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Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "Death Wish."
Poems of Random wandering; an inward look.
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Comment from
Life is but a dream.
I am deeply honored that you would use my photograph to support your poem. Thank you very much and I wish you many more poems and words that are golden and sparkle.
Sincerely,
Olga
Comment Written 19-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2014
Olga: I am lucky to have found that photo. You have done lot more important work by presenting that real face of poverty to world; I only gathered words and phrases to give it a voice. Thanks for your response. Please read my poems on my profile and take more photographs to show the world as is. Best regards.-Arun
Comment from
gypsymoth
I can't say I like your poem but you did it very well.
It seems unlikely the poor soul shown in the picture will
obtain such a splendid funeral. She is a study in misery.
The picture is very fitting to your words.
Gypsymoth
Comment Written 19-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2014
Gypsy Moth: The picture itself is a statement of human failure to take care of our own species. No answer to that. My poem is based on a similar but bit light hearted Urdu couplet I had read somewhere; the picture spawned the poem and Urdu couplet gave me the inspiration. Thanks.
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