Lost capacity
A poem, no specific form.28 total reviews
Comment from michaelcahill
You write very understandable words with feeling, sense and emotion. Keep writing and what was lost will return. You've been through so much, but you keep coming back. Very inspirational. Thank you, mikey
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
You write very understandable words with feeling, sense and emotion. Keep writing and what was lost will return. You've been through so much, but you keep coming back. Very inspirational. Thank you, mikey
Comment Written 20-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely last part of the week week, Ine
Comment from judiverse
You're like the Timex watch that takes a licking but keeps on ticking. You've had a lot of setbacks, but I still see your desire to fight back against them. Maybe you'll find your voice coming back in time. Sounds like your hubby is understanding. If you keep writing, that should help restore your powers. You've stated your situation so clearly, and we wish you all the best. judi
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
You're like the Timex watch that takes a licking but keeps on ticking. You've had a lot of setbacks, but I still see your desire to fight back against them. Maybe you'll find your voice coming back in time. Sounds like your hubby is understanding. If you keep writing, that should help restore your powers. You've stated your situation so clearly, and we wish you all the best. judi
Comment Written 19-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely last part of the week week, Ine
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You're welcome. Hope you are doing well. judi
Comment from Treischel
I must help a little bit to at least write about it, as you did here. Youve had as rough a go as anybody on the site. Yet here you are continuing on. Keep it coming.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
I must help a little bit to at least write about it, as you did here. Youve had as rough a go as anybody on the site. Yet here you are continuing on. Keep it coming.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely last part of the week week, Ine
Comment from misscookie
I understand you going through a storm. my dear you are not alone.
some are rougher them you guys, thank God your alive.
As for the blank mind now this I go through all the time. I say Gods what's my mind to rest. and those color are so bright it gives me hope to see things right
Take care.
Until next time.
Cookie
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2014
I understand you going through a storm. my dear you are not alone.
some are rougher them you guys, thank God your alive.
As for the blank mind now this I go through all the time. I say Gods what's my mind to rest. and those color are so bright it gives me hope to see things right
Take care.
Until next time.
Cookie
Comment Written 17-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2014
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Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely week, Ine
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You're very welcome. have a nice day, until next time.
Cookie
Comment from adewpearl
Ine, you express your frustrations with your assorted health concerns most effectively - I'm sorry you've had all of this to deal with. Brooke
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2014
Ine, you express your frustrations with your assorted health concerns most effectively - I'm sorry you've had all of this to deal with. Brooke
Comment Written 17-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2014
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Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely week, Ine.
Comment from Joan E.
I am so sorry you have experienced many severe losses in the last few years. I am proud of you to be willing to share your pain with us in poetry and to take the time to find such a fitting artwork. Take good care of yourself- Joan
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2014
I am so sorry you have experienced many severe losses in the last few years. I am proud of you to be willing to share your pain with us in poetry and to take the time to find such a fitting artwork. Take good care of yourself- Joan
Comment Written 17-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2014
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Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely week, Ine.
Comment from Ronni
Sorry to hear of all your lost capacities and woes
dear, but I must say, your 'voice' comes through
loud and clear in your poetic voice! You will never
loose that, your muse may feel down and not want
to write, but still you know you can, and your muse
will always return, it is a capacity no one can
alter or destroy. Yours...as long as and when you use it.
Love and blessings, Ronni
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2014
Sorry to hear of all your lost capacities and woes
dear, but I must say, your 'voice' comes through
loud and clear in your poetic voice! You will never
loose that, your muse may feel down and not want
to write, but still you know you can, and your muse
will always return, it is a capacity no one can
alter or destroy. Yours...as long as and when you use it.
Love and blessings, Ronni
Comment Written 16-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2014
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Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely week, Ine.
Comment from l.raven
HI Ine, you have written some great writes here...all of us have good and bad ones...I am so sorry you have so much going on...but thank God Robert is there for you...you are still with us...that is what counts...you are a talented lady...don't short yourself...Smile...Love ya Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2014
HI Ine, you have written some great writes here...all of us have good and bad ones...I am so sorry you have so much going on...but thank God Robert is there for you...you are still with us...that is what counts...you are a talented lady...don't short yourself...Smile...Love ya Linda xxoo
Comment Written 16-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2014
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Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely week, Ine.
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you are so very welcome...xxoo
Comment from Trybuck
So many of us take our health for granted until we get that Dr.'s report no one wants to get. You may not be able to write as you once did but at least you can still write and make sense.
Well done, Buck
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2014
So many of us take our health for granted until we get that Dr.'s report no one wants to get. You may not be able to write as you once did but at least you can still write and make sense.
Well done, Buck
Comment Written 16-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2014
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Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely week, Ine.
Comment from emrpoems
hope everything fall into place soon. Glad that you still have the ability to write and post on Fanstory. Rest and a proper diet is all you might need
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2014
hope everything fall into place soon. Glad that you still have the ability to write and post on Fanstory. Rest and a proper diet is all you might need
Comment Written 16-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2014
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Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely week, Ine.