Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

Recovering can be a disappointment when all does not go your way. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2014

Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely week, Ine.

reply by c_lucas on 17-Nov-2014

You're welcome, Ine. Charlie

Comment from Dobson

Good

Just had a peek at your profile after your kind review about my poem. Sounds like you are having a tough time and this poem spells it out. The last line is very powerful! Good luck.

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 Comment Written 16-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2014

Thanks for your kind review. Have a great and blessed Sunday, Ine.

Comment from MizKat

Excellent

Hi Ine,

I think you did a great job in writing this poem, telling things about yourself. It was nice to read although I'm sorry that you have so much wrong with you. As I get older I'm losing my memory and other things.

Kat

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2014

Thanks for your kind review. Have a great and blessed Sunday, Ine. Sorry for you Kat.

Comment from nelliesellie

Exceptional

I can see why you picked the picture. Loss of communications Is really hard to get used to. I don't think you ever do. Health problems can drag you down. You never fully recover from one crisis before another hits you. It seems to go on and on for ever. Great work..

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2014

Thanks for your kind review. Have a great and blessed Sunday, Ine. Thanks for the gorgeous six.

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Oh no! You didn't lose your voice. It's still alive and well through your writing. You have gone through a lot it seems. Your poem reinforces an inward strength despite adversity.

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2014

Thanks for your kind review. Have a great and blessed Sunday, Ine.

Comment from trimple

Excellent

Hey, Ine

I am so sorry to hear of your health complications. But you know what they say...

What doesn't kill you makes you stronger :)
and you most certainly are just that. Your sense of humor is intact along with you wonderful ability at free verse.

Your husband, Robert sounds like a dream:)

Much love

trimple

hugs xxxx

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2014

Thanks for your kind review. Have a great and blessed Sunday, Ine. Yes, he is.

Comment from sebe

Excellent

a sad poem. honesty touches me deeply. I do not miss rhymes. I do not do rhymes myself. it is over valued in my opinion.

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2014

Thanks for your kind review. Have a great and blessed Sunday, Ine. Thanks for your encouragement.

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

I am sorry for your losses the last few years. May God be good to you and keep you in perfect peace. I hope you will be able to get back your poetry talents and be able to rhyme and use meter again, but if not then free verse tells a story
sometimes better than rhyming. Blessing, Pat

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 Comment Written 16-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2014

Thanks for your kind review. Have a great and blessed Sunday, Ine. Thanks Patricia.