Texas Dream Catcher
Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "CHAPTER NUEVE; PART UNO"Drug & human trafficking, can romance win?
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Comment from Mary Ann MCPhedran
Thanks for sharing this chapter with. I enjoyed reading your story and I found no reason to suggest any changes The characters were lively and was a good read.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
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Thanks for sharing this chapter with. I enjoyed reading your story and I found no reason to suggest any changes The characters were lively and was a good read.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
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Comment from padumachitta
Hi-well,I think the dog will live, I hope he does.
Geez, she really is having a tough time, what the hell doe Home Land security want twith her.
I was reading along, happy Diego was doing ok...then bam, another smack in our girls face...please post more soon.
padumachitta
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
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Hi-well,I think the dog will live, I hope he does.
Geez, she really is having a tough time, what the hell doe Home Land security want twith her.
I was reading along, happy Diego was doing ok...then bam, another smack in our girls face...please post more soon.
padumachitta
Comment Written 20-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
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Comment from CALLAHANMR
Hi Barbara:}
Now all the threats to the Rockin' A ranch seem to be coming together at once. I am getting to the point where I don't trust any of the outsiders. I never trusted Miguel, who had an interest un Midnight and seemed more interested in the horse than Soni. Then there is Jim, who never wants to reveal personal information and has been shot near the ranch. Robert Hughes seems too ready to claim tha payote was used at the harvest celebration. Did he collect the incriminating photos or did they come from the same person who sent the threatening warning to Soni?
Now we have lots of questions, I'm ready for a few answers.
I noticed only one small nit"Naiyenesgani informed me you had problems. I've brought my healing bag." [The]Shaman held up his large buffalo-skin bag.{I think you need the article 'the' as indicated.}
As usual I offer love and Irish Hugs for energy,
Roger
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
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Hi Barbara:}
Now all the threats to the Rockin' A ranch seem to be coming together at once. I am getting to the point where I don't trust any of the outsiders. I never trusted Miguel, who had an interest un Midnight and seemed more interested in the horse than Soni. Then there is Jim, who never wants to reveal personal information and has been shot near the ranch. Robert Hughes seems too ready to claim tha payote was used at the harvest celebration. Did he collect the incriminating photos or did they come from the same person who sent the threatening warning to Soni?
Now we have lots of questions, I'm ready for a few answers.
I noticed only one small nit"Naiyenesgani informed me you had problems. I've brought my healing bag." [The]Shaman held up his large buffalo-skin bag.{I think you need the article 'the' as indicated.}
As usual I offer love and Irish Hugs for energy,
Roger
Comment Written 20-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
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Comment from Hareem.S
This is a good chapter and you have made good description of Diego's wound. The dialogues of the chapter are well medically informed. It was a pleasure to read it.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
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This is a good chapter and you have made good description of Diego's wound. The dialogues of the chapter are well medically informed. It was a pleasure to read it.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
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Comment from butterfly4265
Your writing has a very natural flow to it which I very much enjoy. You held my attention from start to finish and I am now very inclined to read more of this story. I did have to look up peyote though! Very well written and much enjoyed. Looking forward to more :-)
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
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Your writing has a very natural flow to it which I very much enjoy. You held my attention from start to finish and I am now very inclined to read more of this story. I did have to look up peyote though! Very well written and much enjoyed. Looking forward to more :-)
Comment Written 18-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
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Comment from Curly Girly
A sick dog, receives treatment from a doctor and an Indian's healing chant. I am sure this dog will pull through. But now Soni is being accused of using peyote. Pardon me, I forgot... What is peyote? A drug?
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
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A sick dog, receives treatment from a doctor and an Indian's healing chant. I am sure this dog will pull through. But now Soni is being accused of using peyote. Pardon me, I forgot... What is peyote? A drug?
Comment Written 18-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
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Yes, peyote is a very powerful drug.
Comment from rtobaygo
Hello
Clear, concise interaction between characters centered about past and present conflicts. Character motivation brings in the reader to witness unfolding events generated by the characters' motives.
Well done!
Take care and stay safe,
Ray
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
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Hello
Clear, concise interaction between characters centered about past and present conflicts. Character motivation brings in the reader to witness unfolding events generated by the characters' motives.
Well done!
Take care and stay safe,
Ray
Comment Written 18-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
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Comment from irishauthorme
This is absolutely the best chapter you have written to date. You portrayed the human emotions and reactions exactly as they would have happened. More than that, your words created pictures for us, allowing us to be right there, in the story. The flow was great, just the right speed. Your dialogue gave authority to your characters. Soni's love for her dogs made me want to read until I knew if Diego was going to live or die.
Very clear, succinct writing!
irish
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
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This is absolutely the best chapter you have written to date. You portrayed the human emotions and reactions exactly as they would have happened. More than that, your words created pictures for us, allowing us to be right there, in the story. The flow was great, just the right speed. Your dialogue gave authority to your characters. Soni's love for her dogs made me want to read until I knew if Diego was going to live or die.
Very clear, succinct writing!
irish
Comment Written 18-Nov-2014
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Comment from lindalcreel
Who would have sent the envelope to Mr. Hughes unless someone was still trying to set her up and make life difficult for her. I'm still thinking it's Miguel, who hasn't been around for awhile. I wonder if someone could have slipped the drugs to Soni without her knowledge. Guess we'll soon find out. I have a feeling Jim won't take this latest drama lying down.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
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Who would have sent the envelope to Mr. Hughes unless someone was still trying to set her up and make life difficult for her. I'm still thinking it's Miguel, who hasn't been around for awhile. I wonder if someone could have slipped the drugs to Soni without her knowledge. Guess we'll soon find out. I have a feeling Jim won't take this latest drama lying down.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
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My pleasure. I'm a little behind in my reading,but hope to catch up today.
Comment from Starlight's Edge
This was a very interesting chapter. It compelled me to want to read more.
You used the dialogue with just the necessary actions and descriptions to move the story forward. We'll see what will happen with Soni now that she is taking the blame of the situation.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
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This was a very interesting chapter. It compelled me to want to read more.
You used the dialogue with just the necessary actions and descriptions to move the story forward. We'll see what will happen with Soni now that she is taking the blame of the situation.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review.
