at rest and sounds so peaceful despite the apparent disarray around. I can no longer comment on the poem, because it is excellent my friend. God bless.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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Oh my, oh my! I just love Sawyer's photo with his butt up, comfortably tucked and covered by the blanket. The picture gives us a feeling of quiet time, when everything is at rest and sounds so peaceful despite the apparent disarray around. I can no longer comment on the poem, because it is excellent my friend. God bless.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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nassus, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from kiwisteveh
A grand tale of imagination of the heroic knight and his quest to save the land. I like that you didn't give the game away until the very end!
Great rhythm and rhyme as usual.
Steve
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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A grand tale of imagination of the heroic knight and his quest to save the land. I like that you didn't give the game away until the very end!
Great rhythm and rhyme as usual.
Steve
Comment Written 21-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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Thanks so much, Steve :-) Brooke
Comment from maggieadams
My gosh this is good...any child would love the rhythm and the imagery. As an adult, I loved the rhythm,mtoo, but also the rhyme and the poetic devices like alliteration. Your poetry not only has voice, but also "sound". Wish I had a six, but you don't need anymore...it is a winner.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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My gosh this is good...any child would love the rhythm and the imagery. As an adult, I loved the rhythm,mtoo, but also the rhyme and the poetic devices like alliteration. Your poetry not only has voice, but also "sound". Wish I had a six, but you don't need anymore...it is a winner.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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Thanks so much, Maggie :-) Brooke
