Eternal sparks.
Josiah (Jo-Jo)110 total reviews
Comment from Wendyanne
What a handsome little boy Roy and you have every reason to be proud of him. Your author's notes helped me to understand your poem better. Well done.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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What a handsome little boy Roy and you have every reason to be proud of him. Your author's notes helped me to understand your poem better. Well done.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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Thank you Wendyanne, for these gracious words and excellent review, blessings, Roy.
Comment from livelylinda
Roy: such beauty in your words! And, you go ahead and brag on that gorgeous little boy who has been chosen to grace your life! A fabulous tribute to a great boy. Linda
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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Roy: such beauty in your words! And, you go ahead and brag on that gorgeous little boy who has been chosen to grace your life! A fabulous tribute to a great boy. Linda
Comment Written 20-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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Thank you Linda, for this beautiful review, comments and excellent rating, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Bill Schott
This is a very nice set of quatrains to honor Jo-Jo. The revision of Psalms 139:13-16 works really well in this format and is universal for us all. Nice.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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This is a very nice set of quatrains to honor Jo-Jo. The revision of Psalms 139:13-16 works really well in this format and is universal for us all. Nice.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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Thank you Bill for the great review, and wonderful comments, I appreciate them, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Just2Write
A beautiful and pride filled poem about your miracle baby Joshua. Your quatrains flow well, and I'm sure this tribute poem to him and God will be cherished throughout his life.
So often a baby is not given the chance to thrive. Look what happened when this one was!
Rose.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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A beautiful and pride filled poem about your miracle baby Joshua. Your quatrains flow well, and I'm sure this tribute poem to him and God will be cherished throughout his life.
So often a baby is not given the chance to thrive. Look what happened when this one was!
Rose.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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Thank you Rose, yes they are appreciated, they are all a gift, but when one is given like this, you wonder....great review and comments, blessings, Roy.
Comment from pattipac
Your well penned poem of faith in our benevolent God, and his gift of your gifted grandson is a testament to all believers that God still works in our lives. Deserving of six-stars, but sadly I have used mine. Have a blessed day.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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Your well penned poem of faith in our benevolent God, and his gift of your gifted grandson is a testament to all believers that God still works in our lives. Deserving of six-stars, but sadly I have used mine. Have a blessed day.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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Thanks Pat for the wonderful review and lovely comments, blessings, Roy.
Comment from harmony13
Excellent poem! What a beautiful tribute to your grandson.
The author's words are clear, heart felt and creative. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is great (how cute he is) and compliments well the theme of this poem.
Thanks for the author's notes.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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Excellent poem! What a beautiful tribute to your grandson.
The author's words are clear, heart felt and creative. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is great (how cute he is) and compliments well the theme of this poem.
Thanks for the author's notes.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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Thank you so much for this most wonderful review and great comments, blessings, Roy,
Comment from kanimozhi T
An excellent poem with beautiful rhyme scheme. Author notes increases the intensity. thanks for the hearty sharing. God bless.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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An excellent poem with beautiful rhyme scheme. Author notes increases the intensity. thanks for the hearty sharing. God bless.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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Thank you so much for the excellent feedback and great comments, blessings, Roy.
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Most welcome.Take care.
Comment from tbacha58
Life's glow and grace flow in your veins
God's light will shine, His peace ordains,
He chose your name and wrote this creed
you're sealed in Christ, His chosen seed.
Yes my dear friend, this is a miracle, he is so so cute, you ought to be proud of his intelligence. Your belief in Christ made that miracle come true.
My son aged 43 had cancer Lymphoma 6 years ago, as I am a believer, I have Jesus Picture, I prayed and asked Him to cure my son from cancer. And He did thank God. Jesus is love. Beautiful poem. Love Terry xoox
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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Life's glow and grace flow in your veins
God's light will shine, His peace ordains,
He chose your name and wrote this creed
you're sealed in Christ, His chosen seed.
Yes my dear friend, this is a miracle, he is so so cute, you ought to be proud of his intelligence. Your belief in Christ made that miracle come true.
My son aged 43 had cancer Lymphoma 6 years ago, as I am a believer, I have Jesus Picture, I prayed and asked Him to cure my son from cancer. And He did thank God. Jesus is love. Beautiful poem. Love Terry xoox
Comment Written 20-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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Terry, so glad you shared your son's testimony, really God's testimony, He is so merciful and kind, thank you for this beautifully empathetic review and enlightening comments, bless you my friend, Roy.
Comment from Nosha17
Yes, we are fortunate to live in a Western society where children are given the chance to flourish and shine. Luckily, my two children, in spite of the hostility against my family in the area we lived in in New York, outshone the local students and went on to greater things. How sad that some children are deprived of the chance. Your grandson is very cute and I am sure with continued encouragement he will succeed. Well chosen rhymes and imagery to convey your message. Enjoyable read. Faye
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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Yes, we are fortunate to live in a Western society where children are given the chance to flourish and shine. Luckily, my two children, in spite of the hostility against my family in the area we lived in in New York, outshone the local students and went on to greater things. How sad that some children are deprived of the chance. Your grandson is very cute and I am sure with continued encouragement he will succeed. Well chosen rhymes and imagery to convey your message. Enjoyable read. Faye
Comment Written 20-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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Thank you Faye, we brought something to the U.S.! Thanks for the great review, and comments, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Genya
What a beautiful tribute to your grandson. A little miracle baby that looks like his gifts and talents will lead him to high places. This little one was meant to live as it seems he has a special pulse in life. Beautiful words. He chose your name and wrote this creed you're sealed in Christ, his chosen seed. Yes, one very special child. Genya
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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What a beautiful tribute to your grandson. A little miracle baby that looks like his gifts and talents will lead him to high places. This little one was meant to live as it seems he has a special pulse in life. Beautiful words. He chose your name and wrote this creed you're sealed in Christ, his chosen seed. Yes, one very special child. Genya
Comment Written 20-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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Thank you Genya for this wonderful review and great review, blessings, Roy.
