Comment from closetpoetjester

Exceptional

Oh Rovo you're a naughty boy
This back and forth, the hen's enjoy
But you were just our "little" toy
in spite of your belief

A self appointed raging bull
A bucking stallion brimming full
A cock for all us hens to pull
What ego mate, good grief!

You think you spurned? You should have learned
Most legs were crossed and backs were turned
Inspite of title you had earned
You barely gave relief

There wasn't any ecstasy
You've got your hand confused with me
I can't express this tactfully
No Cock will be MY Chief

So...

I do not need a farewell kiss
Or any goddamned more of this
I know I'd rather take the piss
Go pump that Texas beef!



All in fun, hun.
LOL

Great stuff. Nice to see you back. I'm sick of reading crap.

BTW I'm just keeping in theme with the banter canter.
Let me lay some six on you haha

P

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2014

Comment from Bryana

Exceptional

Hi my dear Rogue! So wonderful
to see you back, there's no other
rogue like you.
You came back with a beautiful poem,
I love it...
I love these lines...

But bless your hearts for all the darts
You've aimed and launched my way.

I hope your father is fine. Hus

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2014

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

Marillion Rogue David...you are back.....yay
Such a great thing to see....well written black and blue ...and white...it is well red. And made me green....and smile and yell-o He's back
God bless

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2014

Comment from flamingstar

Exceptional

Oh, that was great. Spoken like a true rogue, although it's usually the men who only see and think in black and white while us females process everything in shades of gray - my experience, anyway. An arresting write.

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2014

Comment from SteveY

Excellent

Great job with this one. Glad that you wrote it for all of us to ponder and enjoy. Love the message of seeing in black and white and grey.

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2014

Comment from Max Edon

Excellent

I loved the mystery of this poem. I wasn't quite sure what this poem was about. It was so dark, I thought it might be about a serial killer.

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2014

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

When checking out colors, look at the aura. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read.

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2014

Comment from butterfly4265

Excellent

I have certainly encountered my fair share of "men of gray" in my time.

I love it when inspiration just suddenly appears out of nowhere you and you just have to write it all down! The rhyming and flow are both excellent, with a strong and clear message. Very well written and much enjoyed. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2014

Comment from Eric1

Excellent

Hi David, great to have you back my friend, I wish I could write beautiful poems like this out of the blue, your presentation is stunning, as are the rhyme and the rhythm, the flow is exquisite, a wonderful poem all round.

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2014

Comment from thee-name

Excellent

Excellent poem. Romantic writing danced.
A PROPER ROGUE WOULD BE REMISS
IN PASSING UP A FAREWELL KISS

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2014