Eternal sparks.
Josiah (Jo-Jo)110 total reviews
Comment from Dutchie
Hi Roy. Wonderful poem you wrote as a tribute to your grandson. Love the picture with his sparkling eyes. You have a reason to be pride and you expressed it so well in this wonderful poem with smooth flow and great unforced rhyme.
Really a joy to read. Fia
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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Hi Roy. Wonderful poem you wrote as a tribute to your grandson. Love the picture with his sparkling eyes. You have a reason to be pride and you expressed it so well in this wonderful poem with smooth flow and great unforced rhyme.
Really a joy to read. Fia
Comment Written 20-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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Thank you Fia for the lovely review and wonderful comments, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Charlene0513
To royowen,
A beautifully written poem that glorifies God when you acknowledge His ultimate gift of life.
Very nice flow and cadence to your quatrains.
Charlene
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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To royowen,
A beautifully written poem that glorifies God when you acknowledge His ultimate gift of life.
Very nice flow and cadence to your quatrains.
Charlene
Comment Written 20-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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Thank you Charlene for these most gracious words and superb review, I appreciate them, blessings, Roy.
Comment from TOMORAL
A miracle baby, indeed. And such a handsome and blessed young man. God has plans for this young man, yes He does. Beautifully written and expressed. I have tears of happiness in my eyes.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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A miracle baby, indeed. And such a handsome and blessed young man. God has plans for this young man, yes He does. Beautifully written and expressed. I have tears of happiness in my eyes.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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Thank you so much for the wonderful comments and great review, blessings, Roy.
Comment from thee-name
Excellent Quatrain poem. Inspiring and emotional writing.
ETERNAL SPARKS HAVE LIT YOUR EYES
THOUGH YET EXPLORED, THIS FUTURE LIES
FOR ONLY GOD CAN LIGHT THIS FLAME
NO THOUGH CONCEIVED CAN THWART
GOD'S CLAIM.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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Excellent Quatrain poem. Inspiring and emotional writing.
ETERNAL SPARKS HAVE LIT YOUR EYES
THOUGH YET EXPLORED, THIS FUTURE LIES
FOR ONLY GOD CAN LIGHT THIS FLAME
NO THOUGH CONCEIVED CAN THWART
GOD'S CLAIM.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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Thank you for this wonderfully scribed review and great review, blessings, Roy.
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THANK YOU!
Comment from butterfly4265
What a wonderful dedication to your miracle grandson! Even without the Author Notes, it is abundantly clear just how loved and wonderfully special he is. The poem has a very natural flow with good rhyming and a very heavy dose of pride! The photo is adorable and just the icing on the cake. Very well done and the very best of luck in the contest. :-)
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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What a wonderful dedication to your miracle grandson! Even without the Author Notes, it is abundantly clear just how loved and wonderfully special he is. The poem has a very natural flow with good rhyming and a very heavy dose of pride! The photo is adorable and just the icing on the cake. Very well done and the very best of luck in the contest. :-)
Comment Written 20-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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Thank you so much for this lovely review and the great compliment, I appreciate them, blessings, Roy,
Comment from padumachitta
Hi...a loving poem by a loving pen. It sure comes through what you believe in and what and who you love. I can not say I understand all the references, but it is not needed to enjoy the poem.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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Hi...a loving poem by a loving pen. It sure comes through what you believe in and what and who you love. I can not say I understand all the references, but it is not needed to enjoy the poem.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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Thank you so much for the wonderful review, and lovely comments, blessings, Roy.
Comment from c_lucas
Between you and Brooke, you should be able to capture many a Fanstorian heart with your stories of your grandchildren. This is very well written. Thanksgiving to you and yours.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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Between you and Brooke, you should be able to capture many a Fanstorian heart with your stories of your grandchildren. This is very well written. Thanksgiving to you and yours.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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Thanks Charlie for the awesome review, blessings, Roy.
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You're welcome, Roy. Charlie
Comment from Ekim777
Our poet has presented us with a poem as beautiful as psalm and perhaps as equally profound. I certainly like the psalm that you quote in the author's note. It seems miracles can occur even with the blessings of Mother Nature. The lines flow clearly and with grace. As for the last line, I know not what it means.
-Ekim777
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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Our poet has presented us with a poem as beautiful as psalm and perhaps as equally profound. I certainly like the psalm that you quote in the author's note. It seems miracles can occur even with the blessings of Mother Nature. The lines flow clearly and with grace. As for the last line, I know not what it means.
-Ekim777
Comment Written 20-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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Thank you for this wonderful review and comments, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
I am so plesed to read a grandfather's unabashed
pride in his grandchild.
Your grandson will one day read this poem and feel the same pride you feel for him now.
Congratulations a beautiful dedication to a precious child.
:-) Shirley
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2014
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I am so plesed to read a grandfather's unabashed
pride in his grandchild.
Your grandson will one day read this poem and feel the same pride you feel for him now.
Congratulations a beautiful dedication to a precious child.
:-) Shirley
Comment Written 20-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2014
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Thank you Shirley for this wonderfully empathetic and ind review and stars, blessings Roy.
Comment from Eric1
Hi Roy, You praise your Grandson to heaven and back here, But I would think Jo is very lucky too, to have a Grandfather writing these words would have made me very proud, Jo is a miracle child from what you tell us, but he is also a very rich child to have a loving Grandfather and family.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2014
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Hi Roy, You praise your Grandson to heaven and back here, But I would think Jo is very lucky too, to have a Grandfather writing these words would have made me very proud, Jo is a miracle child from what you tell us, but he is also a very rich child to have a loving Grandfather and family.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2014
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Thank you Eric for these kind words, you are very gracious, and give really good reviews as well, thanks my friend, blessings, Roy.
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Thank you Roy, but it really was my pleasure.
