Comment from rod007

Excellent

These childhood fantastic dreams are so real and are captured with imagination and flair in this poem. Perhaps at breakfast, the hero will have honey dipped pancakes as a treat and celebration of his glorious heroism. Well done, Brooke.

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 Comment Written 20-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2014

rod, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from padumachitta

Excellent

Hi..a fanicful poem. I still dream like this, chasing through snow to save the village, or jumping trees to save the forest. But, your poem, well, it is a boys dream, perhpas,
Sometimes I feel sorry for dragons, cause they get such a bum rap...
padumachitta

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 Comment Written 20-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2014

Thanks so much, padumachitta - I know. I'm sure those dragons are actually fine fellows. LOL :-) Brooke

reply by padumachitta on 20-Nov-2014

Hey...do you remember Puff, cause he was a right kind of guy...and really what about Pern...ok...I digress...back to my Ididorod story...pc