An addicts end reward part 2
Sometimes it takes death82 total reviews
Comment from PatVallesMangan
This is a well done poem about the life of an addict. Sometimes this is what it takes for the healing to begin. I am very glad that you have met God and embraced Him. The rhyme and rhythm work well as a background to this very dark story. You did a great job. I am glad that you share the hope with others. God Bless ~ Pat
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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This is a well done poem about the life of an addict. Sometimes this is what it takes for the healing to begin. I am very glad that you have met God and embraced Him. The rhyme and rhythm work well as a background to this very dark story. You did a great job. I am glad that you share the hope with others. God Bless ~ Pat
Comment Written 21-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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Thank you for your kind review and comments
God bless
August
Comment from Sanku
It is a very grim and sad poem throwing light into the mind of an addict.Regrets ,inability to go back and thankfully seeing God and never wanting to go back.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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It is a very grim and sad poem throwing light into the mind of an addict.Regrets ,inability to go back and thankfully seeing God and never wanting to go back.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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Thank you for your kind review
God bless
August
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a well written poem about a near death experience. It seems addicts are more dead than alive. At least to themselves. The picture shows the person at a crossroads in the middle of the bridge trying to choose the darkness or the light. Addiction or health.
I am glad you are better know. This poem shows how faith can keep a life moving toward the best.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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This is a well written poem about a near death experience. It seems addicts are more dead than alive. At least to themselves. The picture shows the person at a crossroads in the middle of the bridge trying to choose the darkness or the light. Addiction or health.
I am glad you are better know. This poem shows how faith can keep a life moving toward the best.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 21-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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Thank you for your kind review and comments
God bless
August
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No problem.
Joan
Comment from Simple Reflection
I love the words! The intensity and meaning spill out in ever line. I dont think every line reads as smoothly as they could. For instance, if i try to get the flow in the first couple of stanzas, the fourth stanza doesnt follow the same rhythm. Very touching though, i especially enjoyed the last two stanzas.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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I love the words! The intensity and meaning spill out in ever line. I dont think every line reads as smoothly as they could. For instance, if i try to get the flow in the first couple of stanzas, the fourth stanza doesnt follow the same rhythm. Very touching though, i especially enjoyed the last two stanzas.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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Thank you for your kind review and comments
God bless
August
Comment from chasennov
Sometimes it takes death "An addicts end reward part 2" Bad choices - bad ideas. I am not an empathiser of drug addicts and suicide contemplators, but it's your work that I'm interested in, not the condition. Well done.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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Sometimes it takes death "An addicts end reward part 2" Bad choices - bad ideas. I am not an empathiser of drug addicts and suicide contemplators, but it's your work that I'm interested in, not the condition. Well done.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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Thank you for your review
August
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You are most welcome, August.
Comment from Charlene0513
To crzypnter,
You have captured the reality of a drug addict that really doesn't know any where to turn than down.
The appalling feeling is dredged with deep wounds that your own reality could never comprehend.
It is nicely written and portrays the image of many that are lost in such a forbidden area of hopelessness.
Charlene
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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To crzypnter,
You have captured the reality of a drug addict that really doesn't know any where to turn than down.
The appalling feeling is dredged with deep wounds that your own reality could never comprehend.
It is nicely written and portrays the image of many that are lost in such a forbidden area of hopelessness.
Charlene
Comment Written 21-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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Thank you for your kind review and comments
God bless
August
Comment from tdragonfly
Perfect photo for the perfect poem. The life of an addict is a living hell here on earth. Sounds like you were given a second choice. And that you realize how great that is. I applaud you for being strong enough to over come your bad choice. Good luck in your new and clean life.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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Perfect photo for the perfect poem. The life of an addict is a living hell here on earth. Sounds like you were given a second choice. And that you realize how great that is. I applaud you for being strong enough to over come your bad choice. Good luck in your new and clean life.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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Thank you for your awesome review and 6 star
God bless
August
Comment from NadineM
It's so sad the depths an addict reaches. This sounds like you've been there and managed to make it back into the life of the living, not simply existing. So glad you felt God's healing Grace. Hoping life continues to reveal its beauty, inspiring you to seek more!
Thanks for sharing this with me.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2014
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It's so sad the depths an addict reaches. This sounds like you've been there and managed to make it back into the life of the living, not simply existing. So glad you felt God's healing Grace. Hoping life continues to reveal its beauty, inspiring you to seek more!
Thanks for sharing this with me.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2014
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Thank you for your kind review and comments
God bless
August
Comment from mermaids
Excellent use of words that shows the path of addiction. I like how finding God brings the addict to a better place. Excellent flow of lines and verses.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2014
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Excellent use of words that shows the path of addiction. I like how finding God brings the addict to a better place. Excellent flow of lines and verses.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2014
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Thank you for your kind review
God bless
August
Comment from donaldww
When I died I saw God, and Heis showingshowed me
After wondering "what it was like to really/feel the pain," the speaker "slid the razor deep" across his/her vein.
Then, after dying, the speaker has a revelation, and as a result, has "made amends to the people in" his past.
I assume this is to be read allegorically, and that the vision of God was some kind of realization that changed the speaker's life.
Cheers,
DW
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2014
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When I died I saw God, and He
After wondering "what it was like to really/feel the pain," the speaker "slid the razor deep" across his/her vein.
Then, after dying, the speaker has a revelation, and as a result, has "made amends to the people in" his past.
I assume this is to be read allegorically, and that the vision of God was some kind of realization that changed the speaker's life.
Cheers,
DW
Comment Written 20-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2014
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You would be correct on the realization of what he saw. Thank you for your review and comments
August
