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Our Mama Was So Cute

A salute to all Mamas

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Comment from Selina Stambi
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Hi nomi,

Your mother sounds like she was a beautiful, elegant lady.

What wonderful memories you must have.

I'm sure she would be proud of you.

Great rhyming quatrains.

Until next time,

Sonali

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2014


reply by the author on 27-Nov-2014
    Thank you so much on behalf of my late Mother and I. Your kind words are appreciated.
Comment from GWinterwin
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Good poem telling of the beauty of mama. Good word flow and rhyming along with words of truth, tell of the beauty of a woman from the past.

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2014


reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
    Thank you very much for your kind and encouraging comments.
Comment from godlucifer
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beauty is in the beauty of all things. once our beauty is passed on our beauty becomes significant in our life. your poem was touching to its beauty and it was amazingly amuse to its beauty. i enjoyed n reading your poem. thanks for the read. "your so vein" means mood or humor.

your so vein
godlucifer

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2014


reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
    Thank you, your comments touch me in a place not all comments are able to.
Comment from Irish Rain
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Wonderful tribute poem to your mother...your daughter is a lucky girl! My mom was a beauty...I took after my dad, ha ha...Scotch Irish through and through!

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2014


reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
    Fear not, there is beauty in all things and I do believe that we are all beautiful in our very own way. just as the words you used in your comments are indeed very beautiful.
Comment from Starlight's Edge
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Hi,
Nice poem.
I liked how you described your mother and how beautiful she was, and that your daughter shares the same characteristic.
The last stanza is an excellent way to conclude this tribute to your mother who is no longer with you.

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2014


reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
    It is my strong belief that anyone whodies and leaves offspring behind, continues to live through those children. In that way, long dead ancestors are still with us.
Comment from Ronni
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Truly gorgeous and heart stirring reflection of your Mama,
clearly a lady of beauty, grace and style! You, your
daughter and son, heir's apparent to such gift and
cherished legacy! Very delightful read and presentation.
Thanks for sharing...

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2014


reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
    Thank you for a heartwarming review.I loved your comments.
Comment from Eternal Muse
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This was so touching. Your mother was an exceptional woman and possessed this natural beauty. Many women dont like to give out their health secrets.

Enjoyed your easy rhymes and flow and the message.

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2014


reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
    Just as I enjoyed your wonderful review, thank you so much.
Comment from pattipac
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What a lovely tribute to your mother's memory. Our mothers are such an integral part of our lives from birth on that when they are no longer present in body, they remain in our memory and often in our children's faces.

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2014


reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
    Exactly, I see so many things in my children that remind me of my mother. Thank you for your comments.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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What a lovely poem dedicated to your lovely mother. Your pride pours out of your words, and now your daughter has the 'cute' looks to always remind you of your lovely mother. This was a really wonderful pleasure to read! :) Sandra xsx

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2014


reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
    Sandra, thank you so much for your wonderful comments. I appreciate your every word.
Comment from Veeb
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A beautiful, loving tribute to your mother. Do you think she'd be embarrassed by all the notoriety on FS? You have nicely structured your thoughts with a good balance of imagery and description. The tempo is a bit off in a couple of places, but I don't think it interferes with your intention. Nicely done. I enjoyed reading this.

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2014


reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
    Thank you for your kind observations. I appreciate your comments.