Eternal sparks.
Josiah (Jo-Jo)110 total reviews
Comment from Hareem.S
This is a beautiful poem about your grandson. He is indeed a miracle child and this is truly an amazing poem. I love the strong expressions and the rhyming stanzas.
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2014
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This is a beautiful poem about your grandson. He is indeed a miracle child and this is truly an amazing poem. I love the strong expressions and the rhyming stanzas.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2014
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Thank you for this brilliant review, great comments and wonderful stars, blessings, Roy.
Comment from angelface2
What a beautiful poem about your grandson, a miracle child. He looks like a happy child. Hope he stays that way. You have every reason to be proud of him. :>D Miss Sally
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
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What a beautiful poem about your grandson, a miracle child. He looks like a happy child. Hope he stays that way. You have every reason to be proud of him. :>D Miss Sally
Comment Written 22-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
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Thanks so much for the lovely review and great comments, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Chrisfiore
Greetings royowen,
An exceptional little poem in tribute to your grandson. And a bit of an education with your author's notes. Precious indeed is the embryo that God sees and the life He bestows to each one of us! My best to you with this contest entry. ;) Chrisfiore
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
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Greetings royowen,
An exceptional little poem in tribute to your grandson. And a bit of an education with your author's notes. Precious indeed is the embryo that God sees and the life He bestows to each one of us! My best to you with this contest entry. ;) Chrisfiore
Comment Written 22-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
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Thank you so much for this brilliant review, comments and wonderful stars blessings, Roy.
Comment from JPilcher
This is a beautiful piece. Your rhythm & ryhme - spot on. Very much enjoyed the read! Good luck in the contest!! :) Jill P.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
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This is a beautiful piece. Your rhythm & ryhme - spot on. Very much enjoyed the read! Good luck in the contest!! :) Jill P.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
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Thanks Jill for the lovely comments and review, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Martin Chan
The poem " Eternal Sparks" is a nicely composed Quatrain Poetry Contest poem written with a strong theme with strong presentation. I even like it with full appreciation after I read the author's notes and pride of the author.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
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The poem " Eternal Sparks" is a nicely composed Quatrain Poetry Contest poem written with a strong theme with strong presentation. I even like it with full appreciation after I read the author's notes and pride of the author.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
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Thank you Martin for this outstanding review, comments and brilliant stars, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Adri7enne
A lovely poem for a beloved, special grandson. He will treasure his gift as he grows ever older and wiser. It's good to feel blessed and to sing your appreciation. Life can be rich, even as we grow older. Lovely flow and terrific rhymes and meter. Much enjoyed, roy.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
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A lovely poem for a beloved, special grandson. He will treasure his gift as he grows ever older and wiser. It's good to feel blessed and to sing your appreciation. Life can be rich, even as we grow older. Lovely flow and terrific rhymes and meter. Much enjoyed, roy.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
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Thank you so much for this lovely review and comments, blessings, Roy.
Comment from billmetz
What can I say? This is from the Grandmother for a Grandchild that she adores. She is happy he is alive and well and is sharing her love. I like the poem and could use it on anyone of my Grandchildren.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
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What can I say? This is from the Grandmother for a Grandchild that she adores. She is happy he is alive and well and is sharing her love. I like the poem and could use it on anyone of my Grandchildren.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
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Thanks for the great review, if it was so good why only 4 stars? Blessings, Roy.
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It really deserves a 5 star. I'll change it.
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Thank you so much, bless you,
Comment from TAB_that's me
You have every reason to be prideful - you're a Grandpa:) Great poem and tribute to your grandson thanking God for what He made.
Teresa
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
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You have every reason to be prideful - you're a Grandpa:) Great poem and tribute to your grandson thanking God for what He made.
Teresa
Comment Written 22-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
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Thanks Teresa, lovely comments and great review, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Lena Borghi
Roy,
What a beautiful message to your treasured grandson and in it, a testament of faith and song of praise to the most high.
Beautiful quatrains with good meter and flawless rhymes. It warrants a slow and peaceful read as its underlying message of gratitude shines through.
Beautifully penned. Blessings for your grandson on his birthday and always and to your family.
Best of luck in the contest.
Best wishes,
Lena
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
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Roy,
What a beautiful message to your treasured grandson and in it, a testament of faith and song of praise to the most high.
Beautiful quatrains with good meter and flawless rhymes. It warrants a slow and peaceful read as its underlying message of gratitude shines through.
Beautifully penned. Blessings for your grandson on his birthday and always and to your family.
Best of luck in the contest.
Best wishes,
Lena
Comment Written 22-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
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Thank Lena for this exceptional review and comments, much obliged, blessings, Roy,
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You're quite welcome, Roy.
Lena
Comment from alexisleech
Whatever your religious beliefs, your wonderful poem is inspirational. It's always nice to know the reason someone is inspired to write a poem, so your authors notes made it even better. Be as proud as you like - you deserve top be! Alexis x
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
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Whatever your religious beliefs, your wonderful poem is inspirational. It's always nice to know the reason someone is inspired to write a poem, so your authors notes made it even better. Be as proud as you like - you deserve top be! Alexis x
Comment Written 22-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
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Thank you Alexis, for this brilliant review, comments and excellent stars, I am so appreciative, blessings, Roy.
