White the World
a poem in rhyming couplets139 total reviews
Comment from angelface2
Yet another magical poem set to the perfect rhythm and rhymes. Lovely, Brooke. I really was behind on my reviewing. :>D Miss Sally
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2014
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Yet another magical poem set to the perfect rhythm and rhymes. Lovely, Brooke. I really was behind on my reviewing. :>D Miss Sally
Comment Written 16-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2014
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Miss Sally, I truly appreciate your thoughtful reviews :-) Brooke
Comment from marijmd
I guess the recent new snow fall has inspired these lovely words.
I love the pure the pearls and spared no expense part very dream like.
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I guess the recent new snow fall has inspired these lovely words.
I love the pure the pearls and spared no expense part very dream like.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2014
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Thank you so much, marijmd, for your most generous response to my poem :-) Brooke
Comment from victor 66
Very beautiful, Brooke. Growing up in MN, winters were longer than they are in PA. But whether it's winter in MN or here, I still get the call to go sledding or cross country skiing.
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Very beautiful, Brooke. Growing up in MN, winters were longer than they are in PA. But whether it's winter in MN or here, I still get the call to go sledding or cross country skiing.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2014
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Victor, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Kingsrookviii
Great fun with perfect rhyme. My first introduction to poetry, I believe, was my mom reading a poem to me. This jarred loose that memory for some reason. But, I am unsure why. It's strange, but this poem reminds me of that and the story of the kitten who lost his mittens, which was my favorite. I felt so bad for the poor little kitten! LOL Beautiful, Brooke, Take care. Bruce.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2014
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Great fun with perfect rhyme. My first introduction to poetry, I believe, was my mom reading a poem to me. This jarred loose that memory for some reason. But, I am unsure why. It's strange, but this poem reminds me of that and the story of the kitten who lost his mittens, which was my favorite. I felt so bad for the poor little kitten! LOL Beautiful, Brooke, Take care. Bruce.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2014
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Bruce, thank you so much. I'm so glad this brought back such lovely memories :-) I truly appreciate your generous six stars :-) Brooke
Comment from Trybuck
Woeful winter strikes with ease
Making children cough and sneeze
Some say, why he's just a tease
But I don't like paying his fees
But that's another poem for another day. Yours was absolutely beautiful from beginning to end. Well done, Buck
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Woeful winter strikes with ease
Making children cough and sneeze
Some say, why he's just a tease
But I don't like paying his fees
But that's another poem for another day. Yours was absolutely beautiful from beginning to end. Well done, Buck
Comment Written 16-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2014
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Thanks so very much, Buck - I just love your poetic and entertaining reviews :-) Brooke
Comment from Zinnia48
I am looking out my window at our first major snow storm while reading this poem. It is a magical description of a magical event. My favorite line is the first one: "white the world!" Caroline
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2014
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I am looking out my window at our first major snow storm while reading this poem. It is a magical description of a magical event. My favorite line is the first one: "white the world!" Caroline
Comment Written 16-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2014
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Caroline, thank you so much for your generous six stars and thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from sibhus
Great images of a winter wonder land. I like the lines about winters wand. At time it really does seem like some one merely waves a wand and the landscape is covered in a blanket of fleecy snow. A wonderful poem, Brooke.
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Great images of a winter wonder land. I like the lines about winters wand. At time it really does seem like some one merely waves a wand and the landscape is covered in a blanket of fleecy snow. A wonderful poem, Brooke.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2014
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sibhus, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from muezza56
I really enjoyed reading this well crafted beautiful poem, it was as smooth as freshly fallen snow. great choice of accompanying pic compliments this poem really well, thank you
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I really enjoyed reading this well crafted beautiful poem, it was as smooth as freshly fallen snow. great choice of accompanying pic compliments this poem really well, thank you
Comment Written 16-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2014
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thank you so much, muezza :-) Brooke
Comment from Joan E.
I cheered at your using "White" as a verb, along with your alliteration and rhythmic, rhymed couplets. Try to stay warm amid the Arctic Vortex- Joan
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I cheered at your using "White" as a verb, along with your alliteration and rhythmic, rhymed couplets. Try to stay warm amid the Arctic Vortex- Joan
Comment Written 16-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2014
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Joan, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Love the artwork as the big eyes peep our at the winter wonderland. Love the alliteration in this poem- where the Winter's waved her wand and pure the pearls. We don't get winter as such here in Townsville but you make it sound magical in these verses.
valda
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2014
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Love the artwork as the big eyes peep our at the winter wonderland. Love the alliteration in this poem- where the Winter's waved her wand and pure the pearls. We don't get winter as such here in Townsville but you make it sound magical in these verses.
valda
Comment Written 16-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2014
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valda, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
