Reality Face Debridement
Some rotten deeds sown in the past4 total reviews
Comment from LoannaLois
I love it when I can read and reread a poem and get so many different views of it. Your hard- to- do syllable count was spot - on.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2014
I love it when I can read and reread a poem and get so many different views of it. Your hard- to- do syllable count was spot - on.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2014
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Many thanks.
Comment from nelliesellie
I love the picture. I love the poem. We can not bury the past. Especially if it is bad. It will explode to the surface when we least expect it. We have to be mindful but forgiving of it. Great work.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2014
I love the picture. I love the poem. We can not bury the past. Especially if it is bad. It will explode to the surface when we least expect it. We have to be mindful but forgiving of it. Great work.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2014
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
This is an interesting take on the subject of empathy with grief. Forgiveness often plays an important part in overcoming grief. Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2014
This is an interesting take on the subject of empathy with grief. Forgiveness often plays an important part in overcoming grief. Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer
Comment Written 17-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2014
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Many thankful thoughts.
Comment from lakeport
Reality Face Debridement, indeed that's an emotional expressed poem. Good luck at the contest. God bless you. lakeport....
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2014
Reality Face Debridement, indeed that's an emotional expressed poem. Good luck at the contest. God bless you. lakeport....
Comment Written 17-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2014
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Most appreciated review, Thank you.
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you arte welcome,
could you please rview my poem "Hells Fire"
thank you,lakeport.