Eternal sparks.
Josiah (Jo-Jo)110 total reviews
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is just beautiful, royowen, the story of his survival through God's grace and even the name he was given, is wonderful. he does seem to show God''s glory on his face.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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this is just beautiful, royowen, the story of his survival through God's grace and even the name he was given, is wonderful. he does seem to show God''s glory on his face.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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Thanks SW for the gracious and most outstanding review, and wholehearted comments, I appreciate them so much, I appreciate the six stars, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Simple Reflection
He is beautiful (or handsome) I should say! I dedicated my children to the Lord when they were babies and each has grown to serve Him as they have become adults. I pray this young man will have a similar path. It is obvious God has a plan for him. Well written poem with well chosen, expressive words.
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He is beautiful (or handsome) I should say! I dedicated my children to the Lord when they were babies and each has grown to serve Him as they have become adults. I pray this young man will have a similar path. It is obvious God has a plan for him. Well written poem with well chosen, expressive words.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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Thank you for this wonderful review, Jo and his elder brother have been dedicated, their younger brother yet, glad to hear from you, blessings, Roy.
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a well written ode to this bright eyed, cute, little boy. It seems like he is destined for great things as explained in the poem and the notes.
We have miracle babies in our family too. We have twins that were born three months premature who are also around five.
It may have been a magic year for miracles.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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This is a well written ode to this bright eyed, cute, little boy. It seems like he is destined for great things as explained in the poem and the notes.
We have miracle babies in our family too. We have twins that were born three months premature who are also around five.
It may have been a magic year for miracles.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 21-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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It is a great destiny God has planned for them, I guess it's up to to them to grasp it in both hands, great review, thank you, blessings, Roy.
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You're welcome, Roy.
Joan
Comment from Jackarrie
This is a wonderful poem about your grandson, He is a beautiful boy. I know the feeling of having a grandchild who is gifted, especially after difficult beginnings.
Very well written
I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Mary
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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This is a wonderful poem about your grandson, He is a beautiful boy. I know the feeling of having a grandchild who is gifted, especially after difficult beginnings.
Very well written
I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Mary
Comment Written 21-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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Thank you Mary for this empathetic and gracious review, I think a lot of people can identify with difficult pregnancies, my daughter had miscarried a short while before, so it was an anxious time, blessings, Roy
Comment from Smoothiecool
good luck in the contest
your chosen words allow the reader to see and feel the claim God had from the beginning on Josiah
good visual
good enjambment through sentences allows flow
good rhyme theme through out verses not forced
god alliteration in
eternal, eyes
through, this
conceived, can, claim
glow, grace
sealed, seed
flows well easy read
cheers Smoothiecool
your allowed to be proud
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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good luck in the contest
your chosen words allow the reader to see and feel the claim God had from the beginning on Josiah
good visual
good enjambment through sentences allows flow
good rhyme theme through out verses not forced
god alliteration in
eternal, eyes
through, this
conceived, can, claim
glow, grace
sealed, seed
flows well easy read
cheers Smoothiecool
your allowed to be proud
Comment Written 21-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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Thank you so much SC for this great affirming review and gracious wishes, blessings, Roy.
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most welcome...SC
Comment from chasennov
Josiah (Jo-Jo) "Eternal sparks." This is an excellent poem you have created here and I can see why you should be a very proud Grandfather to Josiah. Well done, Roy.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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Josiah (Jo-Jo) "Eternal sparks." This is an excellent poem you have created here and I can see why you should be a very proud Grandfather to Josiah. Well done, Roy.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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Thank you so much for this wonderful review and empathetic review. Blessings, Roy.
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You are most welcome, Roy.
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You are most welcome, Roy.
Comment from Willowsong
This is a lovely tribute to your grandson. The love you have for him shines brightly in your words. He has an amazing journey to share with others as he grows and matures. Many blessings upon him and those he touches in this life. Excellent contest entry. Best wishes to you :)
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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This is a lovely tribute to your grandson. The love you have for him shines brightly in your words. He has an amazing journey to share with others as he grows and matures. Many blessings upon him and those he touches in this life. Excellent contest entry. Best wishes to you :)
Comment Written 21-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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Thank you so much for your lovely, kind and empathetic review, and best wishes, blessings, Roy
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You are most welcome :)
Comment from marijmd
What a swet poem in honor of your grandson's bday. Cute kid too! I truly like the last section - very powerful ending:
Life's glow and grace flow in your veins
God's light will shine, His peace ordains,
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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What a swet poem in honor of your grandson's bday. Cute kid too! I truly like the last section - very powerful ending:
Life's glow and grace flow in your veins
God's light will shine, His peace ordains,
Comment Written 21-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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Thank you so much for this wonderful review, and great comments, Maria, blessings, Roy,
Comment from tdragonfly
What a beautiful story. You are right it is all part of God's greater plan. He has truly shown his hands in the life of this great child. May Jo truly have a wonderful life.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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What a beautiful story. You are right it is all part of God's greater plan. He has truly shown his hands in the life of this great child. May Jo truly have a wonderful life.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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Thank you for you great wishes, your gracious review, and lovely comments, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Joan E.
What a cutie--thanks for sharing your "miracle baby" grandson--I enjoy him vicariously, especially since my son is a 38-year old bachelor! I admired your rhymed couplets plus "flame" and "seed" metaphors. Best wishes in the quatrains contest- Joan
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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What a cutie--thanks for sharing your "miracle baby" grandson--I enjoy him vicariously, especially since my son is a 38-year old bachelor! I admired your rhymed couplets plus "flame" and "seed" metaphors. Best wishes in the quatrains contest- Joan
Comment Written 21-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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Thank you Joan for the lovely review and well wishes, I appreciate them, blessings, Roy.
