An addicts end reward part 2
Sometimes it takes death82 total reviews
Comment from Razz
Very beautifully written.
Wonderfully stated.
So full of raw emotions.
So pathetically sad...and then so wonderfully triumphant.
Great write.
Wonderful witness.
You are right about the bad choices but also most do become very bad while under the influence of such drugs.
Praise God you overcame it.
Razz
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2014
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Very beautifully written.
Wonderfully stated.
So full of raw emotions.
So pathetically sad...and then so wonderfully triumphant.
Great write.
Wonderful witness.
You are right about the bad choices but also most do become very bad while under the influence of such drugs.
Praise God you overcame it.
Razz
Comment Written 19-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2014
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Thank you for your kind review and comments
God bless
August
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You are most welcome.
And God bless you too.
Razz
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Great artwork and it works so well with your story of an addicts end. A very powerful and emotional write that puts the reader right their with the addict. Well done.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2014
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Great artwork and it works so well with your story of an addicts end. A very powerful and emotional write that puts the reader right their with the addict. Well done.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2014
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Thank you for that great 6 star review and comments
God bless
August
Comment from GWinterwin
Great poem here about addiction, good word flow and rhyming make it very clear. Yes God does not hate people, he just hates the bad things they do. Something that us other people have to learn to do.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2014
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Great poem here about addiction, good word flow and rhyming make it very clear. Yes God does not hate people, he just hates the bad things they do. Something that us other people have to learn to do.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2014
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Thank you for your kind review and comments.
God bless
August
Comment from kiwijenny
Ooooooo interesting take on things,,,
It reminds me of James 1:17
Every good gift and every perfect gift is from above, coming down from the Father of lights with whom there is no variation or shadow due to change.
Well written
God bless
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2014
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Ooooooo interesting take on things,,,
It reminds me of James 1:17
Every good gift and every perfect gift is from above, coming down from the Father of lights with whom there is no variation or shadow due to change.
Well written
God bless
Comment Written 19-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2014
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Thank you for your kind review and comments. Great passage
God bless
August
Comment from Pyrrho
For many of us; we recognize the concept of god as the ultimate addiction ... created by man's need to believe he, man,is more than a thought-free thing called life: DNA.
For the history and an understanding of such thinking, read "Genome" by Matt Ridley.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2014
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For many of us; we recognize the concept of god as the ultimate addiction ... created by man's need to believe he, man,is more than a thought-free thing called life: DNA.
For the history and an understanding of such thinking, read "Genome" by Matt Ridley.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2014
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Thank you for your kind review and comments of what to read.
God bless
August
Comment from Nosha17
Scary imagery, but glad that the message became more positive and showed that with God all things are possible and a life has been saved. Good use of rhyming and imagery to convey your thoughts. Enjoyable read, Faye
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2014
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Scary imagery, but glad that the message became more positive and showed that with God all things are possible and a life has been saved. Good use of rhyming and imagery to convey your thoughts. Enjoyable read, Faye
Comment Written 19-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2014
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Thank you for your kind comments. I am glad you enjoyed the write
God bless
August
Comment from Terror2s
This a very thought-provoking poem. Unfortunately, there are people that choose to escape that way. Thank you for sharing. The imagery and thoughts of the narrator were excellent. T2
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2014
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This a very thought-provoking poem. Unfortunately, there are people that choose to escape that way. Thank you for sharing. The imagery and thoughts of the narrator were excellent. T2
Comment Written 19-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2014
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Thank you for your review and kind comments. I am glad you enjoyed out
God bless
August
Comment from JPilcher
LOVE IT!!! This is even better than the 1st!!! The picture is phenomenal with this piece and every word flows beautifully!!!! Not a single thing to change - overal presentation totally deserves all 6 stars!!!!! <3 Jill P.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2014
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LOVE IT!!! This is even better than the 1st!!! The picture is phenomenal with this piece and every word flows beautifully!!!! Not a single thing to change - overal presentation totally deserves all 6 stars!!!!! <3 Jill P.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2014
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Thank you very much, as much this is due to our conversations. Awesome 6 star review. I Ann honored you enjoyed the poem
God bless
August
Comment from TAB_that's me
Your notes are so right - addicts aren't bad just their choices are. This is a wonderful part II about addiction.
~teresa~
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2014
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Your notes are so right - addicts aren't bad just their choices are. This is a wonderful part II about addiction.
~teresa~
Comment Written 19-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2014
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Teresa, Thank you for your kind review and comments
God bless
August
Comment from Ridley Williams
Hello Poet,
I was impressed with this gritty write about addiction. You present the facts of the matter in great detail, describing the pain and family frustration that follows this type of sad event.
I'm glad you found your way back and I agree with your premise that there are no bad people, only bad choices.
Well done with this theme, Bill
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2014
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Hello Poet,
I was impressed with this gritty write about addiction. You present the facts of the matter in great detail, describing the pain and family frustration that follows this type of sad event.
I'm glad you found your way back and I agree with your premise that there are no bad people, only bad choices.
Well done with this theme, Bill
Comment Written 19-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2014
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Thank you for your kind review and comments. I am glad you enjoyed the poem
God bless
August
