An addicts end reward part 2
Sometimes it takes death82 total reviews
Comment from rjpurdy
It is an awesome thing when God touches us and redeems our broken lives. The dignity and integrity of recovery is just one of Gods blessings in perhaps the toughest inner journey of our lives. Excellent!
~Peace & Grace~ Rod
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2014
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It is an awesome thing when God touches us and redeems our broken lives. The dignity and integrity of recovery is just one of Gods blessings in perhaps the toughest inner journey of our lives. Excellent!
~Peace & Grace~ Rod
Comment Written 20-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2014
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Thank you for your kind review
God bless
August
Comment from RGstar
This is different, but that is what writing is all about. All sides should be shown. All is not roses. The deepest sides of failure should also be depicted, in which that has been achieved here. The light, thankfully, usually finds away.
Best wishes,
RGstar
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2014
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This is different, but that is what writing is all about. All sides should be shown. All is not roses. The deepest sides of failure should also be depicted, in which that has been achieved here. The light, thankfully, usually finds away.
Best wishes,
RGstar
Comment Written 20-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2014
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Thank you for your kind review. I agree writing should be in all forms. Yes all is not roses
God bless
August
Comment from Wendyanne
Wow what a powerful and emotive piece of poetry. I could sense the pain oozing from the poem and the sense of peace as the poem ends,
Until I saw the beauty of God, now I am
never going back
Well done.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2014
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Wow what a powerful and emotive piece of poetry. I could sense the pain oozing from the poem and the sense of peace as the poem ends,
Until I saw the beauty of God, now I am
never going back
Well done.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2014
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Thank you for your kind review and comments
God bless
August
Comment from livelylinda
crzpnter: scary story. The cutting but not feeling the pain - my head just can't wrap around that. I'm glad that you are back and tend to stay here. You have much to offer the world. Strong writing. livelylinda
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2014
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crzpnter: scary story. The cutting but not feeling the pain - my head just can't wrap around that. I'm glad that you are back and tend to stay here. You have much to offer the world. Strong writing. livelylinda
Comment Written 20-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2014
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livelylinda, Thank you for your kind review
God bless
August
Comment from Bill Schott
This is one of those powerful, first-person poems that take the reader to the razor's edge with the author. We enter where the final act becomes only the final act before phasing into the a new and better existence.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2014
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This is one of those powerful, first-person poems that take the reader to the razor's edge with the author. We enter where the final act becomes only the final act before phasing into the a new and better existence.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2014
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Thank you for your kind review and comments
God bless
August
Comment from Just2Write
Sometimes the knowledge that there is a greater power that will provide for us when we need it most is comforting. The addict in your poem found peace in death - and in being shown the beauty in life, that had somehow escaped him when he had it.
Faith is a powerful healer, and a powerful asset for one's soul.
Rose.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2014
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Sometimes the knowledge that there is a greater power that will provide for us when we need it most is comforting. The addict in your poem found peace in death - and in being shown the beauty in life, that had somehow escaped him when he had it.
Faith is a powerful healer, and a powerful asset for one's soul.
Rose.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2014
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Thank you for your kind review and comment. Yes faith is the ultimate healer
God bless
August
Comment from harmony13
Excellent poem! This poem is well written and clearly states the journey of addiction. The words the author uses are strong, heart felt and descriptive. The poem is deep and thought provoking. The artwork is perfect and enhances the theme of this poem.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2014
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Excellent poem! This poem is well written and clearly states the journey of addiction. The words the author uses are strong, heart felt and descriptive. The poem is deep and thought provoking. The artwork is perfect and enhances the theme of this poem.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2014
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Thank you for your great review and comments
God bless
August
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
I view addictions as a desperate need to fill a gaping hole within the person - it takes time, but eventually everyone figures out that the thing they lack is God. There is no more powerful drug than the revelation that HE is all we need. This is beautifully penned and I thank you very much for sharing it with me.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2014
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I view addictions as a desperate need to fill a gaping hole within the person - it takes time, but eventually everyone figures out that the thing they lack is God. There is no more powerful drug than the revelation that HE is all we need. This is beautifully penned and I thank you very much for sharing it with me.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2014
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Thank you for your kind review and comments. Yes God is the ultimate healer
God bless
August
Comment from TOMORAL
Wow, as a recovering alcoholic I can feel this piece of poetry in my soul. I've felt your words in my heart and saw God myself. This is excellent writing.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2014
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Wow, as a recovering alcoholic I can feel this piece of poetry in my soul. I've felt your words in my heart and saw God myself. This is excellent writing.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2014
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Thank you for your wonderful review
God bless
August
Comment from Diny
I agree addicts are not bad people and make bad choices- we all do at times- I think you sort of left us hanging there- You say you died... and saw God- but then you are making amends?- how in heaven?- you don't say you are alive again... like you skipped a step-
Might think about putting in an addition verse there?
Write on-Di
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I agree addicts are not bad people and make bad choices- we all do at times- I think you sort of left us hanging there- You say you died... and saw God- but then you are making amends?- how in heaven?- you don't say you are alive again... like you skipped a step-
Might think about putting in an addition verse there?
Write on-Di
Comment Written 20-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2014
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Thank you for your review
