An addicts end reward part 2
Sometimes it takes death82 total reviews
Comment from thee-name
Good poem. About bad choices.
SO MANY DEMONS AND I SURE COULD USE AN ANGLE NOW.
IT'S GOTTEN OUT OF HAND AND IT'S STARTING TO DRAG ME DOWN
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2014
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Good poem. About bad choices.
SO MANY DEMONS AND I SURE COULD USE AN ANGLE NOW.
IT'S GOTTEN OUT OF HAND AND IT'S STARTING TO DRAG ME DOWN
Comment Written 19-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2014
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Thank you for your review
August
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THANK YOU!
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is an excellent write, crzypntr, you did an excellent job writing this poem about the drug addiction that lead to death and a better appreciation for life when given back, I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2014
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this is an excellent write, crzypntr, you did an excellent job writing this poem about the drug addiction that lead to death and a better appreciation for life when given back, I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2014
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Thank you for your kind review. I ask glad you enjoyed the poem
God b bless
August
Comment from patcelaw
I was an addict and I never knew
the facts
Until I saw the beauty of God, now I am
never going back
Congratulations on getting free and vowing to never go back. Addictions can be hard to overcome, but with the help of God all things are possible
Blessings, Pat
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2014
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I was an addict and I never knew
the facts
Until I saw the beauty of God, now I am
never going back
Congratulations on getting free and vowing to never go back. Addictions can be hard to overcome, but with the help of God all things are possible
Blessings, Pat
Comment Written 19-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2014
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Thank you for your kind review
God bless
August
Comment from ElPoetry001
Excellent, but sad.
Your poem was inspiring as what not to do.
Two men stand on a cliff, each prepared to dive into the water below, one wants to live and find fame and fortune; he is not afraid to die.
The second man is lonely, confused, and does not want to live; he is not afraid to die. He is afraid to live.
Think of the power of a man who has no fear of death, he will be strong, and invincible. No challenge will be refused, no reward will be squandered. He is willing to meet the Angel if Death, but he does not seek him out.
Giving up a life, is giving up. God gave man a life to build on, not put in the ground; dead bodies do not help man, or mankind.
Addicts must be embraced, and reinforced with the understanding and belief that every life is important, and must not be sacrificed. Tomorrow is a "do over," a clean slate, and a new beginning.
Reach out to all, for many will take your hand, your contribution will be rewarded, ". . .for what you do for the least of mine, you do for me."
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2014
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Excellent, but sad.
Your poem was inspiring as what not to do.
Two men stand on a cliff, each prepared to dive into the water below, one wants to live and find fame and fortune; he is not afraid to die.
The second man is lonely, confused, and does not want to live; he is not afraid to die. He is afraid to live.
Think of the power of a man who has no fear of death, he will be strong, and invincible. No challenge will be refused, no reward will be squandered. He is willing to meet the Angel if Death, but he does not seek him out.
Giving up a life, is giving up. God gave man a life to build on, not put in the ground; dead bodies do not help man, or mankind.
Addicts must be embraced, and reinforced with the understanding and belief that every life is important, and must not be sacrificed. Tomorrow is a "do over," a clean slate, and a new beginning.
Reach out to all, for many will take your hand, your contribution will be rewarded, ". . .for what you do for the least of mine, you do for me."
Comment Written 19-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2014
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Thank you for your great review
God bless
August
Comment from butterfly4265
This is so incredibly dark, deeply emotional and very moving. The flow, rhyming and progression are wonderfully written and the reader cannot help but feel the pain of the writer's total despair. Also, thank you for reminding the reader that addicts are still people who deserve our understanding, rather than our judgment. Very well done, and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2014
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This is so incredibly dark, deeply emotional and very moving. The flow, rhyming and progression are wonderfully written and the reader cannot help but feel the pain of the writer's total despair. Also, thank you for reminding the reader that addicts are still people who deserve our understanding, rather than our judgment. Very well done, and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2014
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Thank you for your kind review
God bless
August
Comment from alexisleech
Your heartfelt poem gives us so much insight into the way a person's life can be ruined so easily. Personally, I hold the dealers responsible, not the addicts. If no one had given them that first fix, they would never have gotten addicted. Well done for showing how it feels from the other side so well. Alexis x
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2014
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Your heartfelt poem gives us so much insight into the way a person's life can be ruined so easily. Personally, I hold the dealers responsible, not the addicts. If no one had given them that first fix, they would never have gotten addicted. Well done for showing how it feels from the other side so well. Alexis x
Comment Written 19-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2014
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Thank you for your kind review
August
Comment from Alan K Pease
Sometime addicts sustain their habit at the expense of others, but I admit they are mainly there because of bad choices. Excellent writing poetically expressed.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2014
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Sometime addicts sustain their habit at the expense of others, but I admit they are mainly there because of bad choices. Excellent writing poetically expressed.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2014
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Thank you for your wonderful review and the 6 star
God bless
August
Comment from JW
Unfortunately before reading this I had not read Part I. However, this tells an interesting story and with the way you wrote it could easily picture what was transpiring.
Not to mention, the message is very truthful.
Thanks for sharing this. JW
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2014
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Unfortunately before reading this I had not read Part I. However, this tells an interesting story and with the way you wrote it could easily picture what was transpiring.
Not to mention, the message is very truthful.
Thanks for sharing this. JW
Comment Written 19-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2014
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Thank you for your kind review
God bless
August
Comment from Adri7enne
Whatever works, I always think. I'm not into religion and Christianity, but I can see where that might work for some people. It's good to feel someone is on your side. Good for you if you've found some way to turn your life around.
You have some good rhymes and your rhythm works fine. Good luck and well done, crzypnter.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2014
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Whatever works, I always think. I'm not into religion and Christianity, but I can see where that might work for some people. It's good to feel someone is on your side. Good for you if you've found some way to turn your life around.
You have some good rhymes and your rhythm works fine. Good luck and well done, crzypnter.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2014
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Thank you for your review
August
Comment from Eternal Muse
This was so intense and so very good. The imagery is horror as nd it works very well. You actually describe your feelungs before the suicide and after. I liked that you saw God.
One nit:
I think you want to say that you CAN'T breathe when you feel pain in your lungs.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2014
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This was so intense and so very good. The imagery is horror as nd it works very well. You actually describe your feelungs before the suicide and after. I liked that you saw God.
One nit:
I think you want to say that you CAN'T breathe when you feel pain in your lungs.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2014
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Thank you for your kind review and comments.
August
